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PONE-D-20-35549 Willingness to Help Climate Migrants: A Survey Experiment in Bangladesh PLOS ONE Dear Dr. prakash, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers raise serious concerns about the paper. While Reviewer 1 has serious doubts and cannot recommend an invitation to revise, Reviewer 2 is more positive. My own reading is closer to Reviewer 2, which is why I would like to invite you to revise and resubmit the paper. I would like to stress that the changes necessary to make the paper publishable are significant. In particular, I would like you to * sharpen the theoretical expectations by engaging more closely with the literature on ‘climate migrants’ * better motivate case selection and discuss issues of external validity * enhance internal validity by doing appropriate balance tests and address attrition issues * improve the presentation of findings along the lines suggested by the Reviewers Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 30 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PONE-D-20-35549 Willingness to Help Climate Migrants: A Survey Experiment in Bangladesh My general assessment is that the paper contains an interesting idea, which unfortunately has been executed poorly and unconvincingly. In particular, I have some serious concerns regarding the lack of theory and the insufficient execution of the empirical analysis, in particular the survey experiment. This paper needs a lot of work in many areas. I have suggested some but do not feel that a revise and resubmit is appropriate. Specific comments Title: I wonder whether the results could be generalized to other slums in Dhaka, let alone to the country as a whole. The title does not even mention that the focus of this study is on a Dhaka slum, and thereby implicitly suggests a broader applicability of the findings at the national level. Hence, given that there is not much in the paper to suggest the findings are more widely applicable, the title should probably be adjusted accordingly. Abstract: I find the conclusion in the abstract regarding the implications of the findings for support for global policy agendas a little fuzzy and somewhat farfetched, especially, since the main document does not deduce these implications from the empirical evidence. Introduction The introduction contains several statements that need better elaboration and/or justification. For instance it is not clear how this paper “…speaks [theoretically] to the broader issue of public support for global policy agendas” (ll. 73-75), when the paper empirically addresses citizens support for a local humanitarian organization aiming at providing health services to ‘climate’ migrants. Furthermore, it is not clear why citizens’ perception in less developed countries of climate change as an elite ‘western’ issue could lead to their lack of support to non-governmental climate action (ll. 83-85). The authors cite Rigaud et al (2018) to emphasize the effects of climate on future migration flows (ll. 88-90). Given that the focus of the paper is on Bangladesh, the authors could instead mention the Rigaud et al study, which contains a sub- chapter on Bangladesh and estimates that climate induced migration will outpace other internal migrations and predicts that 13.3 million people will be force to move by 2050 under the pessimistic reference scenario. Furthermore, while it is stated that “…[Dhaka] is expected to increase to about 50 million by 2050” (l.95; also a reference is needed here), the Rigaud et al study predicts that climate change will dampen population growth in urban areas such as Dhaka and the river delta south of the city, which will constitute ‘climate’ outmigration hotspots. The authors state: “Dhaka is the most densely populated city in the world, and the living conditions in Dhaka slums are getting worse as new refugees arrive, about 2,000 a day [The Gardian (15)]” (ll. 95-97). However, it seems that the authors have misquoted the article in the Guardian, since it never mentions ‘climate refuges’, and simply states: “Every day, another 2,000 people move to the Bangladeshi capital. It’s nothing new – for generations Dhaka has been a magnet for those escaping rural poverty – but now climate change is accelerating the race to the city”. The authors distinguish between three types of migrants, namely ‘religiously persecuted’ ‘climate’, and ‘generic’ (ll. 103-109). While the two first categories could be easily –relatively speaking- defined, the generic one needs to be clarified. That is, what exactly does this category include? Only people, who moved in search for better jobs, economic and educational opportunities as well as standards of living? Or also people, who moved in order to save their lives from political/religious persecution as well as natural disasters? (more on this below) It is not clear what type of migration the authors study. On the one hand, they talk about climate migrants moving to Dhaka (internal migration) and on the other, refugees from neighbouring Myanmar (Rohingyas) fleeing to Dhaka (international/cross boarder migration) (ll. 103-109). However, in the ‘persecuted migrants treatment’, the Rohingyas are never mentioned and as a result, the respondents were never treated to this specific type of migration (ll. 598-6006). (more on this below) Migration and Climate Change The authors do not need to