Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-30443 Trolley Dilemma in the Sky: Context Matters When Civilians and Cadets Make Remotely Piloted Aircraft Decisions PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Christen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please find below the reviewer's comments, as well as those of mine. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 20 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I recently had the pleasure of reading the paper “Trolley Dilemma in the Sky: Context Matters When Civilians and Cadets Make Remotely Piloted Aircraft Decisions”, submitted for publication in PLOS ONE. I think the study presented in this paper is intriguing and has many things going for it, but there are also a number of ways to improve it. Not all of these will be as essential as others (and some may not be possible within the scope of the paper/journal), and I will try to indicate which I think are more important; but ultimately I leave it to the editor to decide whether to invite a revision (and if so, which aspects it will be most important to revise). My comments are presented below in roughly the order they occurred to me while reading the paper. (Please excuse the terseness; it’s been a long year.) Always signed, Hanne M Watkins *** Abstract: “We found that participants (Air Force cadets vs. civilian students)...” This would probably be less confusing if the “vs.” was replaced with “and”. If there’s room in the word count, indicate that the “the value of the one increased” by going from peer to authority figure to family? “However, in the rescue context…” relative to which other context(s)? **Introduction** Overall comment: somewhat dense and imprecise writing - consider having someone not involved in the project previously read over it for a fresh perspective? For example, “The Trolley Problem has become a cornerstone in decision-making research” - probably only in moral judgment/decision-making research, really? Overall comment: there are some significant gaps in the literature review (or at least in the papers cited). I’ve made some suggestions below. Minor comment: There are different versions of the trolley problem, and only the “switch” version has the structure described in the second sentence of the introduction. See e.g., the many versions in Moore, A. B., Clark, B. A., & Kane, M. J. (2008). Who shalt not kill? Individual differences in working memory capacity, executive control, and moral judgment. Psychological science, 19(6), 549-557. Additional papers to potentially cite on the way that characteristics of potential victims influence judgments/decisions in TP dilemmas: Petrinovich, L., O'Neill, P., & Jorgensen, M. (1993). An empirical study of moral intuitions: Toward an evolutionary ethics. Journal of personality and social psychology, 64(3), 467. Petrinovich, L., & O'Neill, P. (1996). Influence of wording and framing effects on moral intuitions. Ethology and Sociobiology, 17(3), 145-171. And more generally (though less relevantly) how relationships influence moral judgments: Simpson, A., Laham, S. M., & Fiske, A. P. (2016). Wrongness in different relationships: Relational context effects on moral judgment. The Journal of social psychology, 156(6), 594-609. Line 44: “No study thus far has systematically analyzed whether the context of the decision problem matters as well” - I don’t think that’s quite accurate. This paper (full disclosure: I wrote it) investigates the context of war (vs peace) using TP dilemmas, making similar arguments to the present paper: Watkins, H. M., & Laham, S. (2019). The influence of war on moral judgments about harm. European Journal of Social Psychology, 49(3), 447-460. And in this paper I make a more general argument about the same thing (again, consistent with the present paper’s argument): Watkins, H. M. (2020). The morality of war: A review and research agenda. Perspectives on Psychological Science, 15(2), 231-249. See also this introduction to a special issue of perspective: Schein, C. (2020). The importance of context in moral judgments. Perspectives on Psychological Science, 15(2), 207-215. Another couple of papers critiquing the TP for being unrealistic or uncommon (could be added where the authors already cite some critiques): Bloom, P. (2011). Family, community, trolley problems, and the crisis in moral psychology. The Yale Review, 99(2), 26-43. Bauman, C. W., McGraw, A. P., Bartels, D. M., & Warren, C. (2014). Revisiting external validity: Concerns about trolley problems and other sacrificial dilemmas in moral psychology. Social and Personality Psychology Compass, 8(9), 536-554. Line 59: “These decisions may involve trolley-like moral dilemmas where the RPA operator and crew must choose between (a) killing notorious terrorists and sacrificing nearby innocent bystanders, or (b) doing nothing, which will spare bystanders but enable terrorists to commit future acts of violence.” This is a fine description of the dilemma the RPA operator faces, but it’s not a perfect match for the structure of classic trolley problems. I think a bit more time could be spent on the differences and similarities, especially because this section made me expect that the study in the present paper would also present a dilemma between innocent bystanders and terrorists. Also, this exact dilemma has been examined in this study: Malle, B. F., Magar, S. T., & Scheutz, M. (2019). AI in the sky: How people morally evaluate human and machine decisions in a lethal strike dilemma. In Robotics and Well-Being (pp. 111-133). Springer, Cham. **Materials and Methods** The experimental design is clear, but I found the “C-mission, F-mission, P-mission” labels confusing. It might be good to find a more transparent way to describe these missions. The details about the simulation (using Half-Life 2 SDK) on line 67 are the kind of things I would expect to see in the Materials and Methods section, rather than in the introduction. (And instead, in the intro, I would probably expect a bit more of an elaboration of how the hypotheses were derived from the theory.) Another hypothesis is introduced at line 130. I