Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 30, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-40967 The Association Between Perceived Stress Related with Sleep Quality, Insomnia, Anxiety and Depressionin Kidney Transplant Recipients During the Covid-19 Pandemic PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Atas, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The authors need to address all Reviewers' comments: Reviewer # 1: This paper was aimed at providing an insight into the impact of the current pandemic on psychological well-being and associated sleep quality in kidney transplant recipients. Sleep quality and stress levels were measured by having patients fill out corresponding questionnaires during clinical visits, and the responses were analyzed in combination with laboratory test results. Overall, the paper addresses a novel and interesting question. As is, the paper's message is that high perceived stress is associated with other psychological indicators such as bad sleep and high anxiety. However, without showing that the psychological impact of the pandemic is associated with increased graft loss risk or any other significant outcome in patients, or at least that the increased stress levels contribute to health issues in patients, it has moderate significance. My main concern is the authors need to more clearly show the connection between sleep quality, stress levels and kidney transplant function, in order to make a case for significance of this study. The importance of the study can at least be shown by citing previous research showing the importance of emotional well-being in kidney transplant recipients overall. Though a statement about this connection is made in abstract and introduction, there were no references provided. In addition, whether the stress levels are impacted by the Covid-19 pandemic was also shown, with moderate to weak evidence. Finally, lack of correlation between PSS/PSQL/ISI/HAD readouts and kidney function from laboratory tests, shown in the results, does not add to the importance of the paper. Going into more detailed analysis, it would be very interesting to see any possible association between stress levels and hypertension, whose impact on kidney function is widely recognized. And to make the paper more useful, it would help to identify what exactly about the pandemic (whether it is lack of human interaction, fear of socializing, loss of job, loss in the family) makes kidney transplant recipients prone to psychological disorders. My smaller notes would be about methods description and results presentation. It would be nice to know at which transplant center(s) the patients included in the study were followed-up. It would be also nice to see the breakdown of stress/sleep scores among patients grouped by creatinine/BUN levels. Most of tables should better be re-designed to focus on differences that are significant, rather than showing everything. Table 3 can be presented such that patients are grouped by GFR and/or by measured stress levels. Some statements (such as “psychiatric disorders may lead to noncompliance” and “Outbreaks of infectious diseases and current Covid-19 may trigger…” in introduction) need to be provided with references. Reviewer # 2: Is a very interesting paper looking at sleep disturbances and psychological issues in renal transplant recipients during the early phases of Covid 19 The authors study is subset of renal transplant recipients early in 2020. This was early in the COVID-19 pandemic. It is unclear what the baseline rate of sleep disturbances and concerns would be in this set of patients. For instance "post holiday blues", other concerns with the renal transplant as well as family concerns Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 14 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: The authors need to address all Reviewers' comments: Reviewer # 1: This paper was aimed at providing an insight into the impact of the current pandemic on psychological well-being and associated sleep quality in kidney transplant recipients. Sleep quality and stress levels were measured by having patients fill out corresponding questionnaires during clinical visits, and the responses were analyzed in combination with laboratory test results. Overall, the paper addresses a novel and interesting question. As is, the paper's message is that high perceived stress is associated with other psychological indicators such as bad sleep and high anxiety. However, without showing that the psychological impact of the pandemic is associated with increased graft loss risk or any other significant outcome in patients, or at least that the increased stress levels contribute to health issues in patients, it has moderate significance. My main concern is the authors need to more clearly show the connection between sleep quality, stress levels and kidney transplant function, in order to make a case for significance of this study. The importance of the study can at least be shown by citing previous research showing the importance of emotional well-being in kidney transplant recipients overall. Though a statement about this connection is made in abstract and introduction, there were no references provided. In addition, whether the stress levels are impacted by the Covid-19 pandemic was also shown, with moderate to weak evidence. Finally, lack of correlation between PSS/PSQL/ISI/HAD readouts and kidney function from laboratory tests, shown in the results, does not add to the importance of the paper. Going into more detailed analysis, it