discuss the debate about ‘who counts as a climate migrant (ll.129-141), this debate is well known in the literature. Furthermore, they chose to use the term ‘climate change migrant’ instead of ‘climate refugee’ due to the latter’s contested nature (ll.140-141). Unfortunately, the term “climate migrant” is also problematic since it implies the “pull” of the destination more than the “push” of the source region and carries negative connotations, which reduce the implied responsibility of the international community for their welfare. I believe that the authors should use the term ‘environmental migrant’, which was put forward by IOM in 2007 and is widely used in the relevant literature. That is, “Environmental migrants are persons or groups of persons who, predominantly for reasons of sudden or progressive change in the environment that adversely affects their lives or living conditions, are obliged to leave their habitual homes, or choose to do so, either temporarily or permanently, and who move either within their country or abroad”. In describing the vulnerability of Bangladesh to climatic changes (ll. 142-150), the authors should use better and more recent references such as the ND-GAIN country Index or the Climate Change Vulnerability Index as well as the Groundswell Report (2018). The authors state: “Hence, we examine whether Dhaka’s slum dwellers are willing to financially support climate migrants who have joined their community” (ll.158-160). However, a donation to a humanitarian organization, which provides only healthcare services, does not qualify as ‘financial support’ to climate migrants. Overall, I miss a theoretical argument why “Survey respondents will be more willing to support climate migrants in relation to generic migrants” (H1, LL.183-184), and “Respondents will be less willing to support Rohingyas in relation to generic migrants” (H2, l.204). Especially since the authors state contradictory arguments: on the one hand, respondents might be will to support climate migrants due to empathy (ll.161-165), and on the other, they might not be willing to support them due to competition over scarce public services such as health (ll. 172-174). The authors hence need to develop the arguments more thoroughly, thereby directing the reader to the hypotheses that are tested afterwards. In addition, the survey experiment is not appropriate for testing H2 since it did not explicitly mention the Rohingyas, but rather people who were displaced by religious violence! Methodology Selection of the survey site: The survey took place in the Korail slum in Dhaka. Given that Dhaka city has more than 3,300 slums (inhabited by an estimated 6.5 million people), a justification of the selection of this site is needed in order for the findings to be generalized to other slums and to allow for the conclusions the authors reach regarding the lack of support for global policy agendas. In other words, would the authors obtain similar results if they conducted their survey experiment in, say, the Sattola slum instead? Both Korail and Sattola are established slums in the North Dhaka City Corporation, situated beside elite, residential areas of Dhaka city, where land prices are high and there is high potential for urban development. However, in Korail slum, about 47% slum dwellers obtain medical service from NGOs, which is much higher compared to the Sattola slum dwellers where only 33% get medical services from NGOs. In addition, while many Korail dwellers have been relocated there due to major eviction drives in other Dhaka slums (Korail has never fallen victim to evictions owing to its strong political backing), in Sattola most migrants come from different disaster-prone and river-eroded areas such as the northern chars and the coastal belt. Selection of respondents: the reader should know more about the procedure and criteria how respondents were selected. E.g. did the data collection cover the entire Korail slum or only specific neighbourhoods (which ones)? was cluster sampling used? The authors, hence, need to describe better the survey design. I know how challenging it is to reach and interview people especially in challenging locations, such as Bangladesh. I do not mean to imply that one needs to have the same level of sophistication in sampling procedures as we would expect from survey research in OECD countries. However, it is important to communicate just how the sample was constructed, beyond and above, showing that it is balanced in sex and closely matches national averages in religion and occupation. Frame experiment (Appendix S1) Generic Frame: the ‘generic frame’ includes ‘people, who for a variety of reasons are forced to leave their homes and move to other areas in search for a better future or a safer place’ (ll. 589-591). However, this category of migrants presents severe identification problems for the frame experiment, since it is not mutually exclusive from the other two categories of migrants. Take for instance the ‘climate’ migrant frame: since, it is extremely difficult to disentangle the environmental from the economic reason of migration, it is possible that for many respondents the ‘generic’ frame contains also climate induced migration. Furthermore, and perhaps more importantly, the ‘generic’ frame contains information, i.e., “They are in urgent need of humanitarian assistance.” (l. 592), which is missing in the two treatment