Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 23, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-36871 Applications of Teledentistry in a French Inmate Population: A one-year observational study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bencharit, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address concerns raised by both reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 12 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We note you have included a table to which you do not refer in the text of your manuscript. Please ensure that you refer to Table 5, 8, 9, 10 and 11 in your text; if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the Table. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Applications of Teledentistry in a French Inmate Population: A one-year observational Study Objectives The main objective was to analyze the implementation of oral telemedicine in the VLM Health Unit during the 2018 year. The secondary objectives were to evaluate the caries experience and the urgency level, and to collect information about the patients’ practitioners. Materials and Methods • DMFT Score - The DMFT score was then obtained- Please describe what the DMFT score is as all the results were focused on this and there is no mention of the description of the score for a reader. • Please explain the caregiver role in methods – is he/she a person with previous dental provider experience or a novice person who was taught how to perform oral examinations with telemedicine equipment Results Overall, the results section is incomplete and vague. Please summarize all the results in 1-2 paragraphs with corresponding references to the tables. There were lot of tables and figures with no legends. Multiple tables were used, which could be summarized into fewer tables. • Conditions making the assessment difficult or impossible such severe gag reflect – sentence not clear • Table 4 Reported last time seeing a dentist -Please label the columns, it’s not clear especially what the data in third column meant • Table 5 DMFT distribution It would be ideal to mention the abnormalities to get a clear picture, Example below Abnormalities n (%) at least one decayed teeth 493 (87.88%) at least one decayed filled teeth 138 (34.40%) • Table 7 Distribution of treatment after teledentistry Table 7 top 4 rows replicates the data which was already presented in table 2, please redo this table to minimize duplication • Tables 8 through 11 and Figure 2 - All these tables basically compare NO PRACTITIONER AND REGULAR PRACTITIONER group differences. These all could be summarized in a single table rather than 4 different tables and figure 2. This allows the reader to better understand the message being conveyed. -The number in NO PRACTITiONER and REGULAR PRACTITIONER groups was different in table 8 and Table 9 through 11 Discussion: • There is duplication of results within the discussion section. Please avoid the duplication if possible. • It would be ideal if the authors can summarize their key findings from the study at the beginning of the discussion section to set forth further discussion. • Some of the the key findings from the study seem to be o Observational study of oral health of large number of prison inmates o Teledentistry used as an innovative effective screening tool for oral health of prison inmates o Telemedicine allowed to screen and identify the oral conditions needing urgent interventions • Once the key results are summarized, the authors can then discuss each key finding with supported literature in a concise manner • The authors did not highlight any limitations of the study Reviewer #2: Thank you for the valuable study, it is a great addition to the literature and provides insights about potential valuable use of Telehealth in both preventive and diagnostic dentistry. It would be great to reorganize the paper. Some suggestions in the comment section. 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PONE-D-20-36871R1 Applications of Teledentistry in a French Inmate Population: A one-year observational study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bencharit, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Thanks for taking time to address most of reviewer comments. Please address following before we can consider your manuscript for publication. Introduction: Last line of Introduction should be revised to say Patient's Primary care dentist instead of Patient's Practioner to be consistent with terminology used in other sections of manuscript. Results: Please rephrase Line 10 of results, it is hard to read and needs grammatical correction. Sentence starting. This included refusal of ………….fear of dentists. Tables: Please check formatting on table 3,6 and 8 so two or 3 digit numbers displayed are in one line. Please complete missing column lables in Tables 5 and 7. ( Currently missing n and % label) References: Please translate references 1,2,4,5,7,11 to English. Reference 10 is incomplete, please submit complete reference with online access date if its a webpage. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 22 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Abhishek Makkar, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Applications of Teledentistry in a French Inmate Population: A one-year observational study PONE-D-20-36871R2 Dear Dr. Bencharit, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Abhishek Makkar, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-36871R2 Applications of Teledentistry in a French Inmate Population: A one-year observational study Dear Dr. Bencharit: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Abhishek Makkar Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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