Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 14, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-28962 De novo assembly of Bacillus altitudinis 19RS3 and Bacillus altitudinis T5S-T4, two Plant Growth-Promoting Bacteria isolated from Ilex paraguariensis St. Hil. (yerba mate) PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Laczeski, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by January 2. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript: "The authors would like to thank the Consejo Nacional de Investigaciones Científicas y Técnicas (CONICET, Argentina) for Julieta Cortese and Andrea Onetto’s doctoral fellowships. Gustavo Bich is a postgraduate CONICET fellowship holder. Lorena Castrillo, Margarita Laczeski and Pedro Zapata are CONICET assistant, associate and independent researchers, respectively." We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: Proyecto del Instituto Nacional de la Yerba Mate (INYM, Argentina) "Biofertilizantes: validación a campo y estudios de trazabilidad de la utilización de Bacillus sp. como fertilizante para yerba mate” Res. nº 274/17 (INYM - PRASY). Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript describes the de novo sequencing and assembly of genomes from two isolates of Bacillus altitudinis that were recovered from plant tissue. The authors have used various computational tools to obtain the best assembly, and have annotated the genomes of both isolates. Part of the annotation identified putative functions that may be related to the plant growth promotion capabilities of the isolates. The sequencing and analysis is pretty routine, but the results are pretty clear and this provides helpful information to the body of information of genome analysis of plant growth promoting rhizobacteria (PGPR). I have two important points to be addressed, plus a few minor comments, as follows: 1. The paper would be strengthened by examining the relationship between these two new genomes with other published Bacillus genomes, especially those with PGPR activity. When compared, what genes are conserved or are novel? This would be helpful to know in order to more closely connect potential genes with PGPR mechanisms. 2. Related to the above, the current analysis identifies broad categories of genes potentially involved in PGPR activity, such as iron metabolism, but some more in depth analysis of specific genes would be helpful. In particular, identify if genes are present that have been identified in other Bacillus species. 3. Line 130, what tissues were used for DNA isolation? Leaves, etc.? 4. Please have someone carefully proofread for proper English, including use of 'a', 'an', and 'the'. Often one of these words is present when not needed, or absent when it is needed. See for example in lines 38, 73 and 86. 5. Line 32 should read 'Assembly evaluation was done...' 6. line 66, should read '...great diversity of species...', 'Kepping' should be 'Keeping' 7. line 68, 'perspective' seems to be the wrong word here. 8. line 82, should be 'revealed' 9. lines 105, 106, remove 's' from the ends of words where it is not needed. 10. line 142, 'in' should be 'by' 11. line 176, 'bigger' is an awkward word here, better to say 'higher' or 'larger' 12. lines 181-183, the end of the sentence after the last comma is redundant and should be removed. 13. line 190 and table, are the accession numbers really all zeros after the initial letters, or are these placeholders to be updated? Reviewer #2: General comments: This manuscript described the assembly and annotation of two plant growth-promoting bacteria. The authors describe multiple different assemblies constructed using various different software programs and choose the assembly they believe is the best. This is an interesting dataset and reporting that could be of interest to bacterial researchers and researchers interested in using more natural means of beneficials for plant growth and overall health. Manuscript concerns: 1. One main concern of the manuscript is what this adds to the community. Many previous studies have looked at bacterial genome assemblies across multiple software types. It seems for the most part this manuscript agrees with basically all previous findings. The authors should really focus and point out what their results are adding to the community. Adding the assemblies of PGPB is great and justified, but the manuscript focuses so much on the assembly of multiple softwares that it dilutes down the importance of having these genomes without really adding much to the space of assembly software decisions. 2. The methods are insufficient in details. It would be really difficult for anyone to reproduce your results and assemblies. We are not told the types of reads used, how each of the assembly software was run and utilized (what parameters were used or changed or prioritized). 3. Something isn’t right with the T5S-T4 CLC workbench results in Table 3. The largest contain is 178bp but the N50 is 895bp? 4. I’m questioning the availability of the data for this manuscript. The only thing available seems to be contigs assemblies from Velvet. Where is the rest of the data used and generated in the manuscript that would be useful to the community? As far as I can tell the raw read information isn’t available and either is the annotations done for the assemblies. These exclusions don’t really adhere to the data availability guidelines of the journal. 5. Why are there such differences in the assemblies? It seems reasonable for one to think that the T5S-T4 genome might have a better assembly as there is more input data, but the findings show the opposite with the T5S-T4 genome having substantially more contigs and much smaller N50. Is there an underlying data difference, characteristic of the genome, or other possible reason for this? 6. For the T5S-T4 assembly, why was the Velvet assembly picked as the best over the ABySS assembly? Going by metrics of # of contigs it is very close and the ABySS assembly has a larger contig and a much larger N50. 7. It seems a bit more could be done to choose which assembly is the ‘best’ than just contig number, largest contig size, and N50. Other measures that could be considered would be map the reads back to the assemblies to determine the number that align and at what mapping quality. Also, the annotation is not assessed at all, but could also be used to help determine the assembly quality by using a BUSCO or similar software to check for gene completeness. These would really help strengthen the reasoning for picking an assembly over others. 8. Figure 3 and 4: Is there are better way the authors can think of to present this data? The pie chart does’t really add anything and it is difficult to match up colors of categories and the chart. The authors could perhaps at least order the output and categories by size or some other manner for easier comparisons for the readers. 9. pg 4 line 88-89: What region are you referring too? The reader isn’t familiar with where you are. 10. pg 5 line 108-11: What type of insights? Could expand this to help the reader understand what is known in the genomics of PGPB to see how your work is important and fits and adds to the community. 11. pg 14 line 249-250: There is no highlighting the importance of filtering in this manuscript. There are no results of assemblies without trimming to compare to assemblies with trimming, so this statement can’t really be made based on the data presented in this manuscript. 12. pg 14 line 259-262: This sentence is confusing. It is unclear how kmers were picked and how you would use kmers that are larger than some, or most, of the read lengths. If the kmer length was larger then the read was the read removed from the analysis? 13. Grammar and tense usage throughout the manuscript needs to be checked. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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De novo assembly of Bacillus altitudinis19RS3 and Bacillus altitudinis T5S-T4, two Plant Growth-Promoting Bacteria isolated from Ilex paraguariensis St. Hil. (yerba mate) PONE-D-20-28962R1 Dear Dr. Laczeski, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ying Ma, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE
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PONE-D-20-28962R1 De novo genome assembly of Bacillus altitudinis 19RS3 and Bacillus altitudinis T5S-T4, two Plant Growth-Promoting Bacteria isolated from Ilex paraguariensis St. Hil. (yerba mate)
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