Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-34085 Case finding of tuberculosis among mining communities in Ghana PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ohene, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript. If you will need significantly more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study by Ohene et al. describe active case-finding (ACF) for TB in several mining communities in Ghana and presents novel data that have potentially wider relevance to ACF in other countries, including what types of screening should be performed and what kind of yields can be expected. The authors should also be commended for undertaking a study based on routine data collected by the national TB program which remains an underutilized resource. However, the manuscript has a number of significant issues that need to be resolved. The first primary issue with the manuscript is that it fails to describe completely how the screening was performed in each of the 3 regions, 21 districts, and 78 communities included in the study. Without these additional data, it is difficult to know what the true denominator for the study was and how representatively the communities were sampled. In particular, I was looking for additional details in the Results (lines 192-217) such as: - What was the estimated catchment size of the outreach performed in each community? - What kind of catchment was expected as a result of the community outreach and radio announcements? (For example, in the South Africa Thibela TB study, Grant et al. described these activities in a separate paper, AIDS 2010 24:S37.) - What were the demographics of these communities compared to the demographics of the study population (i.e., the people who showed up for screening)? - In addition, Table 1 presenting the demographics of the persons screened is difficult to interpret without the demographics of the regions to compare them against. These data ought to be available from census or modeled projects such as WorldPop. - Are there reasons to believe the sample was biased in any way? For example, did fewer men or mining workers show up than expected? If there was bias, was the bias different for each region, district, or community? - The authors state that the people screened per community "ranged from 39 to 202" (line 194). Are these meaningful differences in terms of the community population sizes? As a result of the above exclusions, I find some of the claims and intended comparisons unsupported. For example, in several instances, the authors discuss the prevalence in the communities. For example, in the Results the authors state "the community prevalence varied between 0 and 6.8%" (line 232). Later, in the Discussion the authors compare these results on "the overall community TB prevalence" to published results in other countries such as South Africa and Zambia (lines 335-340). However, without a proper accounting of the sampling and any correction between the study population and the overall target population, these claims are unjustified. (For example, one can imagine a scenario where only the most ill mine workers showed up in one region with good outreach, while less ill mine workers and perhaps their families and friends showed up in another region.) The authors should exercise care and qualify the language around these claims, in addition to explaining how screening was performed and what the demographics of the communities were. The authors make a partial acknowledgment late in the Discussion ("Comparing across such studies may however not be straightforward..." lines 368). However, by then the claims have already been made. The second primary issue involves the statistics in the manuscript, some of which are either insufficiently described or perhaps even a bit suspect. These statistics and their accompanying tables should be revised for clarity and checked for rigor. - In Table 3, describing the bivariate analyses, it is not clear what statistical test was performed to arrive at a single p-value per demographic variable per region. What test is this? What is the null hypothesis in each case? Why were the 3 regions analyzed separately rather than jointly in a hierarchical/mixed effects model? Also, claims in this section do not appear supported by the results. For example, "Those with TB were more likely to be male" in line 261. What test and test statistic supports this? - Table 4 presents the results of a logistic regression, but again here, the model used is unclear. The authors should state the logistic regression equation model in the Methods. In addition, the accompanying text should clarify the difference in purpose between Table 3 and Table 4, as they appear to have the same function. - Table 5 is unclear in several aspects. What does "X-ray suggestive of TB" mean? Is this the same as, say, an X-ray with Xpert-confirmed TB? What is the purpose of this section (from line 278)? If it is to establish that particular symptoms may be as good as Xpert-confirmed X-ray screening, the authors should state so. Also, how should the reader interpret the kappa statistic, compared to say the more familiar correlation coefficient? Finally, the authors bring up a good point at the end of the Discussion that should be raised earlier, comparing combined symptom and X-ray screening compared to a sequential algorithm. In particular, the former seems faster and perhaps easier, and it would seem the authors made a conscious decision to do this. No references are given for sequential algorithms or WHO recommendations; the authors should correct this. In addition, the authors should mention whether other studies on ACF used one of these sequential algorithms and how that might affect comparability of these previous results to their own. Reviewer #2: Comments have been added on several places wherever required. Comments usually revolves around identifying the nature and the type of mining and dealing with the confounders like silicosis and asbestosis. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Case finding of tuberculosis among mining communities in Ghana PONE-D-20-34085R1 Dear Dr. Ohene, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Frederick Quinn Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Authors have addressed all the queries comprehensively They have defined the type and nature of the mining and addressed the question of confounders. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Shamim Mohammad, M.Phil., Ph.D.
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PONE-D-20-34085R1 Case finding of tuberculosis among mining communities in Ghana Dear Dr. Ohene: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Frederick Quinn Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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