Peer Review History
Original SubmissionOctober 13, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-32100 The critical importance of mask seals on respirator performance: an analytical and simulation approach PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Collins, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 23 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study investigates the effect of mask sealing, which is significant but has less understanding in literature. The author calculates the influence of face-seal leakage on the filtration efficiency based on FEM model and analytical model. Good agreement between analytical and numerical models are obtained. This study points out an importance conclusion on the significance of forming a tight seal of mask. The language and results are well organized. However, the following issues should be addressed before accepting for publication: 1. The author should double check the format issue. For example, there should be a dot after the abbreviation. For example, the “Fig 7a” should be “Fig. 7a” in line 390. 2. In a real mask, the inner space is 3D curved shape, with gaps in both sizes. However, in this study, the region is simplified to be a rectangular, with gap only in one side. Can the results of the simplified case applied to that of the real case? The author should further state the difference between these two situations. 3. In Fig.3 (a), the yellow line is defined as a “wall”. However, the definition of a “wall” in CFD indicate the boundary with no permeability. The phrase should be modified to be “porous media” or something more appropriate. 4. In Fig.3 (a), what is the solid purple line indicated? It seems unnecessary. 5. In the caption of Fig.3 (b), line 245, is the velocity distribution generated in inspiration or expiration process? It should be stated clearly. 6. In the line 275, the author mentioned that the refined mesh size is 0.2 mm. However, more detail should be provided to state that the result has been independent with the mesh size. Reviewer #2: This manuscript describes the application of an analytical model and finite element model to determine the amount of air that bypasses masks or respirators with poor fit during inhalation and exhalation. The authors perform the analysis in order to demonstrate the importance of a tight seal between face and mask/respirator to mask effectiveness. The models appear to be sound and produce interesting results in terms of the fluid flow through masks and around edges for simplified geometries. The findings that fit are important for filtration efficiency, however, are not surprising. The importance of a tight seal (good mask fit) has been very well understood for a long time. In fact, fit testing of respirators is mandated in the United States by the Occupational Safety and Health Administration if they are required in the workplace. Specific comments: Filtration efficiency has a very specific definition when applied to respirators and masks – related to the penetration by 300 nm particles under specific pressure and flow conditions over a specific unit area. Here the term appears to be redefined to describe the fraction of particles that passes around and through a mask. To avoid confusion with the more standard term, use of an alternative term is recommended. Fit factor, may be a more appropriate concept. Lines 406-410: These results are in general agreement with published studies on the importance of fit that use physical measurements rather than model simulations. A more important application of the authors’ model might be in assessing the performance over time of respirator materials as moisture and particles build up in specific areas of the mask/respirator where flows are most concentrated. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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The critical importance of mask seals on respirator performance: an analytical and simulation approach PONE-D-20-32100R1 Dear Dr. Collins, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Dahua Shou Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-32100R1 The critical importance of mask seals on respirator performance: an analytical and simulation approach Dear Dr. Collins: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Dahua Shou Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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