Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 2, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-06089 Implementing a quality improvement intervention in a non-receptive context: case study of a new fracture pathway for older people in a hospital Trust in the West Midlands, UK PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Damery, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 02 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Thank you for your submission, the topic is of significance and the study results valuable in building knowledge of this area. There are a couple of areas where further explanation would improve understanding of your methods, i.e., re the change model used to evaluate the behaviour change - has this model been used and validated in previous work? Was the model used to design the implementation of your intervention? I note you say it was used after the end of the study, thus did you use another model to guide implementation of the pathway? Re the HECTOR pathway - how was this developed? was a review of the literature undertaken? were the staff in the setting of this study involved in developing the pathway? The wording of the last sentence in your sample size power calculation is confusing (to a non-statistician). Do you mean you only had power of 24 /31%? or is this the expected change in complication rates? The manuscript is well written and the results explained clearly. Please note further suggestions from the reviewers below, [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: RELEVANCE AND ORIGINALITY With the growing acknowledgement of the importance of context on successful and sustainable implementation of evidence-based innovations, this manuscript is both important and relevant. The manuscript presents findings from a mixed methods study exploring possible reasons for failed uptake of an intervention at a local site (internal) despite widespread recognition and update (external). The manuscript is original in its presentation by not only presenting the findings from the study but also discussing the value of mixed methods studies to help explain why an intervention worked or not, using the format of a case study. AUTHENTICITY AND REFERENCING The manuscript appears to be the work of the authors and gives appropriate attribution to the work of other authors in the in-text citations and the reference list. TITLE, ABSTRACT, AIM The title is informative and highlights the main idea or focus of the manuscript. The abstract is structured and contains key information about the original study. Although there are objectives for the manuscript presented in the abstract, there are no aims, objectives or research questions explicitly identified for the original study in the manuscript. The reader is left to decide for themselves the authors’ intent in this regard, which is risky for misinterpretation. The study is reported to be a ‘single site’, ‘mixed methods’ , ‘case-study evaluation’ under the banner of ‘quality improvement’ employing a ‘controlled interrupted time series’ (quantitative) design and ‘semi structured interview’ (qualitative) data collection methods. This probably should be unpacked better in the methodology section. INTRODUCTION The background should build up to the gap in the literature followed by a clear aim or objective of the study. There is no background related to the population or intervention (ie care pathways / fractures presenting to A&E) and limited background on what seems to be the focus of the paper – a non-receptive context and a framework for ‘measuring’ behavioural change. However, as the objective is to present a case study of evaluation of a non-receptive environment, this may be appropriate if journal guidelines require a brief introduction section. It seems as though the environment was already determined to be non-receptive. The chronology of key events needs clarification – implementation of innovation, innovation deemed ineffective, context determined to be non-receptive, evaluation of determinants of non-receptive contexts … or was context determined to be non-receptive after the evaluation of the semi structured interviews? RESEARCH DESIGN, METHODS, ANALYSIS As stated earlier - the study is reported to be a mixed methods (METHODOLOGY), wrapped up in a case-study (DESIGN FRAMEWORK) of an evaluation (DESIGN FRAMEWORK), under the banner of ‘quality improvement’ (DESIGN FRAMEWORK) employing a ‘controlled interrupted time series’ (QUANTITATIVE DESIGN FRAMEWORK) design and ‘semi structured interview’ (QUALITATIVE DATA COLLECTION METHOD). This requires unpacking, organisation and explanation for clarity in this methodology section. The last sentence of “The Evaluation” section requires re-wording for clarity (page 4, lines 86-89). Details for quantitative and qualitative data collection and analysis are sufficient. Re statistical power, the authors estimated power of 24% and 31%, for complication rate and hospital length of stay, respectively. This seems low relative to the convention of 80% power. If I am incorrectly interpreting the intent of these figures, I’m happy to be corrected. In any case, an explanation is needed. RESULTS, DISCUSSION, CONCLUSION The results are generally clearly presented, in a few places there is some interpretation mixed in with results. For example, • page 7, line 171 – “…which could explain…” • page 8, lines 198-199 – ”…This was unexpected given the lack of any intervention and the 198 reason for this result is unclear.” The discussion and recommendations are supported by the findings presented. TABLES AND FIGURES Data presented in Tables 1, 2 and 3 are clear. Caption for Table 2 could be improved by making it more meaningful. WRITING STYLE The writing style is unencumbered and concise. Generally easy to read. OTHER The others mention several times of ‘other initiatives affecting UK hospitals (page 4, lines103-104. IT would be helpful to explain /describe these other initiatives and provide some supporting evidence for the claims. The subheading, Controlled interrupted time-series analysis (ITS), could be replaced with a more meaningful subheading eg “Impact of HECTOR on complications, length of stay and mortality” SCHOLARLY APPROACH A scholarly approach begins with a clearly stated premise so that compelling arguments can be presented and supported with a critical analysis of relevant, up to date literature, including empirical research evidence. The background is limited; however, a case for the evaluation can be seen, although this could be strengthened by some critique of the previous literature. OVERALL COMMENTS I commend the authors on undertaking their study with the intention of disseminating the findings wider. My comments have been provided in the spirit of collegiality to hopefully assist the authors in improving the manuscript. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Implementing a new clinical pathway in a non-receptive context: mixed methods evaluation of a new fracture pathway for older people in a hospital Trust in the West Midlands, UK PONE-D-20-06089R1 Dear Dr. Damery, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kathleen Finlayson Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for addressing the reviewers' comments, the methods of the study are much clearer. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-06089R1 Implementing a new clinical pathway in a non-receptive context: mixed methods evaluation of a new fracture pathway for older people in a hospital Trust in the West Midlands, UK Dear Dr. Damery: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Kathleen Finlayson Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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