Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-15544 Brazilian women’s use of evidence-based practices in childbirth after participating in the Senses of Birth intervention: a mixed-methods study. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. da Matta Machado Fernandes, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript has a lot of value to the readership of the journal and uses mixed-methods in an adequate way. However, the manuscript needs to be improved in several sections throughout the paper as noted by reviewer 1. If the authors do not agree with the reviewers' comments, they must provide a justification for their approach. Please address the requested changes and resubmit as soon as possible. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 27 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include a copy of Table 7 which you refer to in your text on page 13. Additional Editor Comments: Dear authors, the manuscript has a lot of value to the readership of the journal and uses mixed-methods in an adequate way. However, the manuscript needs to be improved in several sections throughout the paper as noted by reviewer 1. If the authors do not agree with the reviewers' comments, they must provide a justification for their approach. Please address the requested changes resubmit as soon as possible. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the paper entitled, “Brazilian women’s use of evidence-based practices in childbirth after participating in the Sense of Birth intervention: a mixed-methods study.” The authors are to be commended for a mixed methods approach that focuses on understanding women’s self-efficacy and use of patient driven essential birth practices. The paper provides extensive analysis and provides interesting information. As this is a post-intervention assessment, without a comparison group, the strengths and limitations of this study design need to be further addressed. Additionally, there is an opportunity to streamline the findings; I have made suggestions where I think sections can be simplified. Major: 1. In the framing of the paper, the authors use the phrase “evidence-based practices (EBP)” in referring to birth plans, companionship, midwife care, freedom of mobility during labor, choice of position during labor, doula support, and non-pharmacological pain relief methods. As acknowledged in their introduction, EBP normally referred to provider based practices (Lines 78-86). As readership may be accustomed to the provider point of view, I would strongly encourage the authors to ensure consistent framing as patient-enacted or patient-engaged evidence-based practices. Further, many of these practices align with the larger movement around Respectful Maternity Care (RMC) and “what women want campaign.” I think inclusion of these references in the introduction may help contextualize the Senses of Birth intervention and the experience of laboring women reported here. 2. Can the authors reflect how many of these specific patient-focused EBP are in control of the woman/family? How much of the EBP (i.e. midwife support, doula support or position of delivery) are solely up to the patient or require support from clinic policy, facility staff, etc.? A theory of change/directed acyclic graph would be helpful to think about all the individual characteristics, their connection to self-efficacy and then adherence to patient-centered evidence-based practices. 3. The study design is a post-intervention assessment and designed to look at characteristics and perceived knowledge and behavior. The strengths and limitations of this study design need to be further described. 4. In light of this study design, the findings must be interpreted cautiously. In lines 534-541, the authors state that, “the SoB intervention presented itself as one of the facilitators to use EBP described by women.” Even in the limitations section, the phrasing in line 765-767 is suggestive of causal language. I do not believe causation (attribution) can be given to the Senses of Birth study given this study design. Please revise this language. 5. Further, the sampling frame and approach to be further described. It is unclear how the 1,287 women who completed the post-test survey after the intervention were selected. Can the authors provide information on the number of people who participated in the intervention, were approached for the post-test survey, and what was the response rate? How are the 555 similar to or different to women who did not take the online survey? Finally, were the 258 women who were in the qualitative interviews a part of the 555 or the 1287? How were the 258 women selected for the qualitative interviews? A flow diagram would be helpful. 6. With respect to representation, in the introduction, the authors note that 26% of Brazilians have private insurance (line 104); however, in this population, in the study, 78% of the population have private insurance. This is just one example where a discussion of representation of the included population would be helpful. 7. The results are extensive and provide very interesting findings. While I appreciate the quotes and the mixed-methods approach, I believe the main messages of the findings are getting lost in the very details descriptions. I would encourage authors to use figures or quote boxes to streamline findings. 8. Some of the key findings focus on change in self-efficacy. If this is a change in self-efficacy score, can the authors specific the time frame of change? I think this change represents self-efficacy after the woman received the intervention and further out in time after receiving the intervention. If it was meant to be pre-intervention and post-intervention, the authors will need to explain how they can calculate this change as pre-intervention information is unknown. Minor: • The introduction includes a lot of background information on setting and location. I think this information would be more relevant and streamlined in the Methods section. • The detailed description of the Senses of Birth background (Lines 160-179) in the Education Intervention section can be referenced or streamlined to previously published methods papers on the Senses of Birth intervention. • The details of every variable assessed in the study would be more helpful in an appendix (Lines 207-258). Consider streamlining this section. • The Figures are illegible in my reviewer’s copy so I have not been able to provide feedback on them. • Table 1 notes under the knowledge domains there is “increased perceived, no increased perceived.” This is unclear to readers. • The data are available upon request; could the quantitative data be de-identified/anonymized and shared publicly? I understand qualitative data may be more difficult to anonymize. Reviewer #2: Commentary From the methodological point of view, it is a study with a mixed design of quanti-quali character. The sample is considered appropriate for both methods and the statistical analysis is adequate. PAHO considers that the average number of Caesarean sections acceptable should be 15%. However, we know that there are absolute and relative indications for a Cesarean section. Within these conditions, we know that some social determinants are important and could explain some percentage of these cesarean sections, such as poverty, access to food and poor prenatal care, among other factors. In light of these factors, it should be considered whether this indicator of 15% should be raised and not force a reduction in the number of cesarean sections. This implies emphasizing the social determinants and those direct causes that could influence the decision of the mother or the doctor to have a Cesarean section instead of a natural birth. Pregnant women should be intervened from their first birth control, trying to guide them towards a natural birth. ********** 6. 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Brazilian women’s use of evidence-based practices in childbirth after participating in the Senses of Birth intervention: a mixed-methods study. PONE-D-20-15544R1 Dear Dr. da Matta Machado Fernandes, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Temas metodológicos fueron superados ampliando las explicaciones solicitadas y se agregaron las limitaciones observadas en el estudio. Esto ayudará a tener una mejor comprensión de los alcances del mismo estudio. Se aclaró el tema de la muestra y corrigieron algunos términos. Se aclaró los temas relacionados al comité de ética. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Jairo Vanegas López
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PONE-D-20-15544R1 Brazilian women’s use of evidence-based practices in childbirth after participating in the Senses of Birth intervention: a mixed-methods study. Dear Dr. da Matta Machado Fernandes: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Abraham Salinas-Miranda Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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