Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 25, 2020 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-20-33573 An image segmentation technique with statistical strategies for weed density assessment PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kim, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ----------------------- The manuscript requires a substantial amount of additional detail and explanation, which I think have been largely captured by the reviewers. Therefore, address the points of each reviewer, including the two points listed by Reviewer #2. What I think is needed is to ensure that a clear context for the method and application is provided, including actual field usage. Reviewer #1 has captured many of the areas that need to be expanded and explained. ---------------------- Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 18 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Randall P. Niedz Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1) Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2) We suggest you thoroughly copyedit your manuscript for language usage, spelling, and grammar. If you do not know anyone who can help you do this, you may wish to consider employing a professional scientific editing service. Whilst you may use any professional scientific editing service of your choice, PLOS has partnered with both American Journal Experts (AJE) and Editage to provide discounted services to PLOS authors. Both organizations have experience helping authors meet PLOS guidelines and can provide language editing, translation, manuscript formatting, and figure formatting to ensure your manuscript meets our submission guidelines. To take advantage of our partnership with AJE, visit the AJE website (http://learn.aje.com/plos/) for a 15% discount off AJE services. To take advantage of our partnership with Editage, visit the Editage website (www.editage.com) and enter referral code PLOSEDIT for a 15% discount off Editage services. If the PLOS editorial team finds any language issues in text that either AJE or Editage has edited, the service provider will re-edit the text for free. Upon resubmission, please provide the following:
3) PLOS requires an ORCID iD for the corresponding author in Editorial Manager on papers submitted after December 6th, 2016. Please ensure that you have an ORCID iD and that it is validated in Editorial Manager. To do this, go to ‘Update my Information’ (in the upper left-hand corner of the main menu), and click on the Fetch/Validate link next to the ORCID field. This will take you to the ORCID site and allow you to create a new iD or authenticate a pre-existing iD in Editorial Manager. Please see the following video for instructions on linking an ORCID iD to your Editorial Manager account: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xcclfuvtxQ [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript deals with fusion of statistical method and image segmentation to quantify the weed density as a means to assess chemical treatment efficacy. The article addresses the common problem of biasness in weed assessment with image segmentation and offers a unique perspective to deal with such biasness. However, the manuscript lacks substantial literature review, clarity in the methodology, and important discussion to justify their work. I recommend major revision before it can be accepted for publication. Introduction Major: • The authors use the term “weed density assessments” frequently throughout the manuscript but fail to imply the consistent meaning of this term throughout the study. Weed density assessment is a broader term and doesn’t only apply to assessing weeds that escape the herbicide/pesticide application. This term is more often used while assessing the weed infestation in a crop by measuring population parameters. The term “Herbicide/pesticide efficacy assessment” may be the better fit here. • The authors have conducted the segmentation study at a very small experimental unit size. Moreover, their ability in performing a successful segmentation may root from what they used as chemical for the control. Because of such circumstances, it is very important that authors provide enough reasoning how this study can extrapolate to common practices of herbicide-based weed control at the field level. Also, how the relevancy of this technique holds for other chemicals (i.e. chemicals that may not show as distinct coloration as hydrogen peroxide) should be discussed. • The introduction lacks substantial literature review. The problem authors pose in this study can be tackled by already established segmentation models (would say, just a simple color thresholding would work). Several approaches including, color space transformation and deep feature maps learning using deep neural networks have already proven to be effective for intricated segmentation task. However, the technique authors used in this study to adjust for biased estimate of green cover at early days of application may be unique and add new dimension to already existing pool of knowledge. Studies on ryegrass segmentation from crops have already been done in past. Below are recent papers on detecting ryegrass (the species author used for segmentation in this study) that authors should consider while developing literature review. o https://www.mdpi.com/2072-4292/12/18/2977 o https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC6836412/ Minor: • Line 50-54: What authors claim may need more reasoning. The fact that two or more distinctive zones appear within the experimental unit