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PONE-D-20-31616 Impact of Hepatopathy in Pediatric Patients after Surgery for Complex Congenital Heart Disease PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kehl, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The article has been reviewed by 2 expert reviewers who found some interesting points and several weaknesses. I think the paper requires significant revisions before next submission and the authors will have to thoroughly address all reviewers requests. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 31 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Kehl and coworkers conducted a study on hepatopathy secondary to pediatric cardiac surgery describing its predictors and its outcomes. The study is original and the results interesting even if the cohort is small in a relatively long period of time (20 patients in 8-9 years) I have a series of concerns to be addressed in this paper -the authors state they compared their patients "to a control group consisting of 30 patients with a comparable initial cardiac anatomy and pathophysiology" but I am not sure this is consistent with the methodology of a matched-controlled study or, better, a propensity study. The authors should significantly revise their statistical methodology otherwise, as is, the main message emerging from this study could be: "complicated surgery is a risk factor for hepathopathy" which is quite a tautologic message -the other MAJOR aspect the authors should fix is the definition of "hepathopathy": this should be explicitly proposed and detailed or, better, some standard definition of hepathopathy should be described here. -I have to caution the authors that some important information included in the abstract like mortality, liver transplantation rate and "relevant postoperative anatomical residuum" (by the way what is meant by "relevant") are not reported in the main text -the authors should specify how long the follow up was prolonged and what is the postoperative window all the clinical and lab data are referred to -why is not "left ventricular function" (which is ALSO cited in the abstract) analyzed and presented? -why is not blood pressure analyzed and presented? -to this end, please specify how the kaplan meyer curves were created: what event is referred the "time to event"? -I think the authors should add information about renal function since the item "peritoneal dialysis" is very poor to describe it and it frequently occurs in liver dysfunction -the authors should specify how table3 (multivariate analysis) was built -why and when the hepatic biopsies where conducted? what about the remaining patients? -what the term infection in the table is referred to? blood? any infection? why do the authors refer to this variable as "severe infection" in the text? -the limitations section is very poor and the author should honestly describe the multiple weaknesses of this exploratory study (other than the small sample size) Reviewer #2: Dear Editor, It is was a pleasure to review this study on a very interesting and probably underestimated subject. The lack of clinical experience on the hepatic involvement and its outcome after cardiac surgery might be of clinical and scientific interest to readers of this journal despite the retrospective and single center nature of the study. The paper is well organized, fully detailed, with intelligible fashion and written in standard English. However, I have the following specific remarks and suggestions: 1) Authors present 20 patients who developed hepatic dysfunction vs 30 patients (controls) who did not. These 50 patients were consecutive? What was the overall series of cardiac surgery during the study time (2011-2019)? Even if it is a single center experience, what was the overall prevalence of hepatic dysfunction? 2) Age at cardiac surgery shows wide range (p 0.033) between the two populations, why they are not age-matched? In the hepatopathy group patients are older, is it possible to consider the time (even if short) from CHD diagnosis to surgery a risk for hepatic dysfunction? Please comment on this 3) It would be fair to presents the liver parameter (laboratory and ultrasound) for both case/controls before surgery to rule out or address a previous hepatic involvement 4) Syndromic disorders account for 25% in HP group. Were there any patients with Alagille syndrome and related known chronic liver disease? 5) Authors underline how right heart dysfunction is a well-recognized entity for the development of cardiac hepatopathy and their data support this finding. I would like to ask for clarification about Table 1 (page 8): Right heart dysfunction seems to occur with a different degree in the same proportion between the two groups (19/20 vs 30/30). Please a comment. 6) Table 4 reports parameters of hepatologic function: - What was the peak bilirubin level for both groups? - Do albumin and PT were supported? - Adding INR could be useful to calculate PELD score. PELD score (and also FV%) should be included given the severity of the liver disease as reported by authors. It is remarkable the rate of 40% of patients evaluated for liver transplantation and then performed in 30%. These rates are surprisingly high considering the clinical setting and age of patients, such that I believe this aspect needs more details in both results and discussion adding data and other experience from literature. Page 3 (line 69) : Liver dysfunction in Fontan failure is uniformly known. Noteworthy, the need for liver transplant in Fontan failure seems low (mainly as a treatment of HCC or when combined heart-liver Tx come to discussion) than what was reported by authors in their case series and after a longer follow-up. Time of FU as a variable associated with the degree of liver disease. Comment please. Liver biopsy was performed in 50% of HP groups, what was the indication for risky liver histology in this group? Authors recognized how acute hepatic dysfunction is mainly secondary to cardiac condition (right and left hit), as a conclusion of their study would they still suggest liver biopsy in this group? Did the authors employ extracorporeal filtration (plasmapheresis or CytoSorb) for any of the HE patients ? 7) Line 316 : “strength of our study is the very detailed information”, it seems too emphatic probably to be reformulated. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: nice revision. all the queries have been addressed. Reviewer #2: I read with interest all the answer provided by the authors. All the critical points seem to addressed and overall the manuscript has a better shape. Language sounds standard english to me. Statistical analysis improoved significantly. The major finding in this study is the severity of liver disease following cardiac surgery requiring liver transplantation. This incidence (in children) is not commonly known or shared with other centers experience thus a more detailed review of the literature providing an hypotetic explication could have been added to the discussion. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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