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| Original SubmissionOctober 2, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-30729 SA-Net: A Scale-Attention Network for Medical Image Segmentation PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 01 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper proposed a scale-attention network upon the backbone network of UNet. And designed multiple attention modulus at different scales, on segmentation tasks. The attention mechanism at scales improved the extraction of global-local features. The proposed method is trained and tested on multiple datasets including two public retina vessel datasets and the LUNA. The method is also validated on the artery/vein classification problem and blastocyst segmentation. The study across multiple datasets are impressive. In addition, the method is compared with extensive baseline methods in Table 1, which is a bonus and provides a good reference for future studies. Overall, this is a well evaluated paper with multiple applications and large-scale experiments. However, I have several concerns about several places, especially in the description of abstract/introduction and discussion. It would be great to further tune some statements, please see as follows: 1. The abstract address that “uses an attention module to learn and understand which features are the most important for medical image segmentation”. However, this paper didn’t evaluate the feature importance or have the conclusion on which features are the most important. I would recommend the authors to add the evaluation of different features effects or to rephrase the sentence. 2. I suggest changing the description of “not only a waste of manpower and time but also prone” in the first sentence of introduction to “manual effort is time-consuming and tedious”, we should be humble to previous manual work by radiologists and clinicians, these are hard tasks and defines many critical medical problems. 3. “In particular, U-Net [2] achieved the best segmentation accuracy for neuronal structures in electron microscopy.” This claim lacks a citation, could the authors add the citation on the best performed paper of “neuronal structures in electron microscopy”?\\ 4. Suggestion to reduce redundancy: “and its performance does not deteriorate even when large enough datasets are lacking” to “and its performance does not deteriorate at low data regime”, many other places are similar, it will be great if the authors could further read and try reduce redundancy. 5. The fourth paragraph in Introduction, “Nevertheless, …., these variants still rely on cascaded multi-stage CNNs. Therefore, we emphasize the design of particular good multi-scale features”. This sentence is confusing, I believe the propose method is still based on encoder-decoder architecture and used the cascaded multi-stage CNNs. Could the authors rephrase the sentence and highlight the difference between the proposed work and convention UNet? 6. The legend of Figure 1 and Figure 2 are too small to see, could enlarge the legend. 7. The experiment setting separated the datasets into training and testing or cross-validation, since there is no validation set, how the final model is selected for testing? 8. Followed by the first concern, the authors highlighted the ability to “better learn and understand the features at different scales” at the Discussion and Conclusion, it would be more intuitive to visualize the attention maps at different scales for reader, and discuss the difference with non-multi-scale attention. Otherwise, I would suggest removing this statement. Summary: This is a well-evaluated paper. The large-scale experiments and comparisons are impressive. The application on five different datasets is a bonus. Overall, this is a great study, it should be of potential interest of readers if authors could address above issues and further fine-tune some descriptions. Reviewer #2: Overall, this work proposes a scale-attention module to the Res2Net based UNet for the task of classification and segmentation in the medical imaging field. Experiments are done on 4 publicly available datasets and with one ablation study. Cons & Questions: 1) The claimed contribution is the proposed scale-attention module. However, according to the ablation study in Table V, the improvement of SA compared with Res2Net is really marginal, only 0.03% in ACC, 0.06% in AUC and 0.29% in F1, which could also be in the std range if running different algorithms for multiple times. Also, the analysis in the main text "In fact, the MCC, SE, ACC, AUC and F1 scores increase by 0.36%, 1.28%, 0.03%, 0.06%, and 0.35%, respectively" is not consistent with the numbers in Table V. Can authors check that? 2) What is the computation cost comparison for the ablation study in Table V? I can image a marginal improvement can be obtained by a bit more computation cost. 3) Some important details of some datasets are missing. The training and testing split of the DRIVE dataset and the A/V classification dataset are missing. What is the GPU version you are using for the training and testing? 4) In table IV, the reference number of Blast-Net is mixed to be the TernausNet paper. Pros: 1) The written is clear. The scale problem is a pain point in the medical imaging, even for the computer vision. 2) The experiments are done on many datasets. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-20-30729R1 SA-Net: A Scale-Attention Network for Medical Image Segmentation PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we think the paper is acceptable after the final minor correction. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points soon to get your paper published. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 18 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Yuankai Huo, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): This is paper is considered to be accepted after the final minor correction. Please make sure that the minor issues from the reviewer 1 is corrected. "The emphasis of "improvement of sensitivity is significant" in the Ablation is not proper. First, the 1% improvement cannot be claimed as a significant one. Second, the comparison of sensitivity only is not fair since the specificity is worse. So I would suggest a rephrase. Apart from this, my other comments are addressed." [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors did very well in addressing the comments. The revisions significantly clarify the concerns of the paper by including statements of their work. It is now clear that the author's approach is novel, and statements are clear. Reviewer #2: The emphasis of "improvement of sensitivity is significant" in the Ablation is not proper. First, the 1% improvement cannot be claimed as a significant one. Second, the comparison of sensitivity only is not fair since the specificity is worse. So I would suggest a rephrase. Apart from this, my other comments are addressed. All in all, although I still think the added SA structure based on Res2Net is a marginal improvement at the cost of extra parameters (params used from backbone to the backbone+SA: 34M >> 49M >> 161M >> 194M), this manuscript is clear-written with extensive valuable experiments, which would be good for readers to know. So I give an accept recommendation. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Yucheng Tang Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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SA-Net: A Scale-attention network for medical image segmentation PONE-D-20-30729R2 Dear Dr. Zhang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yuankai Huo, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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