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PONE-D-20-31406 Preterm disparities between migrants and native Swedes depend on the method used to estimate gestational age. A Swedish population-based register study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Juárez, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 27 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Preterm disparities between migrants and native Swedes depend on the method used to estimate gestational age. A Swedish population-based register study Juarez et al use a Swedish population register to investigate the disparity in classifying births as preterm or post-term between menstrual period and ultrasound in foreign and Swedish-born woman. The idea is novel: While it is well known that there is a discrepancy between those 2 methods, the clinical implications are not well studied. I have a few major concerns/suggestions: First, as the authors mention in the introduction of their paper, the accuracy of the US methods depends on when it is done during gestation and as a consequence depends on prenatal care. The authors do not present any data on prenatal care. Do the authors have any data on this? It is often collected in administrative databases. Could prenatal care be assessed as a mediator in the difference between the methods? Table 2 would best be converted into a forest plot. It is very difficult to read. I am also worried about multiple comparison. Did the authors account for that? To that point, it would be nice to present the p-value in addition to the OR to see to what degree these results are sensitive to a Bonferroni (or similar) correction. Table 3 is interesting but only shows half of the story. It shows that the discrepancy is higher for a lot of the socioeconomic variables, again this reviewer is wondering why there is a discrepancy, maybe it is all related to late initiation of prenatal care? If that is the case, then the discrepancy is not that important but rather the timing of initiation of prenatal care. Generally, I think the manuscript could benefit from some more “user friendly” explanations of the finding. It took this reviewer a while to understand the data and the results. I think the manuscript is well written though and the analysis is interesting, it is just difficult to grasp and maybe an additional figure or example would help. Reviewer #2: Thanks you for the opportunity to review this interesting manuscript based on a large Scandinavian population cohort. Page 6, line 163 “Thereafter we excluded observations with biologically implausible combinations of birthweight and gestational age” please provide details and/or reference for the method by which you determined the parameters for biological impausibility for exclusion. Although I understand why for clarify and simplicity it was tempting for the authors to use logistic regression to break GA into categories and use logistic regression, this results in a huge loss of information when in fact the authors had access to very granular GA estimates in days and could have looked at discrepancies in more detail rather that just as black and white yes/no agreement of clinical categories with problematic edge effects (ie 36 weeks and 6 days is preterm while 37 weeks and 0 days is term despite a discrepancy of one day--and this discrepancy would be treated equivalently to a discrepancy of 100 days by a dichotomous model) Page 8, Line 231: We considered as ‘discrepant’ those observations placed in different gestational age categories, that is, preterm according to ultrasound-based, and term according to LMP-based estimates. Does this imply that the analysis presented in Table 3 only includes observations for which gestational category was discrepant? If so, please clarify this in the text, and also provide details of the sample size for this analysis. Or does this imply that discrepant vs. concordant was used at the dichotomous outcome for this analysis? This is not clear. This analytical strategy may also be flawed as it does not account for directionality (ie it treats misclassification from term to preterm the same as preterm to term—please clarify how the outcome was coded for this analysis, and what cohort was included.). Page 9, line 253 and elsewhere, you have not provided a formal comparison to support your assertion that preterm rates were more consistent in foreign vs native mothers (granted the confidence intervals are very tight and non-overlapping, but for cases where the differences are not as clear, a formal difference test would be necessary to support these assertions. Page 9 Line 255: “With the exception of African mothers, preterm rates overlapped between methods of estimation in all groups”. This statement isn’t meaningful from a statistical standpoint. As above with respect to consistency, you haven’t provided a formal statistical comparison. Confidence intervals for two comparitors can overlap substantially and still be significantly different. If you want to make claims of similarity or differences please formalize your comparisons with statistical tests-but note that comparing Page 11 Line 288-298 “Lower odds vs. higher odds” these are all relative so “lower” odds in one group merely means misclassification is higher in one group vs the other. Please present CIs for these in the text if presenting them. I find this analysis a little concerning/problematic as misclassification can be in either direction and has very asymmetric consequences. Table 1, and elsewhere For all significance tests/p-values: Please do not use asterices to signify levels of significance. Provide exact p-values unless p-value is <0.0001. Discussion/Conclusions: It’s unclear how the impact of the factors studied on misclassification by LMP vs. US when it doesn’t appear that directionality of the bias was considered. The results presented and discussed from Table 3 appear to be factors that were associated with discrepant measurements, ignoring the direction or severity of the discrepancy. This makes interpretation in a broader context difficult. If I am interpreting the construction of the analysis wrong, please make it more clear in the methods section and presentation of results. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Preterm disparities between foreign and Swedish born mothers depend on the method used to estimate gestational age. A Swedish population-based register study PONE-D-20-31406R1 Dear Dr. Juárez, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kelli K Ryckman Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Thank you to the authors for their revised manuscript and thoughtful response to reviewer comments, I am satisfied that my concerns have been addressed in the revised version. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Steven Hawken |
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PONE-D-20-31406R1 Preterm disparities between foreign and Swedish born mothers depend on the method used to estimate gestational age. A Swedish population-based register study Dear Dr. Juárez: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Kelli K Ryckman Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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