Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 22, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-36743 Study on Mechanical Properties and Permeability of Elliptical Porous Scaffold Based on the SLM Manufactured Medical Ti6Al4V PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript: 'The authors are grateful for the financial aids from Natural Science Foundation of Qinghai Province (No. 2020-ZJ-953Q) and Natural Science Foundation of Qinghai Nationalities University (No. 2019XJG04).' We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. a. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: 'Yes. Shi CL received each award. Natural Science Foundation of Qinghai Province (No. 2020-ZJ-953Q) website:http://kjt.qinghai.gov.cn/content/show/id/3063. He is the first author of the article。' b. Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, Here my comments and suggest. The authors make it clear from the beginning that we will meet in the study. Already from the title "Study on Mechanical Properties and Permeability of Elliptical Porous Scaffold" for a specific manufacturing process "SLM" and specific material "Ti6Al4Vand". The study has been correctly planned, for this reason I propouse a minor revision for the study. But I would like to know from the author: -What is the statistical approach carried out for mechanical test? -How calculate the standard deviation from the finite element models? -What is the cell behavior in the material suface for the new roughtness created after fabrication? -Do you know the integration of this porous materials and bone. Have some background? -Why do you use Von misess stress and not the major principal stress. -How is the differences found with bone tissue in term of permeability and mechanical properties. Do you know the zone in the body where do you can implant the scafolds? Another minor recommendations are: -In the introduction and discussion I recommend introduce more studies based on tissue engineering. Similar to theses examples: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0142961209007777 https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/16003400/ -The color scale values must be corrected; removing (e + 000) and correcting the font size. Thanks and Best wishes Reviewer #2: In this paper, the authors proposed a porous scaffold with elliptical pore shape, which is considered as similar to cancellous bone in terms of permeability and mechanical strength. A combination of computational and experimental approaches have been used by the authors for characterising the permeability and mechanical compressive strength. This is a thorough and well-designed study. The outcome from this study could be useful for the R&D of bone implants. However, the following concerns / comments need to be properly addressed before accepting for publication. 1.Line 10 – 11: please specify compact bone or cancellous bone. 2.Line 36 – 45: I would suggest to summarise those studies in a table. 3.Line 47 – 49: What is the specific limitations of these previous studies? Why the bone cell behaviours will be different within the scaffold structures that are different from native bone? 4.In the introduction section, I don't think Fig. 1 is necessary, as it is commonly known in the biomedical field. 5.Line 58 – 59: Please justify why you chose to investigate these 2 parameters? 6.Line 65: “static compression experiment” is repetitive. 7.In section 2.3 – Simulation analysis of mechanical compression test: the mesh information of the FE model is missing. 8.In section 2.7 – Fluid dynamic simulation analysis: the flow properties, mesh and solver information are missing in this section, for example, (1) Flow property: is the flow laminar or turbulent? What is the Re number? (2) Mesh: what is the mesh strategy that is used for this CFD model? Why did you choose that mesh strategy? Have you done any mesh sensitivity analysis? If yes, what are the results? (3) Solver: which numerical method is used, finite element method / finite volume method / finite difference method? What is convergence criteria of the CFD model? Without clarifying these, it is hard to assess the accuracy of your CFD results. 9.In equation (4), please distinguish the vector, tensor, scalar in the equation. In Navier-Stokes equation, the expression of divergence of velocity seems wrong. 10.In Fig. 6 – BCs of CFD analysis: why would you define the inlet with L/2 away from the Plane A, and outlet at the Plane B? 11.In Fig. 9 and 10: in mechanical compression (both numerical and experimental), please justify why you chose the strain range of 0% - 9%? Are you sure bone can withstand such high strain, if you want to mimic the physiological level? 12.I suggest to combine Fig. 10 and fig. 9 together into one figure, which will more clearly show the dis/agreement between numerical and experimental results. 13.Line 295 “transmission performance”: Do you mean nutrient diffusion? In nutrient diffusion, permeability will influence the diffusivity. But permeability itself can not be used for directly characterising the diffusion. Please revise this sentence. 14.Line 299 – 301: should this be in discussion section? 15.Line 304 – 307: How can you reach this point of migration of nutrient? Which parameter is it based on? If you are based on fluid velocity, I only can see that the local fluid velocity is changed with the change of local pore geometric features (pore size, porosity, pore shape), but can not see how this can influence the overall nutrient delivery throughout the scaffold. 16.After the results section, I would suggest to add a section of Discussion, in which the obtained results need to be compared to the references. Otherwise the current version of conclusion is not convincing. 17.Line 336: What does “beneficial to the migration and adsorption of nutrients to the scaffold” mean? Do you mean enhanced nutrient diffusion? Please clearly specify it. 18.Line 337 – 340: Without comparing with other already available scaffold geometries, how can you get this conclusion? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Andy L. Olivares Reviewer #2: Yes: Feihu Zhao [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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PONE-D-20-36743R1 Study on Mechanical Properties and Permeability of Elliptical Porous Scaffold Based on the SLM Manufactured Medical Ti6Al4V PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 04 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thanks for the author's effort in addressing the comments. Most of the comments have been properly addressed, but still have 2 minor ones left: 1. In the response to original comment (7), you gave the maximum mesh element size. So, this means that the element size is not uniform for the model geometry, right? If so, please could you specify which factors / parameters control the actual element size? This would be useful for the other researchers if they want to replicate the model. 2. In the response to original comment (9), although it was claimed that revision was made, it seems like no changes in the manuscript (e.g. the 2nd term of NS equation is still incorrect; units of parameters in NS equation are wrong). I know this will not influence the final results, as you use the commercial CFD software. However, once it is written in the paper, you have to make sure it is correct. So, please be careful when do the revision. I would suggest to accept for publication after the 2nd revision is properly made. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Andy L. Olivares Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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PONE-D-20-36743R2 Study on Mechanical Properties and Permeability of Elliptical Porous Scaffold Based on the SLM Manufactured Medical Ti6Al4V PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please, revise eq 4 according to comments from reviewer 2. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 14 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thanks for your time & effort on addressing my comments. My previous comment 1 has been addressed and changes were made in manuscript. That's good. However, the comment 2 was not addressed thoroughly. You did not revise eq. 4, which I have already mentioned twice in previous comments. According to that stated in paper, you want to express the incompressible flow. From continuity equation, the incompressible flow has the divergence of velocity of 0 (∇ * u= 0). However, what you wrote is an incomplete equation, advection of something unknown = 0. I don't know which scalar / vector you want to put in. But please use divergence of velocity = 0 (i.e. ∇ * u= 0) for incompressible flow in Eq. 4, if that is what you want to express. I know this minor problem will not influence the results, but it is better to be corrected before publishing. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Andy L. Olivares Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Study on Mechanical Properties and Permeability of Elliptical Porous Scaffold Based on the SLM Manufactured Medical Ti6Al4V PONE-D-20-36743R3 Dear Dr. Shi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jose Manuel Garcia Aznar Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all of my comments. I have no further comments. Therefore, I would recommend to accept it for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-36743R3 Study on Mechanical Properties and Permeability of Elliptical Porous Scaffold Based on the SLM Manufactured Medical Ti6Al4V Dear Dr. Shi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jose Manuel Garcia Aznar Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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