Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 3, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-09548 CLP290 promotes the sedative effects of midazolam in neonatal rats in a KCC2-dependent manner: A laboratory rat study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Miyazaki, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Note also that statistical analysis was not performed in an appropriate manner. Particularly, repeated measures analysis of variance and two-way analysis of variance were not considered, respectively, in figures 1 and S1. This is only an example, but all your statistical approach requires a reappraisal. Details on fixation are also missing from the manuscript. It is well known that pups require a different procedure when compared to adults to obtain an optimal brain preservation. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 27 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Thank you for including your ethics statement: "all animal care procedures in accordance with the standards approved by the Yokohama City University Institutional Animal Care and Use Committee (approval number; #F-A-16-045)." Please amend your current ethics statement to confirm that your named ethics committee specifically approved this study. For additional information about PLOS ONE submissions requirements for ethics oversight of animal work, please refer to http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-animal-research Once you have amended this/these statement(s) in the Methods section of the manuscript, please add the same text to the “Ethics Statement” field of the submission form (via “Edit Submission”). 3. In your methods section, please provide the catalog numbers of CLP290 and VU0463271. 4. To comply with PLOS ONE submissions requirements, in your Methods section, please provide additional information on the animal research and ensure you have included details on (1) the total number of rats used in this study, (2) how often animals were checked on for welfare, and (3) whether decapitation was performed by trained personnel. 5. In your methods section, please provide the full and detailed criteria used to determine righting reflex latency times to ensure that other researchers can replicate and reproduce your experiments. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study by Akiki Doi et al “CLP290 promotes the sedative effects of midazolam in neonatal rats in a KCC2-dependent manner: A laboratory rat study” provides evidence that activation of the KCC2 cotransporter isoform can facilitate midazolam—triggered sedation. This reviewer has a number of comments/questions to authors. Abstract. In the context of their results, what authors mean by saying: Contrastingly, CLP290 alone did not enhance the sedative effect of midazolam? Introduction. “GABAA receptor activation exhibits excitatory toxicity…” Membrane depolarization, usually leading to neuronal excitation, is a normal physiological event, not necessarily neurotoxic. Introduction. “there has been no study showing that these compounds inhibit GABAA receptor-induced excitation in immature neurons…” Present study also does not show this. What is shown is facilitation of benzodiazepines sedative effects. CLP290 alone does not do anything. It might change conformation of benzodiazepine binding site at GABAA receptor, directly or indirectly, in such a way that midazolam could change ion selectivity of the associated ion channel, or block it, for example, or whatever else. However, all these possibilities are too speculative. Omitting ungrounded speculations might benefit the present manuscript. Introduction. “p-CREB immunohistochemistry to determine the neural circuits underlying the sedative effect of CLP290…” pCREB is a transcriptional factor, which can be used as a nonspecific marker for protein synthesis, perhaps, neuronal activation, but not of neuronal excitation or excitability (here and throughout the manuscript). Of course, this immunohistochemistry may not “determine neuronal circuits". Please, correct these scientific/linguistic inconsistencies. Drugs. “…dissolved CLP290 in 10% 2-hydroxypropyl-β-cyclodextrin or suspended it in 0.5% carboxymethyl cellulose with a final concentration of 0.66% CLP290.” Why two different solvents (both valid) were used and in which experiments? Immunohistochemistry protocol. “At 75 min after midazolam or saline injection, the rats were deeply anesthetized…” Why this time interval has been chosen? Immunohistochemistry protocol. Indicate how many times the sections were washed between all steps (not "several times). Immunohistochemistry protocol. “…(100 × 200 μm2) slices and thalamus (200 × 500 μm2)… This is not very clear and even confusing. Please, extend this description sufficiently for readers to understand what it means and to be able to replicate this sampling technique. Biochemistry. “Next, 1 mm brain slices were obtained using a brain slicer