frames. This information makes the ‘generic’ frame much stronger than the two treatment frames, affecting hence the responses and the empirical results. ‘Persecuted Migrants Treatment’: given that ‘persecuted migrants treatment’ never mentioned the Rohingyas, it is very likely that the respondents perceived the ‘religious violence’ to apply to the domestic religious/ethnic minorities. In Bangladesh, even though the government publicly supports(ed) freedom of religion, still Hindu, Christian, and Buddhist minorities experience(d) discrimination and sometimes violence from the Muslim majority. Hence, it is not surprising that the survey respondents, who are mostly Muslims (98%), would not support giving to a charity that aims at helping these minority groups. ‘Climate Migrants Treatment’: the authors state that heavy flooding is associated with climate change (ll. 610). Why? Bangladeshis know that the monsoon season always brings heavy rainfall to the country, which is critical for replenishing water supplies and helps farmers, but it can also cause great damage! Furthermore, the mentioning of climate change might lead to biased responses, as rightly the authors point out (ll. 293-297). Results The authors need to discuss the possibility that the ‘high willingness to donate’ observed in their data ((ll.274-282)) might be due to social desirability bias. The interpretation of the finding of low support for climate migrants is quite superficial (ll.287-292). There are also some contradictions. For instance, they authors attribute the low probability of giving to the ‘persecuted migrants’ (i.e., Rohingyas) to the media and the Bangladesh government, which have perpetuated harmful narratives about these migrants (ll. 301-305), even though they do not find any support for the conditioning effect of media consumption! (ll. 312-317). Conclusion A large part of this section is quite unrelated to the research question of this paper and confusing (ll. 347-379). Reviewer #2: This manuscript sets out to investigate the preferences of slum dwellers in Dhaka, Bangladesh regarding three categories of migrants: generic migrants, climate migrants, and religiously-persecuted refugees. Specifically, the researchers embedded a survey experiment in a survey of 1,800 respondents. Respondents were provided vignettes about a fictitious humanitarian group seeking to raise funds for migrants who were randomly described as belonging to one of the three categories above. Respondents were then asked whether they were willing to donate funds to support the charity. The authors find high levels of support for willingness to contribute funds when the migrants in question were generic migrants: 86 percent of this treatment arm agreed to support the humanitarian charity. Against expectations, support plummeted for climate migrants (61 percent) as well as for religiously persecuted migrants (77 percent). Overall, this is a nicely conceptualized and executed study, and it contributes to scholarly knowledge in an important domain where empirical research is scarce. Nevertheless, I would urge the authors to address the following questions and suggestions: 1. The manuscript could do more to theoretically motivate its predictions regarding climate migrants (H1) and its interpretations of the empirical tests of H1. The authors argue that poor Dhaka residents should theoretically be more in favor of climate migrants since the Bangladeshi government has prioritized climate change and has highlighted the plight of climate refugees in the past. That government actions shape citizen preferences is a plausible conjecture. At the same time, the literature on migration (both cross-border and internal) has clearly identified economic competition to be an important predictor of nativist preferences toward migrants. Both job market competition and fiscal pressures (e.g., competition for public housing, education, employment, etc.) can lead locals to oppose the entry of migrants. Climate migrants are likely a special category of migrants, since presumably they are permanent migrants who have little ability to return to their “homes.” Hence, they might produce pronounced economic threats to locals. By contrast, it is quite possible that generic migrants are conceptualized as temporary or seasonal migrants (or at the very least not as permanently dependent on the welfare state in Dhaka as climate migrants). In this theoretical light, the pronounced opposition to climate migrants (compared to the generic migrants) that the manuscript documents might appear to be quite reasonable and rational. These are the types of migrants who plausibly pose the starkest economic threats to the poor slum-dwellers in the study’s sample. I encourage the authors to discuss and probe this possibility, both theoretically and in their analysis of the results. One idea would be to analyze whether the treatment effects vary by respondents’ household monthly incomes. 