Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-34373 Myocardial extracellular volume quantification by computed tomography predicts outcomes in patients with severe aortic stenosis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hamdan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We noticed you have some minor occurrence of overlapping text with the following previous publication(s), which needs to be addressed: https://pubs.rsna.org/doi/full/10.1148/radiol.13130130 https://academic.oup.com/eurheartj/article/38/45/3351/4002776 In your revision ensure you cite all your sources (including your own works), and quote or rephrase any duplicated text outside the methods section. Further consideration is dependent on these concerns being addressed. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this study, ECV was measured using CT in 75 patients with severe AS. ECV was higher in patients with AS compared to normal subjects. ECV correlated with LV dysfunction, NYHA class, LA volume, and AS stage. ECV predicted the combined outcomes of all-cause mortality, stroke and hospitalization for heart failure with an area under the curve of 0.77. A trend for correlation between serum galectin-3 and ECV was noted. Investigation of relationship between Gal-3 and ECV is novel. This is a clinically important investigation. However, due to following reasons, this reviewer has a major concern in the accuracy of ECV in this study. This reviewer suggests to reanalyze all the data by using global ECV, add analysis of late enhancement and perform a multivariate analysis to find independent predictors of adverse event. Unfortunately, a couple of similar investigations were published elsewhere in the previous months. 1. ECV could be evaluated in only 75 out of 85 AS patients initially enrolled, due to inadequate CT image quality. Methods and results of image quality assessment should be explained. 2. Both pre-contrast and delayed-phase CT appears to be obtained with a standard prospectively-ECG-triggered scan. As has been demonstrated in ref#22, delayed-phase CT may suffer from severe artifact caused by beam-hardening, motion, and partial scan, which may degrade the accuracy of ECV measurement. 3. ECV was measured placing a ROI in the septal wall only. Global ECV or at least averaging of ECV of multiple locations, should more reliably represents the overall extent of LV fibrosis. 4. In AS group, previous MI and revascularizations were common. There is a risk that ECV was measured in infarcted tissue which may not adequately represent the overall fibrosis of the patient. The result of presence and extent of late enhancement should be reported, and discussed in relation to ECV. 5. ECV value in patients with AS varied from less than 20% to larger than 70%. Such high ECV indicates that ECV in the myocardium is almost the same as ECV of the blood pool. ECV of 70-80% should be artifactual. ECV of 60-70% is probably due to artifact or presence of infarction. 6. Presence of infarction that shows high ECV may be the main source of higher rate of adverse events. 7. Wide range of ECV values in normal subject in this study raises suspicion in its accuracy. ECV values in normal subjects (about 26%) has been well established in both CT and MRI as seen in ref#9. Minor points Line 33; “newly-defined” is misleading because it gives an impression that the authors suggested a new classification in this manuscript. Line 78; This sentence is not true anymore. J Am Coll Cardiol Cardiovasc Imaging. Oct 28, 2020. Epublished DOI: 10.1016/j.jcmg.2020.07.045 J Am Coll Cardiol Cardiovasc Imaging. 2020 Aug, 13 (10) 2177–2189 Line 81; Long-term clinical outcome? With only 12 months of follow up? Line 101; Scan protocol and reconstruction of pre-contrast and delayed-phase CT should be described in more details. Conversely, CT protocol for coronary CTA can be shortened for this manuscript. Line 103; Acquisition at 75%RR can suffer from severe motion artifact in case of high heart rate. Please report heart rate during acquisition. Line 109; Is 50-60ml sufficient for evaluation of delayed enhancement and ECV? Line 126; Representing the patient’s ECV with a ROI drawn on septum only is probably not adequate. Line 207; Please clarify what the box and whiskers represent. Line 296; This is not the first study. Line 301; “newly described” is misleading. