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Original SubmissionOctober 19, 2020
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PONE-D-20-32785

Angiotensin-converting enzyme 2 (ACE2) expression increases with age in patients requiring mechanical ventilation.

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Reviewer #1: Authors showed in this obsevation study, ACE2 expression increases with age in the setting of alveolar damage observed in patients on mechanical ventilation, providing a potential mechanism for higher Covid-19 mortality in the elderly. This is unique study to know Covid-19 infection. However, authors did not clearly show that how we manage these patient to recover. So authors should provide some solution, for example, if clinician face to the Covid-19 patient how they manage this disease.

Reviewer #2: Baker et al. found that ACE2 expression increased with age in lungs of patients requiring mechanical ventilation. To elucidate the mechanism of increased Covid-19 mortality in the elderly, the authors analyzed ACE2 expression of lungs using publicly available RNA sequencing data, GTEx, and immunohistochemistry (IHC) of the postmortem specimens. Analysis of GTEx reveals expression of ACE2 is upregulated with age in ventilator group. From IHC analysis, the authors found ACE2 was strongly upregulated with age in the ventilator group, associated with prominent expression in AT2 cells. On the other hand, ACE2 expression did not change with age in spontaneously breathing group in both GTEx and IHC analysis. The study is well written and open new insight on the relationship between aging and ACE2 expression in lung.

Major issues

1. Regarding the discussion, I think that the mechanism of increased expression of ACE2 in elder ventilator group is one of the main points of this paper and was well considered, but it is difficult to understand in this description. In particular, it is difficult to understand the relationship between cell cycle of AT2 cells and expression of ACE2, and the prevention of ACE2 down-regulation due to epigenetic changes in elderly, so it is better to supplement the contents of citations 47 and 22.

2. The authors concluded that “ACE2 expression increases with age in the setting of alveolar damage observed in patients on mechanical ventilation, providing a potential mechanism for higher Covid-19 mortality in the elderly”. Indeed, increased expression of ACE2 in the lung has been shown to correlate with prevalence and exacerbation of Covid-19. But at the same time, animal studies have shown that ACE2 acts protectively on ARDS (1). I think you need to mention and add some discussion about the protective role of ACE2 in respiratory disease.

(1) Imai Y, Kuba K, Rao S, Huan Y, Guo F, Guan B, Yang P, Sarao R, Wada T, Leong-Poi H, Crackower MA, Fukamizu A, Hui CC, Hein L, Uhlig S, Slutsky AS, Jiang C, Penninger JM. Angiotensin-converting enzyme 2 protects from severe acute lung failure. Nature. 2005;436:112-116

3. The results of this study may suggest that ACE2 expression increases with age in patients with DAD, as all samples used as a ventilator group in this study had DAD. Is there data on the correlation between the severity of DAD and age-related changes in ACE2?

4. The results of increased expression of ACE2 in the ACE inhibitor or ARB administration individuals are interesting, but these are preliminary data. It might be better to avoid referencing it in abstract. Then, I would like to know the ACE2 staining intensity of these samples to compare them with other samples. Please add arrows indicating the staining intensity of these two samples to Fig3 C and D.

5. The authors need to mention not only TMPRSS2 but also Furin as protease involved in the activation of the SARS-CoV2 spike protein in the discussion. And also need to add discussion about TACE, the negative regulator of ACE2 expression.

Minor concerns

1. In Figure 2-5, could the authors include images of the entire lung and insets with the area of interest?

2. Please arrange the lung-stained images of the ventilator and spontaneous breathing group by age.

3. Figure 2 A and B should be moved to supplementary materials. I think these are positive control for ACE2 staining, not the main result.

4. Please add references to “A growing body of evidence suggests that ACE2 is highly associated with disease susceptibility and severity”. (p9, line 4-5)

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Revision 1

We are grateful to both of the reviewers and the academic editor for making many excellent suggestions that we integrated into the manuscript and addressed with additional analyses. The new data provide much stronger support for the conclusions of the study and place our findings better within the context of the rich literature existing from investigators in the field. Below is an item-by-item response to all the suggestions. Reviewers’ comments are in blue font for ease of reference.

Reviewer #1: Authors showed in this obsevation study, ACE2 expression increases with age in the setting of alveolar damage observed in patients on mechanical ventilation, providing a potential mechanism for higher Covid-19 mortality in the elderly. This is unique study to know Covid-19 infection. However, authors did not clearly show that how we manage these patient to recover. So authors should provide some solution, for example, if clinician face to the Covid-19 patient how they manage this disease.