and the somatosensory cortex was extracted. Subsequently, the slices were incubated…” Please, explain how the somatosensory area was found and “extracted”. Not clear – only these extracted parts were than used or remaining slices. Statistics. Why authors opted for Mann-Whitney test instead of parametric ANOVA? Immunohistochemistry results and figure 2 legend. Statistics was done for “N = 9-12 slices/group”. This is not valid. The numbers obtained from all sections of a single animal should be averaged. N (number of rats) in each group should be given. I understand that sample sizes for some groups might be too small for statistical comparisons. Should be this the case, authors should consider the possibility of either omitting this part or removing the entire submission until the data are complete. Why “brain CLP290 levels were expected to have a slower increase than those of VU0463271”? Discussion. Authors compare the results obtained in the somatosensory cortex, thalamus and hippocampus, but I was not able to find data for the thalamus and hippocampus in the manuscript. Discussion. The hypothesis of distinct switching timing for cation-chloride cotransporters appears somewhat immature. It should be better explained and referenced. If not possible – omitted. There is an excessive use of phrases starting with “We…”. This makes the story a bit subjective. Although personal statements of interest and of hypotheses cannot be fully circumvented in scientific papers, the use of sentences written in the third person is preferential. Reviewer #2: In the current Ms, the authors want to investigate whether CLP290 promotes the sedative effects of midazolam in neonatal rats via an action on KCC2. This Ms is written in a clear structure and has some substantial interest. However, I have some concerns listed below. 1) In P6, the authors mentioned that they used bentobarbital. Did the authors notice if the pentobarbital anesthetic effect was altered by the pharmacological drugs used in their study? Which dose of sodium pentobarbital has been used? 2) To prove further their concept, the authors should perform some experiments showing the effect of midazolam on adult rat treated with VU0463271 or CLP290 during their behavioral experiments. 3) In order to be able to state in the title of their Ms that CLP290 has an effect via an action on KCC2 I am expecting to see more convincing arguments or at least more direct evidences that KCC2 is involved. 4) It would be good to provide supplemental figures in a more standard format. I have some few comments regarding the methods section: 1) It would be interesting for the reader not familiar to the field to give a description (even brief) of the righting reflex test. 2) Ln107: please could the authors explain why they disssolved CLP290 in 2 different vehicles? Which vehicle was used for which experiments? 3) Ln161: Could the authors explain why they used isoflurane this time and not pentobarbital? I presume that the rats were sacrified before removing the brain, please could you give more details regarding this? 4) Ln162-164: Please could you describe your dissection buffer and your ACSF? 5) Ln163: Please give reference of the vibroslicer. The authors should check carefully the numerous typos or confusions present in the text, I have listed few of them below: 1) Abstract ln29: Therefore, midazolam, a benzodiazepine agonist: I presume that you mean benzodiazepine receptor agonist. 2) ln30 "This indicates that the balance between the NKCC1 and KCC2 is important for GABA agonist action". I don't think this conclusion was drawn from the midazolam experiments. 3) Abstract, Ln37: « Contrastingly, CLP290 alone did not enhance the sedative effect of midazolam.” Not clear at all. What do you mean exactly? I guess you meant that CLP290 alone had no sedative effect? 4) ln59: "higher intracellular [Cl-]I levels": I presume it should not be a capital I. 5) Ln198 Strangely the legend of the figure 1 is at the end of the Methods section. 6) ln255: please be consistent and use capital letters for CLP290 7) ln311: “To our knowledge, this is the first study to report that CLP290 modulates GABAA receptor-mediated pharmacology”. I think this statement is not correct. CLP290 does not interfere with pharmacology at GABAA receptor but affect indirectly the effect of GABAA receptor activation. 8) ln379 "“A possible resulting hypothesis is that higher midazolam doses might deeply attenuate neuronal activity in the thalamus deeply,”. Deeply is repeated twice. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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CLP290 promotes the sedative effects of midazolam in neonatal rats in a KCC2-dependent manner: A laboratory study in rats PONE-D-20-09548R1 Dear Dr. Miyazaki, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Giuseppe Biagini, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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