2. The manuscript should do more to interpret the “willingness to donate” outcome measure that is used in all of the primary analyses. Since this is a self-reported measure that does not have a behavioral component (i.e., an observed measure of how much subjects would have actually donated if given the option), it is a bit unclear how readers should interpret this measure. Clearly, the baseline levels of professed support are very high. Given the low socio-economic status of the sample, it is unlikely that such a high proportion of respondents (75 percent across all treatment arms) would in reality donate funds to charities. Are the authors concerned about survey response bias? Of particular concern is the possibility that survey response bias is lower for religiously persecuted migrants and climate migrants, which may explain why subjects are more willing to deny donating funds to support these particular types of migrants. The authors could comment on these possibilities and ideally offer some kinds of empirical evidence to explore and rule them out. More broadly, the manuscript would be stronger if it provided guidance to readers on how to interpret the self-reported willingness to pay measure. 3. The manuscript repeatedly describes the frame regarding religiously persecuted migrants as the Rohingya frame. In Appendix S1, however, the “Persecuted Migrants Treatment” does not appear to specifically mention that these migrants are Rohingya migrants. Of course, in the Bangladesh context the Rohingya are indeed the main type of religiously persecuted migrants. But if the treatment frame did not use the term Rohingya, it is not immediately clear that respondents would have assumed that the migrants in the survey vignette were Rohingya. It is fine if the authors want to retain the Rohingya terminology, but they should make clear to readers their rationale for doing so and explain why respondents would likely not have considered any other types of religiously persecuted migrants in this context. 4. Because the manuscript limits its analysis to only those respondents (1,443 of the 1,800) who correctly answered three comprehension questions, it ends up dropping subjects in what appears to be an unbalanced manner (see p. 12). Appendix S3 presents summary statistics of key variables but does not present formal statistical tests of balance. I would recommend presenting formal tests of balance. If unbalanced, it may make sense to present the results in the appendix of all of the primary analyses utilizing the full sample in the study. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-35549R1 Willingness to help climate migrants: A survey experiment in the Korail Slum of Dhaka, Bangladesh PLOS ONE Dear Dr. prakash, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you notice, the reviewers are more positive about your manuscript following your revisions. I agree with them but insist that you resubmit a revised paper addressing their remaining comments and concerns. Especially Reviewer 2 has some important questions that need to be addressed. Specifically, you should back up your assumptions about how individuals learn about policy positions of their government regarding climate migrants. Furthermore, you should check your survey for cues from respondents in the control group about what they think when thinking about migrants in general. This would help further increase the validity of your study. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: This is a strong revision and I would be delighted to see this research published, pending a few minor revisions listed below. I paid particular attention to the author(s)’ responses to the prior referee reports, and to their alterations of the manuscript to reflect their adjustments to critiques. In particular, the theoretical framework in the revised manuscript is considerably strengthened, the link between theory and empirics is more focused, and the empirical evidence remains robust to the different sensitivity checks that the author(s) have now introduced. Overall, I am impressed by the constructive revisions undertaken by the author(s) and see the author(s) as admirably responsive to the prior concerns raised in review. Minor revisions: 1. In l.106 “especially if it involves citizens to incur private costs” would read better as “especially if it involves citizens incurring private costs.” 2. In response to R1’s excellent comments, the author(s) now address the issue of religious similarities and differences between the migrants and respondents quite extensively in the manuscript, noting that the Rohingya share the same Islamic faith as the majority of Bangladeshis (e.g., p.10), that respondents would likely not have associated the migrants with religious minorities like Hindus (p.12), and that respondents could have been expected to be “sympathetic to their co-religionists” (p.14, l.304). In neighboring India, which is frequently referenced in the manuscript, existing public opinion work shows that city residents belonging to the majority religious group (in the Indian case, Hindus) do not discriminate again rural-to-urban migrants based on religious profiles. Instead, residents from the dominant religious group appear to care mainly about the economic impact of migration. This is in fact consistent with what the author(s) find in the Bangladesh context: slum residents do not appear to heed religious concerns in responding to migration. The manuscript would be strengthened by citing and referencing these points as it would link the manuscript to broader debates in comparative politics. Citation: Gaikwad, N. and Nellis, G. (2017), “The Majority‐Minority Divide in Attitudes toward Internal Migration: Evidence from Mumbai.” American Journal of Political Science, 61: 456-472. 