would be very interesting to see any possible association between stress levels and hypertension, whose impact on kidney function is widely recognized. And to make the paper more useful, it would help to identify what exactly about the pandemic (whether it is lack of human interaction, fear of socializing, loss of job, loss in the family) makes kidney transplant recipients prone to psychological disorders. My smaller notes would be about methods description and results presentation. It would be nice to know at which transplant center(s) the patients included in the study were followed-up. It would be also nice to see the breakdown of stress/sleep scores among patients grouped by creatinine/BUN levels. Most of tables should better be re-designed to focus on differences that are significant, rather than showing everything. Table 3 can be presented such that patients are grouped by GFR and/or by measured stress levels. Some statements (such as “psychiatric disorders may lead to noncompliance” and “Outbreaks of infectious diseases and current Covid-19 may trigger…” in introduction) need to be provided with references. Reviewer # 2: Is a very interesting paper looking at sleep disturbances and psychological issues in renal transplant recipients during the early phases of Covid 19 The authors study is subset of renal transplant recipients early in 2020. This was early in the COVID-19 pandemic. It is unclear what the baseline rate of sleep disturbances and concerns would be in this set of patients. For instance "post holiday blues", other concerns with the renal transplant as well as family concerns [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. 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It is unclear what the baseline rate of sleep disturbances and concerns would be in this set of patients. For instance "post holiday blues", other concerns with the renal transplant as well as family concerns etc. Reviewer #2: This paper was aimed at providing an insight into the impact of the current pandemic on psychological well-being and associated sleep quality in kidney transplant recipients. Sleep quality and stress levels were measured by having patients fill out corresponding questionnaires during clinical visits, and the responses were analyzed in combination with laboratory test results. Overall, the paper addresses a novel and interesting question. As is, the paper's message is that high perceived stress is associated with other psychological indicators such as bad sleep and high anxiety. However, without showing that the psychological impact of the pandemic is associated with increased graft loss risk or any other significant outcome in patients, or at least that the increased stress levels contribute to health issues in patients, it has moderate significance. My main concern is the authors need to more clearly show the connection between sleep quality, stress levels and kidney transplant function, in order to make a case for significance of this study. The importance of the study can at least be shown by citing previous research showing the importance of emotional well-being in kidney transplant recipients overall. Though a statement about this connection is made in abstract and introduction, there were no references provided. In addition, whether the stress levels are impacted by the Covid-19 pandemic was also shown, with moderate to weak evidence. Finally, lack of correlation between PSS/PSQL/ISI/HAD readouts and kidney function from laboratory tests, shown in the results, does not add to the importance of the paper. Going into more detailed analysis, it would be very interesting to see any possible association between stress levels and hypertension, whose impact on kidney function is widely recognized. And to make the paper more useful, it would help to identify what exactly about the pandemic (whether it is lack of human interaction, fear of socializing, loss of job, loss in the family) makes kidney transplant recipients prone to psychological disorders. My smaller notes would be about methods description and results presentation. It would be nice to know at which transplant center(s) the patients included in the study were followed-up. It would be also nice to see the breakdown of stress/sleep scores among patients grouped by creatinine/BUN levels. Most of tables should better be re-designed to focus on differences that are significant, rather than showing everything. Table 3 can be presented such that patients are grouped by GFR and/or by measured stress levels. Some statements (such as “psychiatric disorders may lead to noncompliance” and “Outbreaks of infectious diseases and current Covid-19 may trigger…” in introduction) need to be provided with references. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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The association between perceived stress with sleep quality, insomnia, anxiety and depression in kidney transplant recipients during Covid-19 pandemic PONE-D-20-40967R1 Dear Dr. Atas, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Stanislaw Stepkowski Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): None Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-40967R1 The Association Between Perceived Stress with Sleep Quality, Insomnia, Anxiety and Depression in Kidney Transplant Recipients During Covid-19 Pandemic Dear Dr. Barutcu Atas: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Stanislaw Stepkowski Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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