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PONE-D-20-23589 Deep learning classification of lipid droplets in quantitative phase images PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sheneman, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Especially, the reviewers suggest to show the performance of the proposed method under varying illumination conditionals or magnification rate and also strongly recommend sharing the data on public repository as required by PLOS One too to improve reproducibility of the work. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 10 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Reviewer’s comment The authors reported the application of deep-learning in recognizing and localizing lipid droplets (LDs) directly in quantitative-phase images of yeast cells without staining. The purpose is to improve the discriminatory power and the specificity of LD localization in single living cells by Quantitative Phase Image (QPI) analysis. It also aims to address the deficiency of the existing method of coupled deconvolution- and correlation-based post-processing schemes, which is computationally costly thus not suitable for automated high-throughput QPI image processing. To address the problem, the authors applied the Deep Neural Networks, the Random Forest and the Gradient Boosting algorithms to the Binary classification of image pixels for image segmentation and LD localization. They performed experiments on QPI image datasets and demonstrated that the Deep Neural Network model outperformed the other two methods with significantly improved accuracy in LD classification and reduced computation time. The manuscript was well written and the figure quality is good. Here are a number of questions to be made clear, 1. Over the past decades, numerous computer algorithms have been developed for solving image segmentation and object recognition problems (Pal et al. 1993, Zhao et al. 2019). It has been reported that the standard decision tree algorithm and its extensions performed not so well when compared to artificial neural network models on image recognition tasks. As the authors were training binary classifier models at single pixel level on the QPI image dataset, it might be reasonable to know if the simpler neural network models, such as Support Vector Machines (SVMs) or Fisher’s Discriminant Analysis (FDA), can simply perform equally well or even better than the Deep Neural Network model for LD identification? 2. Will the developed method also be applicable to LD pattern recognition under high noise background when cell debris, cell clump or other small particles are present in the imaging field of view? Can the method perform well under varied conditions of illumination and scale/magnification rate of microscopic imaging? 3. The section of introduction on Decision tree and ensemble leaning algorithms is redundant and can be moved to Supplementary method. The description of these algorithms can be found in the textbook of Machine Learning course. Instead, a more detailed introduction on the training process of U-net, including the pre-processing steps of the QPI image data by the authors, shall be presented mathematically by standard. 4. A Receiver Operating Characteristic Curve plot with calculated Area Under Curve (AUC) score will be informative for taking a fair comparison on the performance of the algorithms used for LD localization. 5. A cartoon diagram similar to Figure 1 in paper Reference 53 will be help people to better understand the experiment and data processing workflow of this study. Finally, I recommend that the paper should be accepted for publication after all these questions are cleared. Reference Pal, N. R., & Pal, S. K. (1993). A review on image segmentation techniques. Pattern recognition, 26(9), 1277-1294. Zhao, Z. Q., Zheng, P., Xu, S. T., & Wu, X. (2019). Object detection with deep learning: A review. IEEE transactions on neural networks and learning systems, 30(11), 3212-3232. Reviewer #2: Deep learning classification of lipid droplets in quantitative phase images In this paper, the author explored using machine learning method to identify lipid droplets in QPIs. Though I’m not familiar with lipid droplets’ functions in biology, according to author’s introduction, it’s a very critical topic in bio molecular. In this work, the author prepared and labeled training dataset, a group of images with lipid droplets in it. Author explored two major methods on this dataset: decision tree and CNN (U-NET). According to author’s experiment, CNN outperformed decision tree. Overall, it’s a very interesting article. If the dataset is public available and author could address below comments, I think it’s a solid work to publish. Major comments: In this work, the author only conducted experiments on a one-time split train/test samples. A more robust and standard results could be obtained by conducting a N-fold cross-validation experiment. This will give more convincing results. Thus, I’m requesting the author to conduct a 5- or 10-fold cross-validation experiment on all 3 models. Is the dataset public available? I was unable to find a link to it in this article. For CV work, I believe the dataset is critical to reproduce and verify the work. “The library consists of two Y. lipolytica strains, Po1g and MTYL038..” What’s the difference of these two strains in terms of appearing in pictures? In the training data labeling, did author label them differently or mark both of them just as positive pixels? Minor comments: Can user give the number of trainable parameters in this U-net? “We sequentially preprocess every image in our training set in this way and flatten our internal 3D representation of the training set data with extracted per-pixel features into a long 2D array” Can you add the shape size of each sample into the article? I think it should be [m*n, 80]? Supporting Information Figure 2 is actually a table. Why not prepare it as an Excel file such that other researchers can easily query? Right now, the pic resolution is very low and hard to check. Also, maybe add another column in which author can list Python package you are using for each feature. In CNN training, does author use any data augmentation approaches? It’s a very commonly used method in CV. If author used it, may need to mention it explicitly. “As such, QPI is not compatible with automated high-throughput image processing in LD localization LDs, with the exception of coupled deconvolution- and correlation-based post-processing schemes, albeit at increased computational resource requirements and error-rates [53].” […in LD localization LDs…], not sure what does it mean. “These stored machine learning models can also be inspected to report metadata such as relative feature importance (Sup. Fig. 2).” Which approach did author use to calculate the feature importance in this Sup. Fig.? ********** 6. 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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have fully addressed all the questions. The paper is sutiable to be accepted for publication. Reviewer #2: In this revised version, the author thoroughly addressed all major comments in our previous comments. Thanks the author for carefully responding. Also, they give the source of the data and model they used in this research, which is very convincing. I don't have more requests and I suggest editor to accept this research paper. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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