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, the authors determined myocardial extracellular volume (ECV) fraction by analyzing pre-contrast and 7 minutes post-contrast CT in 75 patients with aortic stenosis and 16 normal subjects. In the discussion, they stated that 10 of 85 AS patients were evaluated due to inadequate CT image quality. Of the 75 patients in the AS group with successful CT, 49 underwent TAVI, 6 surgical AVR and 2 balloon valvuloplasty, indicating that aortic intervention was performed in 57 patients. Staging of cardiac damage due to AS was successfully performed by echocardiography in 66 of 75 patients. The major findings in this study were; (1) ECV fraction was significantly higher in patients with AS when compared to control subjects (ECV 40.0±11% vs. 21.6±5.6%; p<0.001, age 57.2±5.6 years vs. 80.6±6.8 years; p<0.001, respectively), (2) ECV fraction can predict combined endpoints of stroke and hospitalization due to heart failure at 12 months with area under ROC of 0.77, (3) The serum galectin-3 and ECV fraction exhibited no significant correlation (r=0.22, p=0.07) As the authors explained in the discussion, quantification of myocardial ECV fraction by pre- and post-contrast enhanced CT allows for noninvasive assessment of diffuse myocardial fibrosis. High AUC value of 0.77 for the prediction of stroke and hospitalization for heart failure at 12 months demonstrated by using CT ECV fraction is impressive and may have substantial impact for patient care. Major concerns for this paper are as follows, 1. The aortic interventions were performed in 57 of 75 patients. The prognostic value of CT ECV should be demonstrated by showing Kaplan Meier event-free survival curves in 57 patients who had aortic valve interventions. 2. The staging of AS was successfully performed by echocardiography in only 66 of 75 patients. How were the severity of AS and the indication of aortic valve intervention determined in the patients who enrolled the study? 3. Superiority of CT over CMR for the assessment of myocardial ECV fraction, particularly higher spatial resolution, was too much emphasized in the second paragraph of the introduction. In the current study, the ROI was placed in the interventricular septum, indicating that high spatial resolution and SNR improvement by iterative reconstruction are not relevant. Bean gardening artifacts and motion artifacts are major concerns for CT quantification of myocardial ECV fraction. 4. The authors emphasized that the implication of ECV fraction using CT has never been studied in patients with severe AS. Please revise the introduction and discussion by citing the following publications. Oda S. Quantification of Myocardial Extracellular Volume With Planning Computed Tomography for Transcatheter Aortic Valve Replacement to Identify Occult Cardiac Amyloidosis in Patients With Severe Aortic Stenosis. Cir Cardiocasc Imaging 2020;13:e010358 Tamarappoo B, et al. Prognostic Value of Computed Tomography-Derived Extracellular Volume in TAVR Patients With Low-Flow Low-Gradient Aortic Stenosis. JACC Cardiovascular Imaging 2020 Oct 28 Scully PR, et al. Identifying Cardiac Amyloid in Aortic Stenosis: ECV Quantification by CT in TAVR Patients. JACC Cardiovascular Imaging 2020 Oct 13. Specific comments for this paper. 5. Abstract. Similar sentences are repeated for the result and conclusion in the abstract. The presentation of the abstract should be more organized. 6. Introduction. Second paragraph. “Another MRI technique used to quantify DIF is T1-mapping, yet, its key limitation is limited spatial resolution”. The authors put too much emphasis on spatial resolution. At a lower concentration of contrast media, contrast discrimination by X-ray CT is not as good as T1 mapping CMR. 7. Method Study cohort. Please clarify that 10 of 85 AS patients were evaluated due to inadequate CT image quality. Was a prospective study, or a retrospective study that analyzed As patients who had sufficient CT image quality? 8. CT data acquisition and reconstruction. “Besides the pre-contrast scan, a unique post-contrast scan with the same scan parameters was added”. Delete unique. Please add a brief explanation as to why post-contrast images were acquired at 7 minutes. 9. Result. Table 1. There was a significant difference in age between AS patients and control subjects (57.2±5.6 years in control subjects vs. 80.6±6.8 years in AS patients). Previous studies demonstrated that ECV was significantly influenced by age. In addition, prevalence of CAD was significantly higher in the AS group (p=0.003). The differences in age and the degree of diffuse atherosclerosis substantially influenced the ECV. 10. In this paragraph, the authors also stated that multivariate analysis showed that ECV fraction was significantly higher in patients with AS compared to the control group, independent from age, gender, BMI, diabetes mellitus, and hypertension. However, the number of patients was limited to adequately confirm the independency of these parameters. 11. Results. Figure 6B. NYHA FC at 12 months is a categorial parameter and a scatter plot is not suited for Figure 6B. 12. Results. Figure 7. Comparison between the highest decile of ECV and lowest ductile of ECV seems to be arbitral. 13. Page 12. “There were no deaths.” Delete all-cause mortality from the combined endpoints to avoid confusion by the readers. 