Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-27940 Entrepreneurial Ecosystems in Cities: The Role of Networks and Institutional Quality PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Belitski, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers suggest substantial revision. The manuscript seems rushed and includes many mistakes. All parts should also be edited/expanded for clarity (see the two reviewers' suggestions). One reviewer asks for more data to cover the role of institutions at multiple scales. If this is not possible, please include more details about this shortcoming in the discussion and edit the paper to reflect the working scale. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 12 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript has the potential to contribute to research on regional entrepreneurship and urban studies. The argument is generally clear and supported by data. The methods are robust. The paper is sufficiently grounded in relevant literature. My recommendations are as follows: Major recommendation: Further investigate the role of institutions at multiple scales. Much regional studies/urban studies/economic geography literature emphasizes the importance of analyzing not only national institutions, but also regional and local. Yet local and regional institutions are analyzed rather indirectly here. The authors consider the GEDI index (scaled at the national level) and a survey question about corruption (the question asks whether local 'political entrepreneurs' engage in corrupt practices with national governments). Since this paper is focused on urban entrepreneurship, it seems odd that the paper does not consider the effect of urban policy or urban institutions. Minor recommendations: 1) Clarify the research question. Perhaps I am misreading, but the research question does not seem relevant to the subsequent hypotheses ('what if the entrepreneurial activity emanating from an entrepreneurial ecosystem is not productive?' p2). The question is about negative factors that inhibit entrepreneurship (e.g. that paragraph references Baumol's 'destructive entrepreneurship' concept). But the hypotheses are about the dynamics of entrepreneurial ecosystems in developing countries (informal networks and institutional quality). 2) Provide more details on the survey sampling method. Why and how were the respondents selected? What makes them representative authorities on their respective cities? And why is the response rate so high (90%)? Reviewer #2: Overall, the paper is dealing with an important issue the role of networking and connectivity in relation to institutional quality in EE. The main focus of the paper is EE in the developing countries. In these respects, the paper provides novel contribution to the EE literature. The authors use a unique dataset to test their hypothesis. While the paper deserves publishing in Plos One. However, I am suggesting some changes before publishing. First, it seems that this paper is not the final version that the authors wanted to submit. There are some unfinished sentences and double words. In addition, while there are some references in the result section to hypothesis 3, but I cannot find hypothesis 3, only hypothesis 1 and 2. The concept section is the weakest part of the paper and should be rewritten by centering on the core concept. Right now it is rather a reading list about the importance of networks and connectivity in the EE. It seems, that the authors follow the Stam (2015) model but it is not explicit. Later they refer to the systemic conditions in the Stam model as it is equal to the network. However, networking is only one element in the Stam concept. I think it needs more clarification. First, what are the elements of the EE and how networking is connected to these elements. The development issue should come after the core model is clear. Regarding the hypothesis I would add another hypothesis about the effect of culture also. Regarding Baumol you should refer not only to destructive but also to unproductive entrepreneurship, that later is more prevalent to Eastern European countries. Some other issues: - You should take the citation to the end of the sentence, as it is common in the literature. - The methodology section should include all techniques, not only the OLS you use. Later you apply the t-test for post-estimation. This part should also be in the methodology. At the same time, in the result section there should be only your results without referencing to others. If you make comparison to other’s result then it is not result but analysis. - The result section should be divided into result that include only the results and the accept/reject of the hypothesis. An analysis part should interpret the results in more details including to reference to other papers/results. - the discussion part should be a summary - there should be no further discussion about the control variables or you should make hypothesis about them. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Entrepreneurial Ecosystems in Cities: The Role of Institutions PONE-D-20-27940R1 Dear Dr. Belitski, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have effectively addressed my original recommendations. I think this manuscript will be ready for publication pending very minor edits for clarity. The manuscript needs a good proofreading for typos and grammar. And I encourage caution when arguing in the abstract that "this study is the first" of its kind. I'm not sure that's accurate (while each discipline has it's own methodologies, this kind of quantitative urban institutional research is relatively common in economic geography and regional science journals). Reviewer #2: The paper has improved a lot as compared to the previous version. I am satisfied with the changes and have no further suggestions. ********** 7. 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