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PONE-D-20-31123 Isolation, Identification, and Antimicrobial Susceptibility Pattern of Campylobacter jejuni and Campylobacter coli from Cattle, Goat, and Chicken Meats in Mekelle, Ethiopia PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gugsa, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by November 25, 2020. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Summary In this manuscript by Hagos et. al., authors isolated Campylobacter spp. from cattle, goat and chicken meat sources in the city of Mekell of Ethiopia, and their antibiotic resistance profiling was performed. This study is significant since the Campylobacter infection is a major foodborne bacterial pathogen and their prevalence in various sources result in foodborne outbreaks. Also, these sources also can act as major hub for antibiotic resistance transfer. However, my major concern is that the selection of sample size for different meat type is not systematic or not defined well. And different meat types were having huge variation in sample sizes, provided, the study was conducted as a cross sectional study by actively collecting various meat types. Major comments 1. Different meat types have different number of sample sizes, what was the basis of choosing the sample sizes for each category? Abstract says that the samples were collected from abattoir, butcher shops and restaurants, it should be clarified that how many samples are collected from each sourced for each meat type. 2. The ladder for PCR is not well defined and bands are not clear. Is there any reason why both C. jejuni and C. coli have different number of samples? Were they all collected from same meat type? 3. Authors discuss that the difference in prevalence of Campylobacter could be due to the difference in hygienic conditions in the chicken processing. Did the authors notice significant difference in hygienic conditions in processing various meats, if so, what were the differences? Minor comments 1. The highest prevalence of Campylobcter is found in chicken meat, could it because of lower sample size of chicken meat? Was there any species difference between different meat types? 2. Some sentences are incomplete especially when quoting published articles, needs to double checked. 3. Reference formatting is not consistent. For example, page number in reference 52 compared to others. Reviewer #2: Summary: The study investigated the prevalence of Campylobacter spp. in meat samples from various species followed by their antibiotic resistance profiling. The study is straightforward. Improvement is needed in the result and discussion sections. Please revise the manuscript based on my comments below. Title: ok Abstract: ok Introduction: ok Study area: ok Study design: ok Line 104-106: Sample size: Since it is known that chicken meat primarily harbors Campylobacter, why is the sample size of chicken meat less than cattle or goat. How was the sample size decided? 144: Typo- Mm or mM? Results: Question: How is the flow of meat till it reaches the restaurant? Is it Bucher to abattoir to restaurant? Why is butcher and abattoir a different category? Can the author comment on the significance of having butcher and abattoir separate? I am interested to see if during the supply chain, there is any change in the prevalence of Campylobacter. Interested to know what the authors think about this. Figure 2: The quality of the figure is not publication standard. The 462 and 589 bp are too close to discern and the ladder is not well spread out. I recommend that the authors run the gel again. Maybe a thicker gel (2%) will help spread the bands out. It is also not clear if the c. coli or C. jejuni are randomly selected to run on the gel among the various strains available. Please explain. Table 4 needs revision since some of the words are cut off from the manuscript. Also, please explain the numbers outside of the bracket. For example in Ampicillin resistant 2(96.9) what is 2? Discussion: Line 228-234: Can the authors comment on the sample size of studies where a higher Campylobacter prevalence was observed. How does the sample size affect the prevalence estimations? Campylobacter in Cattle and goat meat: What is the potential source of Campylobacter in cattle and goat meat? Line 258-263: Can the authors elaborate on why such a difference is observed in prevalence? Line 264-272: The authors need to provide justification on the selection of the two genes to differentiate jejuni and coli. How are the two genes different? Where are they located on the genome? What is their function? Why are they separated based on species? What specific role do they play in the two species? Are they present on mobile genetic elements or DNA that can be exchanged between the species? These information needs to be added to the discussion. Line 283-298: In its current form, the discussion on MDR or resistance in Campylobacter is very basic. Authors should include information on the timeline of antibiotic resistance analysis by the various studies and if there is any temporal changes observed. Of course, being from different geographical regions, a temporal correlation would be difficult but still an attempt should be made to observe trends. Also, the authors should comment on the potential route of exposure of Campylobacter to antibiotics in the various regions. IF there are regulations in place to reduce use of antibiotics and if that is bringing any change. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-20-31123R1 Isolation, Identification, and Antimicrobial Susceptibility Pattern of Campylobacter jejuni and Campylobacter coli from Cattle, Goat, and Chicken Meats in Mekelle, Ethiopia PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gugsa, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Please make the following revisions. Line 69, Page The situation seems to deteriorate more rapidly in developing countries where there is the widespread and uncontrolled use of antibiotics [22]. Delete “the” before widespread.. Line 79 goat, and chicken collected from the abattoir, butcher shops, and restaurants in Mekelle City. Replace “the” with “an” if samples were collected from a single abattoir. Line 87 The study was conducted from October 2015 to May 2016 at the abattoir, butcher shops, and See previous comment. Line 191-192 Contamination rate of C. jejuni and C. coli in the different samples types (sub-heading) Replace “samples types” with “sample types”. Figure 1 PCR products Separation of bands not clear. Replace the figure with a new figure showing band separation. 219-223 Species based antibiogram results of the isolates revealed that the high level of sensitivity of both C. jejuni and C. coli was observed against Norfloxacin and Erythromycin, were 98.1% ………..as it is shown in Table 5. Revise the statements for proper grammar. 270-273 This might be because of an extra chance of acquiring contamination in restaurants due to mishandling of meat or cross-contamination among different carcasses or individuals who are working in restaurants might serve as a source of contamination Revise the statements for proper grammar. Reviewer 2 comment “Line 283-298: In its current form, the discussion on MDR or resistance in Campylobacter is very basic. Authors should include information on the timeline of antibiotic resistance analysis by the various studies and if there is any temporal changes observed. Of course, being from different geographical regions, a temporal correlation would be difficult but still an attempt should be made to observe trends. Also, the authors should comment on the potential route of exposure of Campylobacter to antibiotics in the various regions. IF there are regulations in place to reduce use of antibiotics and if that is bringing any change. The authors have not responded adequately to the above comment and failed to revise the discussion. The authors are requested to respond/revise to the comments other than the timeline. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Isolation, Identification, and Antimicrobial Susceptibility Pattern of Campylobacter jejuni and Campylobacter coli from Cattle, Goat, and Chicken Meats in Mekelle, Ethiopia PONE-D-20-31123R2 Dear Dr. Gugsa, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kumar Venkitanarayanan, DVM, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-20-31123R2 Isolation, Identification, and Antimicrobial Susceptibility Pattern of Campylobacter jejuni and Campylobacter coli from Cattle, Goat, and Chicken Meats in Mekelle, Ethiopia Dear Dr. Gugsa: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Kumar Venkitanarayanan Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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