Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-17268 Impact of N fertilization or the presence of forage peanut on the herbage structure of palisadegrass under grazing PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Longhini, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. A major problem with the paper – as highlighted by both reviewers – is that the authors goal is to compare the legume-grass mixture with the grass monoculture, but they failed to achieve an adequate amount of legume in the mixture to provide a legitimate test of the mixture's potential. Thus, although they gathered a lot of interesting data, they did not adequately test their hypotheses because their legume-grass mixture had much too little legume to provide a valid test. It may be possible to develop an interesting study even though the pintoi did not perform as expected. As reviewers suggest, the use the weather and growth cycle data to find correlations (if they exist) and thus an explanation of results. There is also a substantial lack of organization, excess detail and insufficient attention to testing of hypotheses that they can achieve, given what the study actually tested. I agree with reviewer two that the results and discussion should be separated, and the need to reduce by about 50% including all redundant measurements, and figures that are redundant with tables. So this is a really major revision needed, in terms of reanalysis and rewriting - just so this is a clear recommendation and I hope that this is undertaken as the work is important, just challenging given that the original hypotheses were not possible to test due to establishment issues. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 11 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Snapp Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: A major problem with the paper – as highlighted by both reviewers – is that the authors goal is to compare the legume-grass mixture with the grass monoculture, but they failed to achieve an adequate amount of legume in the mixture to provide a legitimate test of the mixture's potential. Thus, although they gathered a lot of interesting data, they did not adequately test their hypotheses because their legume-grass mixture had much too little legume to provide a valid test. It may be possible to develop an interesting study even though the pintoi did not perform as expected. As reviewers suggest, the use the weather and growth cycle data to find correlations (if they exist) and thus an explanation of results. There is also a substantial lack of organization, excess detail and insufficient attention to testing of hypotheses that they can achieve, given what the study actually tested. I agree with reviewer two that the results and discussion should be separated, and the need to reduce by about 50% including all redundant measurements, and figures that are redundant with tables. Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We note that you have stated that you will provide repository information for your data at acceptance. Should your manuscript be accepted for publication, we will hold it until you provide the relevant accession numbers or DOIs necessary to access your data. 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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper is generally well written. In the attached pdf, there are comment boxes suggesting revisions or asking questions. The biggest issue the authors are dealing with is that the establishment of pintoi was not satisfactory. This impacts any conclusions about the three treatments, because you are comparing the two strong grass monocultures against a mixture that does not reflect the true potential of the mixture. The authors try to get around this by saying in one case that they are describing what happens during the establishment period, but in another case they say they are addressing whether there is meaningful and measurable contribution from peanut even at a very low participation. I encourage them to focus the paper on one of these two approaches, not both of them. I think the latter is most plausible. The problem with saying they are looking at what happens during establishment is that the planting occurred in 2014 and the experiment did not start until 2016. Yes, I very well know that Arachis establishes slowly, but to suggest that Years 3 and 4 after planting are the establishment period is a rather large stretch. I suggest that instead they focus on whether there is value even of a small proportion of peanut in the association and do that intentionally and consistently throughout the paper so that the theme is well developed and serves as a point of focus. Reviewer #2: The authors report on the response of palisade pasture with no N inputs, mineral N, or Pintoi peanut (after 2-year establishment phase). The legume did not benefit sward productivity, which was assumed to be due to inadequate establishment length and periodic dry periods across several grazing cycles. Negative results in research are useful if well-delivered and if it addresses important topics. Since mineral N replacement is of great interest in food production, this topic has value. However, there are some major challenges the authors need to address. Many were included in the attached Word document (see attachment). Other notable points: - Experimental design as a Completely Randomized Design. Is that the case? Typically, these experiments are Randomized, Complete Block Design. It might be beneficial to include a figure with the experimental design illustrated. - The manuscript was exceptionally long and many of the measurements were variations of key measurements, which made several parts of the Results and Discussion section seem redundant. I think the Conclusions section exemplified the simplicity of the results and the authors should use that as a guide on how to address their results in the main body of the document. Biomass was measured, leaf biomass, stem biomass, green herbage, dead herbage (not sure how that is defined), and daily growth rates. The results were clear but the authors greatly complicate the results with long discussion on the each of these (and several other) measurements that all lead to the same conclusion (the pintoi did not contribute to productivity as much as N fertilizer). Not much of a mystery there! I suggest dropping much of the redundant measurements, figures that are redundant with tables and focus on the key points. The pintoi did not perform as expected and to use the weather and growth cycle data to find correlations (if they exist) and explanation of results. This manuscript can easily be reduce by 50% without impacting the message. Just because you measured lots of things does not mean they all need to be reported on! Pick the key points and focus on them. Keep the reader interested! - To help reduce redundancy and be more textually efficient, it may help to structure this manuscript with separate Results and Discussion sections rather than combining them as Results and Discussion. Then the Discussion section can flow freely without stepping through each measurement one by one and repeating the same cause-effect for every dependent variable. - Paragraphs are not consistently indented (run-on paragraphs). - Was not sure how the 3 N fertilizer split applications factored into grass response (growth cycles) in terms of biomass, as some cycles had greater biomass than others. Seems that would impact biomass differently over the season. - Make sure any abbreviations used in tables and figures are written out (in title, footnote, caption, as appropriate). ********** 6. 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PONE-D-20-17268R1 Could forage peanut in low proportion replace N fertilizer in livestock systems? PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Longhini, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript is much improved, and the revisions requested by the reviewers are relatively minor. I hope that both points made by reviewers are helpful, as indeed the study needs to only report mean separation where an ANOVA justify these being conducted. Also the abstract should only report on what the study evaluated, not the earlier over ambitous objectives before the study had to be revised based on modest growth observed. We look forward to your revised manuscript addressing these points. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 27 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The abstract and conclusion need to be revised to only report on the key findings and not beyond these, and similarly, mean separation should only be conducted if an anova is significant so this section needs to be updated to reflect this. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Suggestions for revision are made in the attached pdf file. Most are editorial in nature. Perhaps the one of greatest consequence relates to the last sentence of the Abstract and similar comments in the Conclusion section. These comments address treatments that were not tested in this study, so I don't think they really belong in these critical parts of your document. Reviewer #2: The response to reviewer comments were thorough and the revised manuscript is a big improvement from the original submission. There remain multiple edits that need to be addressed by the authors prior to publication. Review the rules on when means separation tests can be used (i.e., only when the ANOVA test is significant). ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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