Thank you kindly for your review and extremely helpful suggestion. In addition to the direct viral RNA polymerase inhibitor (remdesivir), anti-inflammatory medications have emerged as a cornerstone in the treatment of severe Covid-19, particularly dexamethasone. Additionally, unpublished randomized control data announced by Eli Lilly (from the ACTT-2 trial) have revealed that the JAK1 and JAK2 inhibitor baricitinib improves outcomes in patients with Covid-19. At first, this might seem counterintuitive as the FDA lists severe viral infection requiring hospitalization as a contraindication to baricitinib (https://www.accessdata.fda.gov/drugsatfda_docs/label/2018/207924s000lbl.pdf). However, ACE2 expression has been demonstrated to be downstream of IFNα2 and IFNγ (Ziegler et al.; ref. 40 in our manuscript) and these two cytokines signal through JAK1/2 (please see Rönnblom and Leonard Lupus Sci Med 2019, PMID: 31497305 for an excellent review). We hypothesize that the potentially counterintuitive effect of anti-inflammatory medications might be working by reducing ACE2 expression in damaged lung. We have now included a discussion of these potential therapeutics in the context of our findings (please see lines 294-302). We are very grateful that you motivated our discussion of this idea.

Reviewer #2: Baker et al. found that ACE2 expression increased with age in lungs of patients requiring mechanical ventilation. To elucidate the mechanism of increased Covid-19 mortality in the elderly, the authors analyzed ACE2 expression of lungs using publicly available RNA sequencing data, GTEx, and immunohistochemistry (IHC) of the postmortem specimens. Analysis of GTEx reveals expression of ACE2 is upregulated with age in ventilator group. From IHC analysis, the authors found ACE2 was strongly upregulated with age in the ventilator group, associated with prominent expression in AT2 cells. On the other hand, ACE2 expression did not change with age in spontaneously breathing group in both GTEx and IHC analysis. The study is well written and open new insight on the relationship between aging and ACE2 expression in lung.

Thank you so much.

Major issues

1. Regarding the discussion, I think that the mechanism of increased expression of ACE2 in elder ventilator group is one of the main points of this paper and was well considered, but it is difficult to understand in this description. In particular, it is difficult to understand the relationship between cell cycle of AT2 cells and expression of ACE2, and the prevention of ACE2 down-regulation due to epigenetic changes in elderly, so it is better to supplement the contents of citations 47 and 22.

This is an excellent point and we have now expanded our discussion of these two important ideas from the literature. We have highlighted the work of Li et al. (ref 49) and Uhal et al. (ref 50) to further elaborate on the mitotic cycle dependence of AT2 cell ACE2 expression (please see lines 254-269). We have also more explicitly addressed the evidence concerning the epigenetic regulation of ACE2 expression with age, particularly in the lung (please see lines 277-282).

2. The authors concluded that “ACE2 expression increases with age in the setting of alveolar damage observed in patients on mechanical ventilation, providing a potential mechanism for higher Covid-19 mortality in the elderly”. Indeed, increased expression of ACE2 in the lung has been shown to correlate with prevalence and exacerbation of Covid-19. But at the same time, animal studies have shown that ACE2 acts protectively on ARDS (1). I think you need to mention and add some discussion about the protective role of ACE2 in respiratory disease.

(1) Imai Y, Kuba K, Rao S, Huan Y, Guo F, Guan B, Yang P, Sarao R, Wada T, Leong-Poi H, Crackower MA, Fukamizu A, Hui CC, Hein L, Uhlig S, Slutsky AS, Jiang C, Penninger JM. Angiotensin-converting enzyme 2 protects from severe acute lung failure. Nature. 2005;436:112-116

We completely agree, the role of ACE2 in lung injury is a rich topic that we have now discussed in further detail. Although we believe that increased ACE2 expression in the elderly may, on balance, be deleterious in Covid-19, as the receptor for SARS-CoV-2, it may also have both evolutionary and empirical benefits for lung physiology. We have included the important work of Imai et al. (ref. 68) and Kuba et al. (ref 69), as well as other studies in the Discussion (please see lines 303-315).

3. The results of this study may suggest that ACE2 expression increases with age in patients with DAD, as all samples used as a ventilator group in this study had DAD. Is there data on the correlation between the severity of DAD and age-related changes in ACE2?