shouldn’t underestimate the scope of image analysis for accurate herbicide efficacy estimation. The first sentence should be cautiously rephrased. • Line 72-74. Are authors trying focus on the herbicide efficacy on weed seed germination suppression or suppression of already germinated weed? This is unclear. • Line 74-75: What is too late here? Why would the assessment be complex in this case? The chemical sprayed to suppress the weed seed germination are expected to work for longer time and it would be of interest to assess if they are vigorous for longer period. It doesn’t matter even if weed grows back and how complicated it would be; it should be evaluated to get an idea how effective the chemical is for long time. The author should provide more reasoning to this. Materials and Methods: Major: • The core statistical technique that the authors used in this study has not been elaborated in detail. There is a possibility that the readers can be swayed away from the main theme of the technique. • Several paragraphs are shorter and would be better to merge them wherever possible. Minor: • Treatment description and application and Data collection section can be merged if possible or each paragraph should be extended in the length. • Line 108: The lighting conditions should be discussed. • It is less common to explicitly mention the author of the software in such arrangement. • Line 111: What is RGB code? It should be explicitly described. • Was “Remove Background” process automatic or manual? Did the authors went through several rounds of trial to get the best segmentation? Please discuss the process as this process is crucial in this study. • Line 130: What is Beta regression? Why it is used and why should it be used over linear regression? A reasoning that linear regression doesn’t impose bounds for an outcome variable doesn’t illuminate on how beta regression helps for this kind of problem. • The equation numbers for each of the equation should be provided and referenced in the text. • What is α0, α1, β0, and β1? What are predicted and predictor variables in the equation. They should be explicitly mentioned. • The authors should explain in more detail how θ(d) is derived. Equation and parameter referencing is not enough here. θ(d) is the most important parameter in this study, so should be explicitly described. • In fig. 1. If black color has been used in sub-plot (c) to denote the non-concerned area, it should be the same case with sub-plot (d). Why white color instead of black color in sub-plot (d) Results Major: • The figures need to be revised for better appearance and veracity. The graphs need more elaboration. The results, however, looks promising and relate closely to the objectives. Minor: • Line 187: RGB code concept isn’t clear yet. How does finding the abundance of certain RGB color codes relate to estimating the outcome variable (i.e. adjusted proportion)? • 189: Is it regression parameters that are estimated or the outcome variable as shown in figure 4? • Figure 4 is not clear and line representation couldn’t be told apart. • In figure 5, Y-axis is missing (seems like the header is the y-axis). It needs revision. Discussion: Major: • Discussion seems to be oriented towards discussing the benefits of hydrogen peroxide and cost-benefits analysis. The authors should add a paragraph to heavily discuss what implications do finding the adjusted green portion hold for pesticide efficacy assessment (weed density assessment in authors word). Few examples of the scenarios where this adjustment technique could be meaningful at the field level should be provided. Minor: • Line 256- 258: Repetition of what’s already been discussed in intro section. Conclusion: • Conclusion is well written and conforms what have been found in the study. Minor: • Line 275-276: Longitudinal vs cross-section concept should be elaborated in the intro or method section before they could be introduced in the conclusion section. Reviewer #2: The paper proposes to evaluate the efficacy of HP for weed control based on image segmentation and statistical modeling. Overall the essay is polished and easy to follow. However, there are two technical questions worthy of some further discussions. Firstly, while calculating the portion of the green areas per image, why did the authors only choose the six most common RGB codes that meet the requirement of G > R and G > B? Any practical or theoretical support for this? Secondly, one interesting result we can see from Fig. 5 is that the mean relative adjusted portion of the green area for P0 versus C is 1.12 and any number up to 2.25 is also within its 95% CI. Does it mean that the HP may promote the weed growth in some scenarios? At least in practice, it is hard to imagine such cases that the weed densities in P0 can exceed those in C. In summary, the paper is well-written. And it would be great if the authors can add some more details about how did they choose the related parameters while implementing the proposed method and how to understand some of the deduced results. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
|
An image segmentation technique with statistical strategies for pesticide efficacy assessment PONE-D-20-33573R1 Dear Dr. Kim, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Randall P. Niedz Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-20-33573R1 An image segmentation technique with statistical strategies for pesticide efficacy assessment Dear Dr. Kim: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Randall P. Niedz Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .