Peer Review History
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript entitled “Utilisation of semiconductor sequencing for detection of actionable fusions in solid tumors” retrospectively evaluated 89 actionable fusions detected from 1112 patients with solid tumors. The authors analyzed genomic profiling, targeted therapies, and clinical trials of the identified fusions. This manuscript is well written and below are the comments. Major comments: 1. The authors conclude that the majority of detected actionable fusions are independent of tumor type or tissue of origin. However, Table 1 and Figure 2 shows that there are specific fusions only detected in specific tumor types, such as EGFR VIII in glioma and prostate cancer. In addition, other retrospective studies have concluded that the frequency of fusions identified is dependent on specific tumor type (e.g. Pavalan et al., 2019). The authors should provide other data/evidences to support this conclusion. 2. In addition, this study identified 51 driver genes in the driver-partner fusions. It would be more comprehensive if the authors could include additional analysis of actionable variants of these driver genes to further conclude the association between actionable fusions and the tumor types. 3. Figure 1 and Figure 2 provide frequency of the actionable gene fusions in solid tumors, is it possible to provide a summary table of the molecular findings separated by age and gender? 4. The manuscript only includes the 89 actionable fusion gene identified. Can the author also provide a summary table of the other fusions detected in different tumor types? Minor comments: 1. Second and third paragraphs of the discussion sections can be moved to the result section. 2. Type and writing errors in introduction and discussion section (e.g. line 226, 228) 3. There are many fusion databases available (e.g. TCGA fusion), the authors should consider comparing the fusion distribution from this study to the databases. Reviewer #2: This is an interesting study to demonstrate the frequency of fusions in solid tumors and the importance and opportunity for expanded precision medicine in patient treatment. The manuscript is well written and does provide a good basis of information however it can be expanded further for impact and significance. Specific comments: 1. Expansion on the cohort: a. Overall information for whole group such as, tumors originated in females or males, age demarcation, tumor type is primary or metastatic, etc. b. Further cohort delineation in regard to whether the cohort was screened for other immunohistochemical status or molecular testing such as SNVs or MNVs. Are the identified fusions seen in SNV negative samples or equally? Etc. c. Outcome information for any potential correlation to fusion containing tumors and disease outcome 2. Methods section clarifications are needed to ensure the ability to replicate the data. In addition, in supplementary tables 2 and 3, Oncofocus test is mentioned but not described at all in the methods or other sections. 3. Fusion read count could be expanded, and any correlation between tumor types, tumor percentage and fusion read count could be valuable. 4. The figures focus on frequency however adding the number of cases that had the specific fusions to the charts would add to the figures. Reviewer #3: 4/3/2021 Dear Dr., Reddi, Thank you for inviting me to review the original research article titled “Utilisation of semiconductor sequencing for detection of actionable fusions in solid tumors” by Loddo et al. This is a well-written manuscript emphasizing the importance of fusion gene analysis and precision medicine in the NGS era. Especially, the discussion section of the manuscript covered and linked an array of interesting topics. I do not see any major flaws in the manuscript, and I recommend that this manuscript can be accepted for publication once addressing the following suggestions. Comments 1) Line 34 has a typo with an extra “W” before the word “Where”. 2) In Line 65, the sentence starting with “This platform enables..” can be rephrased as “This platform enables detection of 867 druggable driver-partner oncogenic fusions via analysis of 51 driver and 349 partner genes, with linkage to 140 targeted 68 therapy protocols”. 3) Line 96 can be rephrased as “ The NGS platform includes the targeting of 51 driver genes and 349 partner genes enabling detection of 867 druggable driver-partner oncogenic fusions that is linked to 140 targeted therapy protocols.” 4) In Lines 137 and 141 – I would not call EGFRvIII as a gene fusion event, but it is a gene rearrangement. 5) In Line 228 – there is a typo “ keeping wFith” 6) Line 231 – The first sentence can be rephrased. Thanks, Pavalan ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-21-02472R1Utilisation of semiconductor sequencing for detection of actionable fusions in solid tumorsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Loddo Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by March 25, 2022. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Honey V. Reddi Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Dear Dr. Loddo - While some of your responses have been accepted by our reviewers, reviewer 1 has noted that you have not provided a specific response to their earlier comments and it is important that those comments be addressed. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors did not response to the comments below. This manuscript entitled “Utilisation of semiconductor sequencing for detection of actionable fusions in solid tumors” retrospectively evaluated 89 actionable fusions detected from 1112 patients with solid tumors. The authors analyzed genomic profiling, targeted therapies, and clinical trials of the identified fusions. This manuscript is well written and below are the comments. Major comments: 1. The authors conclude that the majority of detected actionable fusions are independent of tumor type or tissue of origin. However, Table 1 and Figure 2 shows that there are specific fusions only detected in specific tumor types, such as EGFR VIII in glioma and prostate cancer. In addition, other retrospective studies have concluded that the frequency of fusions identified is dependent on specific tumor type (e.g. Pavalan et al., 2019). The authors should provide other data/evidences to support this conclusion. 2. In addition, this study identified 51 driver genes in the driver-partner fusions. It would be more comprehensive if the authors could include additional analysis of actionable variants of these driver genes to further conclude the association between actionable fusions and the tumor types. 3. Figure 1 and Figure 2 provide frequency of the actionable gene fusions in solid tumors, is it possible to provide a summary table of the molecular findings separated by age and gender? 4. The manuscript only includes the 89 actionable fusion gene identified. Can the author also provide a summary table of the other fusions detected in different tumor types? Minor comments: 1. Second and third paragraphs of the discussion sections can be moved to the result section. 2. Type and writing errors in introduction and discussion section (e.g. line 226, 228) 3. There are many fusion databases available (e.g. TCGA fusion), the authors should consider comparing the fusion distribution from this study to the databases. Reviewer #3: Thank you authors for your efforts to include my suggestions in the manuscript. I am certain that this manuscript is acceptable for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Utilisation of semiconductor sequencing for detection of actionable fusions in solid tumors PONE-D-21-02472R2 Dear Dr. Loddo, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Honey V. Reddi Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): We thank the authors for addressing the reviewer comments. The manuscript is now acceptable for publication. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Accept ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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PONE-D-21-02472R2 Utilisation of semiconductor sequencing for detection of actionable fusions in solid tumours Dear Dr. Loddo: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Honey V. Reddi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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