think it would be good to have all the hypotheses together (and more closely tied to theory/previous research). Were the hypotheses and data analysis plans pre-registered? This could be considered (for example using a website like AsPredicted.org) for future studies on this topic. Why did the authors assume the effect sizes were large? I like the inclusion of a control condition that involves “shooting” (with a camera!) five people vs one person. Here’s a relevant paper: Crone, D. L., & Laham, S. M. (2017). Utilitarian preferences or action preferences? De-confounding action and moral code in sacrificial dilemmas. Personality and Individual Differences, 104, 476-481. Why is the information about the sample included twice? Overall, the structure of this section is very confusing, and some parts are repetitive. A lot of measures are listed in this section, and then not discussed in the results section. Suggest moving measures that are not used again to supplemental materials (and referring to them in main manuscript). ** Results ** (I’m sorry, I ran out of time to do this section full justice) The “statistics sample 1” and “statistics sample 2” paragraphs should go in the results section. I would find it helpful if the results section included more basic, descriptive, statistics for all the outcome measures (perhaps in a table) before launching into the inferential statistics. I’m slightly confused by the statistical analysis choices. I think a multilevel analysis might be appropriate since the person involved (peer, commander, family) was a repeated measure (i.e., each participants completed all three), while the type of scenario (military, firefighter, and surveillance) was between-subjects. Some of the comparisons made in the text are not supported by analyses. For the “redirectors” vs “non-redirectors” comparisons, were the two samples combined? ** Discussion and Conclusion ** Line 444: “...possibly taking a more pragmatic approach to soldiers” This paper makes a conceptually similar point (without a comparison to fire fighters): Watkins, H. M., & Laham, S. M. (2020). The principle of discrimination: Investigating perceptions of soldiers. Group Processes & Intergroup Relations, 23(1), 3-23. The organization of this section is confusing as well - limitations are mentioned early on, and then again under a separate subheading “limitations”. I’d avoid using the word “priming/primed” (line 485, line 66), as it implies something other than what this study actually does. I think the authors undersell the general interest and importance of their study, as it does add a lot of interesting nuance to classic trolleyology. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Hanne M Watkins [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-30443R1 Trolley Dilemma in the Sky: Context Matters When Civilians and Cadets Make Remotely Piloted Aircraft Decisions PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Christen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 12 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Valerio Capraro Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Unfortunately, the reviewer who reviewed the first version of the manuscript is unable to review the revision. However, I have read the response letter and I am satisfied with the way you addressed their comments. However, I have noticed that you did not address the comments I gave on the original version of the manuscript, which I paste here: "I have now collected one review from one expert in the field. I was unable to find a second reviewer. However, the review I could collect is very detailed and, furthermore, I am myself quite familiar with the topic of this manuscript. Therefore, I feel confident making a decision with only one review. The review is positive but suggests several improvements. I agree with it. Therefore, I would like to invite you to revise your work following the reviewer's comments. Additionally, I would like to add two more comments. (i) it seems to me that you use reaction times as a proxy of emotionality. While this has been done several times in the past, more recent research has highlighted the fact that reaction time is more a measure of decision conflict than it is a measure of deliberation (Evans et al. 2015; Krajbich et al. 2015; Andrighetto et al. 2020). I think that you have to discuss this limitation of your work. (ii) The literature review regarding the role of emotion on moral judgments is quite incomplete. I have myself done some work on this, e.g., in Capraro, Everett & Earp (2019) we showed that priming emotion undermines instrumental harm, but not impartial beneficence. I also wrote a review on the topic that you might find helpful to find more references (Capraro, 2019)." Of course it is not a requirement to cite all these papers, but I am mentioning them, because they look related to your work. Looking forward for the final revision. References Andrighetto, G., Capraro, V., Guido, A., & Szekely, A. (2020). Cooperation, Response Time, and Social Value Orientation: A Meta-Analysis. Proceedings of the Cognitive Science Society. Capraro, V., Everett, J. A., & Earp, B. D. (2019). Priming intuition disfavors instrumental harm but not impartial beneficence. Journal of Experimental Social Psychology, 83, 142-149. Capraro, V. (2019). The dual-process approach to human sociality: A review. Available at SSRN 3409146. Evans, A. M., Dillon, K. D., & Rand, D. G. (2015). Fast but not intuitive, slow but not reflective: Decision conflict drives reaction times in social dilemmas. Journal of Experimental Psychology: General, 144(5), 951. Krajbich, I., Bartling, B., Hare, T., & Fehr, E. (2015). Rethinking fast and slow based on a critique of reaction-time reverse inference. Nature communications, 6(1), 1-9. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-30443R2 Trolley Dilemma in the Sky: Context Matters When Civilians and Cadets Make Remotely Piloted Aircraft Decisions Dear Dr. Christen: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Valerio Capraro Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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