3. In l.343, the sentence is missing a closed parenthesis mark. Overall, I continue to believe that this manuscript tackles a very important subject, and I expect it to foreshadow new work on climate change and migration. Reviewer #3: Review of: Willingness to Help Climate Migrants: A Survey Experiment in Bangladesh This paper examines individuals’ willingness to provide assistance to climate migrants as compared to other types of migrants by means of a survey-embedded experiment conducted in a slum in Dhaka. The paper is well-written and addresses an important and very timely question. I believe that this study can make a contribution to the literature after addressing the issues below. Theory I think the authors need to provide a more specific discussion of the mechanism(s) underlying their main hypothesis, especially “H1: Survey respondents will be more willing to support climate migrants in relation to generic migrants.” The arguments that the authors provide (line 222: “extensive focus on climate change in media and the strong advocacy by the Bangladesh government in global forums”) are based on the assumption that citizens of Korail slum take their cues from the media and policymakers and will formulate their willingness to support (climate) migrants accordingly. However, this not only requires that slum residents have access to these specific information, but are also well-informed about what their national politicians advocate in global policy arenas. I think the authors could expend more efforts to provide more micro-level arguments as to why they think climate migrants might be perceived in more favorable lights than other (generic) migrant types. Methodology My main issue with this manuscript is the design of the generic frame. The problem is that the lack of a specific driver of migration in this frame introduces the possibility for survey respondents to think about all sorts of migrant type, including climate migrants as well as both domestic and international migrants. I think this heterogeneity, but more importantly, the impossibility to identify what type of migrant the respondent is thinking about when answering whether they’d like to help that group of migrants, makes it very hard to interpret the outcome variable itself. What is the level of support we are benchmarking support for climate migrants against? We know from the literature that different types of migrants are seen in very different ways (as this manuscript also argues). Therefore, it is important to know how individuals perceive climate migrants compared to other (specific) types of migrants. I wonder whether the authors asked some open-ended questions about what types of migrants (or general thoughts) the respondents had in mind after reading the frames. This may give us some hint about the type of migrant (and potential biases/associations) people had in mind when reading the respective treatment text. At the least, this shortcoming should be addressed in greater detail in the manuscript. I have two concerns with the way that the outcome variable was formulated. First, the reference “a typical family spent about 1,500 takas on medicine last month” may have exacerbated social desirability bias, since it conveys the information that compared to what a typical family spends on healthcare, 100 takas are not much. Second, the way that this question is formulated, I wonder whether it may also have tapped into people’s support for NGOs more generally rather than just capturing people’s support for the specific migrant group described in the treatment text. As an additional comment, I am curious why the authors did not use a continuous variable by asking respondents how much of the 100 takas they’d be willing to donate. The authors discuss how much the average Bangladeshi household spends on healthcare. Is this the same amount that the average slum resident in Korail spends on healthcare? In general, I would like to hear more about in what way the survey site (the Korail slum) differs from other slums, or the country. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Willingness to help climate migrants: A survey experiment in the Korail Slum of Dhaka, Bangladesh PONE-D-20-35549R2 Dear Dr. prakash, I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication. Both reviewers are satisfied with the changes you made to respond to their concerns. I recommend that you still incorporate the minor suggestions from Reviewer 3. Your manuscript will then be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. 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With regards to point 3, however, I remain concerned about the formulation of the generic frame (and the non mutual exclusiveness of the treatment and generic frame), but also appreciate the fact that this the survey experiment has already been conducted and that there is no room for changes of the experimental design at this stage. I would have, however, welcomed a more critical self-reflection in the discussion. Another minor point: In addition to the Helbling study the authors have identified, there is another study on the perception of environmental migrants in Vietnam and Kenya (Spilker et al;. 2020: Attitudes of urban residents towards environmental migration in Kenya and Vietnam), which might be even more relevant to this study given the geographical scope of the paper. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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