14. Results. Figure 8. ROC curve. Add cut-off value for ECV. 15. Page 14. Discussion. “Patients in the highest deciles of ECV fraction had a significantly higher serum Gal-3 level than patients in the lowest deciles. The combination of two different methods for assessing and quantifying cardiac damage (ECV and Gal-3) enforced our findings”. Comparison between the highest decile of and lowest ductile was quite subjective and this statement had no sufficient rationale. Reviewer #3: Study by Hammer et al describes CT ECV quantification for assessment of myocardial fibrosis in severe aortic stenosis and its association with outcome in 75 patients and 19 controls. General comments : 1. CTecv was calculated in the septum pre and post contrast as perviously described in CMR and CT manuscripts. As it is supposed to reflect diffuse myocardial fibrosis, the basal septum should be representative as it is relatively spared from myocardial infarction. With that in mind, I am very concerned about the distribution of the CTecv with 11 patients having an ECV >50% and a majority an ECV >40%. This amount of interstitial expansion is rather unusual unless there is evidence of myocardial infiltation (e.g. cardiac amyloidosis). The alternative is a methodological error. 2. The abstract should include structured headings, and the authors should include a heading for the discussion, which is missing. 3. The authors have chosen Galactin-3 rather than established cardiac biomarkers like BNP or troponin in this paper. Although this is interesting, the lack of BNP and troponin feels like an oversight. 4. The combined clinical endpoint of all-cause mortality, stroke and hospitalization for heart failure is misleading and not ideal: -- although all cause mortality and HHF are adequate endpoints, the link between diffuse fibrosis and stroke is not clear. -- no deaths occured, only HHF and stroke -- the highest quartile of ECV chosen here was ECV>47.8% which is unusually high, and can only be explained by amyloidosis (see above). 5. Regarding endpoints, it is unclear how many endpoints occured periprocedural. 6. It is nice to see that the authors made full use of the CT dataset and analysed LV size and function as well as atrial volumes. Specific comments: -Abstract: -- The authors need to make it clear in the abstract that on 57/75 patients underwent aortic valve intervention (and what intervention TAVR vs SAVR vs valvuloplasty). - Introduction: -- The CMR section does not mention ECV quantification (just T1 mapping, which is used for ECV calculation) - this is mentioned in the first paragraph without mentioning the associated imaging modalities (CMR and CT). -- The technological improvements in CT are for certain, though relevant to ECV quantification is not temporal resolution, but Hounsfield unit stability as well as signal to noise ratio. -- When discussing CMR predictors of outcome in AS, please add ECV by CMR (Everett et al JACC 2020), which is probably more relevant than the LGE papers. - Methods: -- Please specify ethics committee reference and the period of recruitment. -- please specify which contrast agent you administered. -- please provide more details for the control cohort. Did this cohort undergo CT for a clinical indication or purely for research? This cohort is neither age nor sex matched, and have significantly less hypertension, CAD and renal impairment than the AS cohort. - Results:-- Please restructure this and place the figure legends to the end of the manuscript. -- how many patients had pacemaker or ICDs? These are more likely to affect myocardial HU then AoV Calcification. - Discussion: -- please add a heading and restructure the discussion to follow a logical flow. -- Please add reference and discuss papers on CTecv by Tamarapoo and Scully that address CTecv in TAVI and outcome (both JACC Imaging). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-20-34373R1 Myocardial extracellular volume quantification by computed tomography predicts outcomes in patients with severe aortic stenosis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hamdan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please see the additional editor comments below that need to be addressed. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The lack of troponin and/or BNP needs to be at least mentioned in the limitations - given their use it should be at least discussed as galectin is measured. The variability in ECV should also be mentioned. The authors should at least note that they do have some high ECV values. They mention that they cannot exclude amyloidosis in the limitations, and they should add that in the context of the identified high ECV values this could be relevant. The authors should also add in the limitations that the cohort was not matched for age or other important comorbidities such as hypertension. The final limitation to add is that ECV was only taken from one site rather than a global measure or average, so it is possible that it may not be completely representative of the whole myocardium (accepting that this is the method used in most studies). [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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