Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-27008 Effect of Renin-Angiotensin-Aldosterone System Inhibitors on Covid-19 Patients in Korea PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lee, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 04 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Park et al. performed a retrospective chart analysis on the impact of previous use of RAAS inhibitors on COVID-19 related clinical outcomes. Authors reported no difference between the group of patients treated with RAAS-inhibitors when compared to controls. The study seems very interesting and of relevant clinical interest, but probably needs language check, eventually performed by a native speakers. 1. Abstract conclusion should be more cautious since this is a retrospective analysis that may generate robust hypothesis but cannot gather general conclusion. Please tone the sentence down 2. line 170. the sentence “that use of RAAS inhibitors in Covid-19 patients was not associated with a greater incidence of mortality compared with that of other antihypertensive drugs” should be rephrased in a more proper way. 3. At line 189 the authors speculate that interaction with the coronavirus leads to ACE2 down regulation. As assessed by Michele M. Ciulla (Ciulla, M.M.; 2020). However, there are no scientific evidences that SARS-CoV-2 downregulates ACE2. Is that only authors’ speculation? Did the authors have any data about the expression regulation of ACE? Otherwise I would suggest also in this case to tone down the sentence 4. Line 195. Authors claim that RAAS inhibitors induce a higher expression level of ACE2. Again, is there any data that can support this statement? 5. Line 201. The sentence “Cardiovascular disease in Covid-19 patients showed higher fatality rates than other comorbidities such as diabetes or cardiovascular disease” is not clear. Please rephrase 6. At line 207 “Therefore, the cardioprotective effect of RAAS inhibitors may have decreased the mortality in Covid-19 patients”. This conclusion does not appear to be a result of the study. The authors so far stated that they evaluated the incidence of mortality by comparing Covid-19 positive patients treated with either RAAS inhibitors or other types of antihypertensive therapies. Do the authors have any data that can validate their statement? 7. Line 210 “A previous report presented the difference between ACEi and ARB in the association with increased intestinal messenger RNA levels and found that it was associated with ACEi but not ARB”. This sentence is of not clear understanding what type of mRNA is up regulated?. 8. Line 243 “In Covid-19 patients, RAAS inhibitor treatment was not associated with mortality”. According to the results presented by the authors this conclusion is wrong. RAAS inhibitor treatment was not associated with higher mortality compared to other antihypertensive therapies. Reviewer #2: Introduction: The introduction follows a logical sequence and was written concisely. This is of great importance. Perhaps, I would recommend authors to include the statement from the American and European Cardiology Societies not recommending the suspension in early April, although this recommendation against the suspension was not based in any study confirming the safety of these classes for COVID-19. I also highly recommend considering to bring the papers from the author below, either in the introduction or in the discussion. This is an author that has interestingly progressed this thoughts from the perception that ACEi and ARB would lead to increased risk, and therefore proposing spironolactone as an alternative, to further studies no longer recommending to replace ACEi and ARB, and his last article, a very interesting one, where he even proposes ACEi and ARB as potential therapies for COVID-19 if acutely used. Please find the sequence below: April/2020: Cadegiani FA. Can spironolactone be used to prevent COVID-19-induced acute respiratory distress syndrome in patients with hypertension? Am J Physiol Endocrinol Metab. 2020 May 1;318(5):E587-E588. doi: 10.1152/ajpendo.00136.2020. July/2020 (published online in July): Cadegiani FA, Goren A, Wambier CG. Spironolactone may provide protection from SARS-CoV-2: Targeting androgens, angiotensin converting enzyme 2 (ACE2), and renin-angiotensin-aldosterone system (RAAS). Med Hypotheses. 2020 Oct;143:110112. doi: 10.1016/j.mehy.2020.110112. Cadegiani FA, Wambier CG, Goren A. Spironolactone: An Anti-androgenic and Anti-hypertensive Drug That May Provide Protection Against the Novel Coronavirus (SARS-CoV-2) Induced Acute Respiratory Distress Syndrome (ARDS) in COVID-19. Front Med (Lausanne). 2020 Jul 28;7:453. doi: 10.3389/fmed.2020.00453. September/2020: Cadegiani FA. Repurposing existing drugs for COVID-19: an endocrinology perspective. BMC Endocr Disord. 2020 Sep 29;20(1):149. doi: 10.1186/s12902-020-00626-0. When only hospitalized patients are considered for the analysis, it is unexpected to detect differences between users and non-users of ECAi and ARB, because the potential damage caused by these drug classes is based on the enhanced viral cell entry due to increased attached ACE2 availability, which only occurs in the first stage. Among hospitalized patients, that are in common all in the second or third stage, ECAi and ARB should no longer influence outcomes negatively. Hence, to detect differences overall populations infected by COVID-19 would be more appropriate, and outcomes including hospitalization rate, WHO COVID Ordinal Outcomes, among others, would detect differences more accurately, if there is any. Lines 82-83: “Therefore, we used de-identified Covid-82 19 nationwide data from Korea to evaluate the association between RAAS inhibitor use and Covid-19 outcomes.” - If authors only considered mechanical ventilator and mortality, the objective was to detect severe COVID-19 induced outcomes, not all outcomes. Materials and methods: - Please specify whether the data was extracted from all patients diagnosed with COVID-19, or only those who got hospitalized. In this matter, there are two options that need to be adjusted, regardless: 1. In case all positive COVID-19 using ACEi/BRA versus other antihypertensives were considered, regardless of needing hospitalization: Inclusion of additional outcomes, including hospitalization, presence of lung injury through chest CT scan, and other parameters that better detect differences in responses to the first stage, when ACEi/BRA could theoretically play as an aggravating factor, would provide more sensitive data, and unveil early differences. However, in this case, it will be important to mention that regardless of differences in these additional parameters, disease course in terms of severity and death were not different. 2. In case only hospitalized patients were included for the analysis, this must be highlighted: “We compared patients that were hospitalized for COVID-19”. One of the two options above should be addressed. Results I must congratulate the authors for the number of variables they adjusted for. Very few works have worked so well on this. Discussion I would bring to the discussion that whether there are differences in the early stage of COVID-19 between ACEi/ARB users and non-users is unclear, but regardless of whether these differences exist, they do not seem to impact the need of mechanical ventilation and death. Again, please read the articles that I mentioned in the introduction. They may be helpful to increase the level of this already great paper. ********** 6. 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