Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 24, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-11899 Long-term maxillary anteroposterior changes following maxillary protraction with or without expansion: a meta-analysis and meta-regression PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Huang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Although the manuscript presents potential for publication in PLOS ONE, some major points raised by the reviewers must be addressed. We are looking forward to your revised manuscript. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 05 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The article addresses a relevant topic for orthodontics. However, revisions needed to be made to improve the article and strengthen the study's findings. 1) INTRODUCTION: • Authors should cite more data showing the prevalence of skeletal Class III midfacial hypoplasia found at the population level. • It is important to show data from studies that explain the etiology, clinical, epidemiological characteristics, and forms of treatment, highlighting their advantages, disadvantages and possible long-term effects. • The impacts on quality of life can also be highlighted. • Before the objectives, the authors should write the importance of studies like this for the advancement of scientific knowledge and clinical decision making. • Is the review unprecedented? In the literature, I identified the existence of other systematic reviews on the topic. Therefore, the authors need to explain the differential of this review in relation to the others that have already been published and what it adds. 2) MATHERIAL AND METHODS: • Was the review protocol previously registered in an online database, such as PROSPERO? • In the methodology, it is recommended to insert a table with the search strategy used in each specific database, for reasons of search transparency and also because each database requires adaptations in the strategy. • How was the selection and exclusion of duplicate references made? Manually? Using any software? The authors need to provide more details in the materials and methods on how the studies were selected, according to the PRISMA items. • How was the examiner calibrated? Did the authors carry out any previous training? Was the kappa test to assess agreement between examiners calculated? • The list of references for eligible studies needs to be consulted to identify possible articles that were not identified through searches. • As it involves a review of clinical trials, it is recommended to apply the GRADE tool (Grading of Recommendations, Assessment, Development and Evaluations) to summarize the quality of available scientific evidence. • Why did the authors not use the standardized mean difference in the meta-analysis instead of the mean difference? This detail needs to be justified. 3) RESULTS • The results need to be described in more detail. • In the abstract, the authors declare that: “However, no statistically significant changes (mean difference, 1.54°; 95% confidence interval, 1.06-2.02; and p < 0.001) were observed in the SNA angle in the groups, when measured after 3 years of follow-up.” If the p-value was significant, why was there no statistical difference? The results are conflicting. 4) DISCUSSION • The discussion can be improved. The results of the studies need to be discussed in greater depth. The review included a large number of studies, but in the discussion, it is necessary to make clear the implications for the clinical practice of the results obtained. What are the strengths of this review compared to those already published on the topic? What can be better evaluated in future studies? Reviewer #2: Summary This is a potentially interesting study, but has several issues with the methods and reporting of it. These need to be taken into account and the study revised, before this can be further assessed for appropriateness. Thanks for letting me see this. Specific comments 1. The abstract seems well-written. I would suggest however to also add the quality of evidence and existing limitations. 2. The last search date (Dec 19) is half a year old, therefore the review might be outdated. 3. Please provide the full exact search strategy for at least one database. 4. Why was January 1990 chosen as a date? 5. “Another inclusion criterion was adherence to the PICOS principle.”: What is meant with this? 6. “…age ranged from 6 to 16 years…”: why was this chosen? Was this criterion checked for all included studies? 7. “the intervention was the selection of different treatment of FM and FM/RME”: this is unclear, please explain. 8. “The outcome (O) of interest was long-term (lasting 9 years) maxillary changes in sagittal dimensions, defined as Sella-Nasion-A point (SNA).”: you should be here explaining the a priori methods. Not the results of your study. 9. The term ‘quality’ that you use when evaluating RCTs is not correct. Please check the PRISMA statement for the appropriate terminology. 10. Choosing between a fixed- or random-effects model according to the observed (calculated) heterogeneity is a very problematic method. The two models are not interchangeable and have different assumptions/method/interpretation. Please check with your statistician. 11. “…to perform sensitivity test, meta-regression analysis, and subgroup analysis.”: please explain in detail. 12. Reporting biases are best performed only when you have a sufficient number of studies at your disposal. Please check the recommendations for such tests. 13. The authors should provide a list with all included/excluded studies from their search together with the exclusion criteria. 14. Is it prudent to naively include/combine both RCTs and non-RCTs, since the latter can introduce additional bias in your results? 15. What kind of cohort studies were included? Prospective or retrospective? The latter are usually more biased than the former. 16. Please provide additional details in Table I regarding the patients’ (how was skel. Class III defined), the treatment (appliance, duration, etc), and the outcomes assessed. Also relaying the actual conclusions of each study might be confusing, since they might disagree with the results of the meta-analysis. 17. I am having issues with the risk of bias assessment presented. I checked randomly 2 included studies and I do not agree with the lenient assessment done with the authors. This needs to be checked to see if methods were appropriately applied. 18. The authors need to provide in a table the full results of all meta-analyses performed, including studies, estimate with imprecision, p value, and heterogeneity statistics. 19. How come the ‘explained variance’ is presented in table 3 but has not been described in the methods before? This is inappropriate. Also, reporting such a thing in meta-regressions that are not statistically significant is misleading. Please check with your statistician. 20. I see no mention of assessing the quality of evidence with the GRADE framework, even though this is a standard approach for all systematic reviews nowadays. 21. I see no clear section outlining the limitation of the present study. 22. Figure 2 is not necessary—you can give this information plainly in text. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Spyridon N. Papageorgiou [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Long-term maxillary anteroposterior changes following maxillary protraction with or without expansion: a meta-analysis and meta-regression PONE-D-20-11899R1 Dear Dr. Huang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Claudia Trindade Mattos, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors accepted most of the suggestions and the article has improved substantially and is now suitable for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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PONE-D-20-11899R1 Long-term maxillary anteroposterior changes following maxillary protraction with or without expansion: a meta-analysis and meta-regression Dear Dr. Huang: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Claudia Trindade Mattos Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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