Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 30, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-30548 Healthcare providers experiences of using Uterine Balloon Tamponade (UBT) devices for the treatment of post-partum haemorrhage (PPH): a meta-synthesis of qualitative studies PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Finlayson, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript and the reviewers’ comments were carefully evaluated. The manuscript was appreciated by the Reviewers. Nevertheless, as suggested, the manuscript requires some improvement before to be considered for publication. Suggested revisions are in detail reported in the Reviewers’ comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 01 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The writing quality is superb and style easy to read. The Methods are clear and of precise high quality. It is indeed unfortunate that more articles did not meet criteria for review. It might be of interest for the authors to learn that in a difference-in-difference analysis of UBT implementation in Central India (to be published soon), the introduction of a UBT package for managing severe PPH was associated with a statistically significant reduction in the number of cases of a composite outcome of maternal adverse outcomes (death, hysterectomy or other surgeries) Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this metasynthesis of qualitative studies on provider's experiences with UBT. This is a well-written and well-organized manuscript describing somewhat limited qualitative data. Below please find some line-item edits that I would recommend. In addition, the conclusion needs some work to highlight the limitations of the study and the available research and to provide implications of this study. Abstract: include which methods you used to guide the qualitative metasynthesis. Conclusions seem to be an overextension based on the methods and results described. If the question is what were providers' experiences, the conclusion should describe what providers' experiences were with UBT and then suggest some the clinical and future research implications of those findings. Line 71: What are the statistics to support this statement? Lines 77-78: List the first line treatments for uterine atony in order of use. Lines 83-84: This recommendation isn't clear. Is this saying that the evidence is weak in support of using UBT or that the evidence comparing UBT to other interventions is weak? Lines 96-97: This should be a statement of purpose or a statement of the primary question very explicitly stated. Make sure that the question/purpose is appropriate to the methods. Table 2: The level of evidence doesn't match the text. The table appears to say 5 themes have moderate evidence and 1 has low but the text says 3 themes have moderate, 2 low, and 1 very low evidence. Line 319: The homogeneity of the research team needs to be discussed much earlier in the paper. I think it's important to include in the results or discussion that these studies were conducted to evaluate the intervention program and how that influences the data (how people were trained and supported to use UBTs, etc). Add the use of improvised UBTs to the discussion and conclusion sections. Is there evidence that these are effective, is it necessary or preferred to use specific devices or are the improvised ones just as good, etc. Include a more in-depth discussion of the clinical, policy and future research implications. Where are there still gaps? Where is there sufficient evidence to make policy changes? Reviewer #3: -Kudos for taking up a worthy cause. Highlighting the much needed evidence that supports such a life saving intervention at the WHO is indeed commendable however, uterine balloon tamponade is a well recognised PPH treatment modality and it's indication as not the first nor the last intervention might place it in a sort of catch-22 position: too few women require it compared to uterotonics however by the time more aggressive treatment is needed, providers may be opting to err on the side of caution by over-treating (surgical interventions) rather than taking the middle ground. If there really is a dearth of literature supporting UBT use then this may be why. On a related note, perhaps the inclusion criteria used were more likely to rule out relevant works rather than rule them in given that only 5 articles out of 21 made the final cut. These 21 being shortlisted from an initial 89. It's possible that the same complex interplay of socio-economic factors that maintains the disparity of PPH incidence and deaths between higher and lower resourced settings is responsible for the apparent lack of robust studies into an intervention that is rarely indicated at best. -You rightly indicated that a major limitation to the of this meta-analysis is the fact that all the studies that 'made the cut' were conducted by the same team investigating a PPH management package that includes a condom balloon. This is another reason to take a second look at the inclusion criteria. Perhaps the data we seek is buried in the discussion of other UBT/PPH related works. Are there any older papers on the utilisation of tamponade in PPH perhaps when the Sengstaken-Blakemore was first introduced? I believe our focus and interest on the perceptions of healthcare providers is a relatively modern one and perhaps it's unfair for us to measure a relatively old intervention by it. -While utilising Google Translate for a cursory search is efficient and practical, it may be advisable, given the epidemiology of PPH to cast a wider net and conduct targeted searches (ideally by RAs proficient in)in other languages such as French, Arabic etc -Line 90: typo in Sengstaken-Blake(r)more -Line 133: Is "nurs" a typo? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Thomas F. 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Healthcare providers experiences of using Uterine Balloon Tamponade (UBT) devices for the treatment of post-partum haemorrhage (PPH): a meta-synthesis of qualitative studies PONE-D-20-30548R1 Dear Dr. Finlayson, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have no further comments. This is very well written and will greatly help the field as we all move toward the SDG targets Reviewer #2: Thank you for the additional opportunity to review the manuscript. The issues presented in the review were addressed appropriately and I recommend this manuscript for publication. Reviewer #3: Thank you for taking all the comments the various reviewers have made into consideration and providing an amended version. In as much as I agree that further studies are needed to properly elucidate the efficacy as well as user experiences (provider and patient) with UBT, it is my hope that even more resources (funding, technical know-how and research interest) will be channelled towards the social determinants that make the largest impact in reducing maternal mortality ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-20-30548R1 Healthcare providers experiences of using Uterine Balloon Tamponade (UBT) devices for the treatment of post-partum haemorrhage: a meta-synthesis of qualitative studies Dear Dr. Finlayson: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Simone Garzon Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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