Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 18, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-39802 Intensive versus less-intensive antileukemic therapy in older adults with acute myeloid leukemia: a systematic review PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Brignardello-Petersen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process by Reviewer #2. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 27 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present a comprehensive meta-analysis of studies collected through literature in Medline, Embase and CENTRAL to compare the safety and effectiveness of intensive and less-intensive antileukemic therapies in acute myeloid leukemia. The information of the studies and the statistical approaches are extremely well described along the methods and manuscript. The study contains useful information for the readers and the clinical community. In the future it would be great to have a similar analysis accounting for the genetic background of the patients and how it might impact the response to therapies. I consider this manuscript relevant for clinicians and an excellent guide for the readers. I have no comments. Reviewer #2: Peer review comments: Thank you for letting me peer-review this paper. I am a systematic reviewer and have done a couple of reviews on AML therapy, so can appreciate the amount of work that has gone into this review, particularly as the majority of studies are observational. Overall it is a very well conducted review, using appropriate standard systematic review methods. The writing is clear, however, I think you need to emphasise more strongly the fact that there were only 2 small RCTs and the majority of the results came from observational studies. This is likely to have introduced selection bias particularly as within this disease and within the age groups under study, treatment is often determined by fitness to receive intensive chemotherapy. Abstract Reads well, BUT A MAJOR REVISION SHOULD TAKE PLACE REGARDING MORE EMPHASIS ON THE FACT THAT ALL BUT TWO STUDIES ARE OBSERVATIONAL AND THEREFORE THERE WILL BE INHERENT SELECTION BIAS WITHIN THE STUDIES THAT COULD AFFECT THE RESULTS IN FAVOUR OF THE INTENSIVE THERAPY AND THEREFORE THE RESULTS SHOULD BE VIEWED WITH APPROPRIATE CAUTION. Introduction A minor comment for the introduction is that you could introduce the origins of the review in that it was undertaken as part of an ASH guideline development, this would then relate to paragraph which talks about it in the discussion. It is always good to see systematic reviews borne from guidelines being published. Methods The methods look standard and appear to have been well conducted. Results Major comment - there isn’t a separate section for reporting the risk of bias assessment. It is obvious a lot of work has gone into the risk of bias assessment and I think it is key to understanding the context of the review results. Whether a separate section is inserted or more detail is given within the reporting of the outcome results is a matter for you, but at the moment comments at the bottom of these sections are too vague – saying there is a ‘serious risk of bias’ or ‘series imprecision’ is not telling the reader what the problem is, and the bias could be different depending upon the outcome - especially so with the Robins tool. Many readers, who will hopefully use this in clinical practice, may well be unfamiliar with biases in observational studies and will be unlikely to be able to interpret the Robins tool, so maybe a separate section on the biases might be better. You really need to highlight the main bias at play – looks like its confounding in most of the observational studies – and explain why you are concerned and how this affects the interpretation of the results i.e. cautiously. Results – minor comment – it would have been helpful if you had put the age ranges as well as the mean age in this table, especially given the review focus is on age. Results – minor comment – you looked for ongoing trials, did you find any, if so maybe comment on them in the discussion where you talk about future research. Discussion The points within Paragraph 2 in the discussion needs more emphasis and the second from last paragraph in the discussion – or something similar - should be in the abstract: ‘The quality of evidence is almost uniformly low or very low mainly due to the inherent bias in the selection of intensive chemotherapy for more fit and/or responsive patients in the observational studies that dominated the review’. ********** 6. 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Intensive versus less-intensive antileukemic therapy in older adults with acute myeloid leukemia: a systematic review PONE-D-20-39802R1 Dear Dr. Brignardello-Petersen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Good publication, good that it relates to the guidelines that it supports, but offers the science behind the guideline recommendations. This is rarely done even for national and international guidelines as it is seen as 'dual publication' or 'salami slicing' for many journals. Guidelines should have the systematic reviews which support them published in full, otherwise a 'black hole' of evidence exists, that is unhelpful in clinical and patient decision making. Congratulations to the authors and PLOS ONE for - hopefully - getting this published. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Jayne Wilson |
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PONE-D-20-39802R1 Intensive versus less-intensive antileukemic therapy in older adults with acute myeloid leukemia: a systematic review Dear Dr. Brignardello-Petersen: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Francesco Bertolini Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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