Thanks again for this point. This is a question we also had and addressed preliminarily but had not included in the manuscript. Given your intuitive question, we have now added new data to investigate this and other potential confounders of increased ACE2 expression with age (please see the new Table 1 and S7 Fig). In brief, we found no significant relationship between DAD severity and ACE2 expression. We also did not find any effect of the length of time samples were stored after collection, ventilation parameters used to support the patients, the presence or absence of ILD, a history of smoking, or patient sex upon ACE2 expression. We have included a description of these analyses in the Methods (please see lines 117-126) and Results (please see lines 195-205).

4. The results of increased expression of ACE2 in the ACE inhibitor or ARB administration individuals are interesting, but these are preliminary data. It might be better to avoid referencing it in abstract. Then, I would like to know the ACE2 staining intensity of these samples to compare them with other samples. Please add arrows indicating the staining intensity of these two samples to Fig3 C and D.

Certainly, we have now removed that sentence from the abstract (thanks!). We have circled the data points in Fig 3C and 3D corresponding to the staining intensity of the samples from Fig 5 (please see lines 660-661).

5. The authors need to mention not only TMPRSS2 but also Furin as protease involved in the activation of the SARS-CoV2 spike protein in the discussion. And also need to add discussion about TACE, the negative regulator of ACE2 expression.

Agreed, we have added these points which help clarify the importance of all 3 proteins. Please see lines 316-326 for a discussion of TMPRSS2 and Furin expression and lines 309-315 for a discussion of TACE.

Minor concerns

1. In Figure 2-5, could the authors include images of the entire lung and insets with the area of interest?

Thanks, we have now included the original 1x image for all figures and indicated the field that this magnified in the adjacent subpanel.

2. Please arrange the lung-stained images of the ventilator and spontaneous breathing group by age.

Corrected, we believe this makes the data more easily interpretable in chronological order, thanks!

3. Figure 2 A and B should be moved to supplementary materials. I think these are positive control for ACE2 staining, not the main result.

They have been moved to the supplement (please see S4 Fig).

4. Please add references to “A growing body of evidence suggests that ACE2 is highly associated with disease susceptibility and severity”. (p9, line 4-5)

Again an excellent point, we have clarified our intended meaning of the sentence as “A growing body of evidence suggests that ACE2 is highly associated with cellular susceptibility and disease severity”, and referenced the work of Hoffmann et al. (ref. 23) demonstrating the cell type specificity that ACE2 expression confers for SARS-CoV-2 infection and Pinto et al. (ref. 44) demonstrating that lung ACE2 RNA expression is upregulated in comorbid conditions known to predispose patients to severe Covid-19. Thanks so much for helping us clarify this sentence.

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We have amended our ethics statement in the Methods sections to include full name and reference to our IRB protocol (Stanford University IRB # 33727). Please see lines 97-98.

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Thanks, we have now included these at the end of the manuscript (please see lines 699-709).

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Angiotensin-converting enzyme 2 (ACE2) expression increases with age in patients requiring mechanical ventilation.

PONE-D-20-32785R1

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Thank you kindly for your review and extremely helpful suggestion. In addition to the direct viral RNA polymerase inhibitor (remdesivir), anti-inflammatory medications have emerged as a cornerstone in the treatment of severe Covid-19, particularly dexamethasone. Additionally, unpublished randomized control data announced by Eli Lilly (from the ACTT-2 trial) have revealed that the JAK1 and JAK2 inhibitor baricitinib improves outcomes in patients with Covid-19. At first, this might seem counterintuitive as the FDA lists severe viral infection requiring hospitalization as a contraindication to baricitinib (https://www.accessdata.fda.gov/drugsatfda_docs/label/2018/207924s000lbl.pdf). However, ACE2 expression has been demonstrated to be downstream of IFNα2 and IFNγ (Ziegler et al.; ref. 40 in our manuscript) and these two cytokines signal through JAK1/2 (please see Rönnblom and Leonard Lupus Sci Med 2019, PMID: 31497305 for an excellent review). We hypothesize that the potentially counterintuitive effect of anti-inflammatory medications might be working by reducing ACE2 expression in damaged lung. We have now included a discussion of these potential therapeutics in the context of our findings (please see lines 294-302). We are very grateful that you motivated our discussion of this idea.

Your answer to the above question is accurate.

Reviewer #2: The author responded politely to all questions and the manuscript has been improved very much.

No further revision is required.

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