Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 9, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-21315 Effectiveness of electrophysical modalities in the sensorimotor rehabilitation of radial, ulnar, and median neuropathies: a meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bula-Oyola, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 14 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We note you have included tables to which you do not refer in the text of your manuscript. Please ensure that you refer to Tables 1, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 in your text; if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the Tables. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the invitation to review this paper. Our author colleagues have submitted an interesting systematic review with meta-analysis on the efficacy of electrophysical modalities in the rehabilitation of radial, ulnar, and median neuropathies. The paper concludes that there is limited favourable evidence for efficacy of electrophysical modalities in these conditions. The authors should be commended for the comprehensive and detailed review they have undertaken. I have some comments for consideration: Introduction: 1) Opening sentence: ‘Peripheral neuropathies are common injuries’ I suggest use pathologies rather than injury, in case of insidious onset peripheral neuropathies not attributable to trauma. 2) Paragraph 2, sentences 1 and 2: Citations should be provided for these statements ‘Current literature has focused on the efficacy of surgical and pharmacological treatments. Regarding conservative treatments, most studies evaluated the effects of electrophysical modalities in carpal tunnel syndrome.’ Methods: 3) Search strategy – Search was undertaken in April-Jul 2019. This was a while ago, re-running and updating the search should be considered. 4) Search strategy – what is the rationale for using just 2 databases? Also, what was the rationale for limiting it to 2009? 5) Study selection and data extraction – indicate which authors (by initials) did the screening, and same for data extraction. Were disagreements solved by consensus discussion? 6) Study selection and data extraction – were corresponding authors of papers contacted if data were missing or presented in graphs only? 7) Sections of the Method that are included in the Prisma guidelines are missing – the details of the methods used for summary measures, synthesis of results (e.g. meta-analysis, best evidence synthesis) and risk of bias across studies are not described. Looking at the results, meta-analysis to calculate SMD has been performed, and there is mention of limited and moderate evidence. But these have not been defined or described in the method. 8) In line with comment 7 above, meta-analysis was undertaken but there does not appear to be an assessment of the risk of bias across studies or overall confidence of the evidence (e.g. the GRADE approach). This should be done for each meta-analysis comparison to provide insight on the quality of meta-analysis evidence and confidence in the findings. Results: 9) Paragraph 1 – Science direct and research gate are mentioned here, but were not mentioned in the Method. Were these used as additional databases for the search? 10) Reporting of the Results would be much clearer if it were arranged using the sections defined in the Prisma checklist. For example, the section labelled Evidence Hierarchy appears to detail the Study Characteristics. Risk of Bias of individual studies is currently reported in the Method section, so should be presented in the Results instead. Splitting the reporting of results into sections detailing results of individual studies, then detailing the synthesis of results (i.e. meta-analysis and qualitative synthesis) in accordance with the Prisma guidelines would be a much neater way for arranging the Results. 11) The paper is largely well-written, however there are a few grammatical errors (e.g. LLLT is defined twice on page 6), so I suggest reviewing the manuscript for such issues. 12) Forest plots – suggest adding labels to the X axis to show which direction favours the treatment and which direction favours controls 13) Meta-analysis text results – suggest including I-squared when reporting the SMD meta-analysis results, to show heterogeneity without needing to refer to the supplementary material. Discussion: 14) The discussion is largely a summary of the results. It would be strengthen the paper to discuss how these findings relate to other studies, consider clinical implications etc. Reviewer #2: The authors provide a systematic analyses of electrophysical therapy in periveral nerve entrapment injuries. They included all papers fom the course of the last decade and conclude a lack of evidence about the efficacy of electrophysical therapy. Prisma guidlines were used to prepare the manuscript. I think it is an interesting topic to evaluate non surgical treatment of peripheral nerve entrapments. Unfortunately the manuscript is very exhausting to read. The authors sum up every included study with a lack of detailed discussion (for example is splinting a viable option, etc.) Preclinical data about the efficacy is not discussed and compared to clinical experience. There is a lot of information included in an enumerated fashion. I would suggest to rewrite the manuscript to catch the reader's attention more and meet the high standard of the journal ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-20-21315R1 Effectiveness of electrophysical modalities in the sensorimotor rehabilitation of radial, ulnar, and median neuropathies: a meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bula-Oyola, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 13 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Leila Harhaus Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the invitation to re-review this manuscript. I wish to thank the authors for their time and efforts revising the manuscript, I agree that it is substantially improved in its revised form. Overall, this is a thorough and comprehensive piece of work that will make a valuable contribution to the field. Please see below some comments for consideration: 1) Abstract: ‘We found limited evidence favouring therapies with extracorporeal shock-wave, pulsed radiofrequency, and low-level laser.’ It isn’t clear if this refers to limited quality of evidence, or limited effect size. Please revise to make this more apparent. 2) Abstract: missing full stop from final sentence of conclusion 3) Introduction: ‘Symptoms may include partial or total motor dysfunction of the forearm and hand, loss of muscle tone and strength, hypoesthesia or hyperesthesia, pain, allodynia, or paraesthesia’ A minor point, these are both signs and symptoms, so please start this sentence with ‘Signs and symptoms may include…’ 4) Methods: For clarity in the Data Synthesis section, please state explicitly that this refers to the meta-analysis performed. Also, some comment on interpretation of effect sizes (small, large etc) would be good, and this would help with the clinical interpretation of findings, and could be integrated/mentioned through the reporting of results (or at least in the Discussion). 5) Methods: The authors have used Cochrane Risk of Bias Tool for assessment of Risk of bias in individual studies (nicely shown in Table S3), however there is no assessment made of risk of bias across studies (like the GRADE approach) to consider confidence in the findings of the meta-analysis comparisons. This would strengthen the review and the manuscript if possible to include. 6) Results: Table S4 – the authors should be commended on the time and work required to produce this comprehensive summary of the results of all included findings. A minor note, it is a bit confusing having Appendix 1 written inside Table S4, suggest just using the term Table S4 rather than Appendix 1 7) Results: Paragraph 1 in subheading ‘Effects of electrophysical interventions’ – Is there a parenthesis missing somewhere? 8) Results: Forest plots – there are instances of a paper appearing twice within the same forest plot. Why is this? It should be made clearer why this is the case in the caption of each figure. 9) Results: I like the comparison of the meta-analysis findings with MCID, that is a nice way to help convey the clinical significance of the findings. Was this done using the mean differences for the outcomes (rather than SMDs) calculated in the meta-analysis? If so, it would be helpful for these data to be included (even just reported as a range in the text) for the outcomes mentioned in the Clinical Significance paragraph (p25, paragraph 1). 10) Discussion: the Discussion succinctly compares findings of the present review and considers the clinical relevance of findings, with respect to the MCID as per comment 9. As noted in comment 4 above, discussing the effect sizes reflected by the SMDs would be another way to explore the clinical significance of these results (e.g. small effect, large effect etc). 11) Discussion: How much confidence do the authors have in the results of their meta-analysis comparisons? The discussion of the results largely indicate that electrophysical modalities do not produce clinically significant treatment effects. Considering the quality of the studies that comprise the meta-analysis (plus numbers of participants, effect sizes etc), is this ‘good quality’ meta-analysis data? The GRADE approach referred to in comment 5 is a nice way to consider this should the authors elect to utilise it. 12) Figures: there are a lot of figures, but they are well done and clear. Reviewer #2: The authors made a substantial effort top improve their manuscript. The data presentation and discussion gained readability. I found some minor potential for improvement: Line 165n and ongoing paragraph should be written in complete sentences and not only in a abbreviated manner. Figure 9: All other figures show the sham procedure on the right side of the figure this one on teh left. This might be confusing for the Reader Figure 12: same ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Effectiveness of electrophysical modalities in the sensorimotor rehabilitation of radial, ulnar, and median neuropathies: a meta-analysis PONE-D-20-21315R2 Dear Dr. Bula-Oyola, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the invitation to re-review this paper. The authors have done a great job addressing the second round of review comments. I agree the paper has been substantially improved. I have no further concerns regarding the manuscript and would like to commend the authors on their comprehensive study. I note however that there are currently two different files named Table S3 (one is a replication of Table S4?), however I imagine this will be sorted out at a later stage in the editing process. Reviewer #2: I think the authors again made an effort to improve their manuscript which is now publishable from my opinion ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-21315R2 Effectiveness of electrophysical modalities in the sensorimotor rehabilitation of radial, ulnar, and median neuropathies: a meta-analysis Dear Dr. Bula-Oyola: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Dr. med. Leila Harhaus Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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