Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 11, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-27361 Fetal, neonatal, and infant outcomes associated with maternal Zika virus infection during pregnancy: a systematic review and meta-analysis. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Martins, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Two experts in the field handled your manuscript, and we are very thankful for their time and efforts. Although interest was found in your review and meta-analysis, numerous comments and concerns arose. Notably, the references need to be updated and the novelty is in question. There are helpful suggestions from the reviewers to increase the novelty and readability of this manuscript. Please address ALL of the reviewers' comments in your revised manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 26 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for asking me to review this manuscript. Although this is a useful exercise and has the potential to make an interesting paper, there are several issues that need addressing. Firstly, the review is already very out of date as the search was not updated after December 2019. There are several publications that were published subsequently that should be included in the review and meta-analysis, including the following paper as well as several others: Zika virus infection in pregnancy and adverse fetal outcomes in São Paulo State, Brazil: a prospective cohort study NS Clemente, EB Brickley, ES Paixão, MF De Almeida, RE Gazeta, ... Scientific reports 10 (1), 1-10 The review should, in my opinion also include other important perinatal outcomes including small for gestational age or low birthweight and prematurity. Particularly as the authors said, there already several SRs and meta-analyses looking at microcephaly and other CNS outcomes, so this review needs to bring something novel. The other SRs and meta-analyses should be incorporated into this review, in my opinion, using appropriate techniques to do meta-analysis of meta-analyses. This would provide a more accurate estimate of the outcomes. Otherwise, it is difficult to interpret these findings. The discussion/conclusion in particular is really quite poor, there many grammatical errors, difficult to read, rambling in nature and not really discussing the findings of the SR. Below are a few more specific points for the authors to conider: Lines 62-65: long sentence and you lose the point. Suggest to revise. Did increased surveillance mean that other states started reporting it? Or other states were reporting this at the same time as well and the surveillance systems picked up on this? For example, I think there were cases being of microcephaly being reported in Paraiba at the same time as the Pernambuco ones Line 87: The prevalence of fetal and neonatal disorders in pregnant women with proven ZIKV infection – This sentence is not correct as fetal and neonatal disorders by definition do not occur in pregnant women. Also, it would be good to be more specific rather than just saying ‘fetal and neonatal disorders’ for example perinatal outcomes and CNS findings at birth? Lines 89-92: Again, this could be re-phrased to be more engaging and specific Lines 92-94: Maybe add some more specific examples, otherwise the sentence sounds very generic 100-105: Maybe present as a diagram or with cleaner text/numbering? 111: It would be good to know which included studies were grey literature? 130: ‘Seccional’ – what do you mean by this? Is it cross-sectional studies? If this is the case – the abstract implies only cohort studies were included whereas this implies it was cross sectional and cohort 148: Abortion implies termination of pregnancy – do you mean this? Or do you mean early miscarriage? Lines 157-159: Repetition of lines 140-142 168: magazine – replace with journal 170: number of exposed and unexposed what? Please specify 170-171- Repetition of exposed and unexposed. Also, how did you measure confounding and interaction? 176-178: Please check grammar Lines 190-2: Please explain this for the reader- is this a good agreement? What are the parameters for this test? 196: The reasons for excluding the other 36 articles were – where did this 36 come from? And how did you get from 1233 after removal of duplicates to 51 articles? 198: Were the SRs you excluded relevant to your study question? This should be clarified 204-209: Not sure if it is worth listing the studies here as the information is in the table below Table 1 – typo – observational and accent on Colombia. It would be best to use the the correct epidemiological terminology for these i.e) cohort in prospective. If retrospective – are they case controls? Were they looking at the adverse outcome first and then obtaining exposure variables retrospectively? Or are the cross sectional? You mention you included cross-sectional studies but then none are cross sectional study design in the table. Line 256: prospects – typo – but please see above 268: 21st not 21th 269-271: Please make your point a bit clearer – you mean those without microcephaly but with CNS abnormalities or ocular/other abnormalities? 272: It would be good to know how many studies looked at proportionate and disproportionate microcephaly as well 280: Usually known as cranial ultrasound rather than transfontanelle. And please write CT in brackets after computed tomography 281: magnetic resonance imaging (MRI) I would be tempted just to reference the studies rather than list the authors every time you talk about the findings for ease of reading, unless you are talking about one specific study, like in line 284 287: which – typo 291: described x2 – repetitive – please revise 294: newborns – typo Table 2: heart attack???? 310: conceptuses – this is not correct – please revise 312: “ showed that the presence of at least one CNS abnormality had the highest prevalence ratio 0.06 (95% 313 CI 0.02-0.09).” Please revise the structure of this sentence 315: Is prevalence ratio the best way of expressing this? Stillbirth – does that mean no studies ad any women who had stillbirths? IS it not worth joining fetal loss/stillbirth/early or late miscarriage as one category? 368-386 – I don’t really understand why this bit of the discussion. You can’t really compare European data from one period to Brazilian data from another period. Also, this is surely a systematic review looking at the prevalence of microcephaly so why is this talking about other studies not in this SR. The discussion should start off summarising the salient points of the study. This seems like a long ramble into the pathophysiology of transplacental transmission which, although interesting, is missing the point of your SR a little. 388: “can be explained mainly” may be best to say: “could be explained by” 390: “in addition to the fact that population samples of exposed pregnant women of very different sizes (28 to 19,963 pregnant women)” – please revise structure/grammar 393: “Besides, the non-differentiation of the prevalence of microcephaly for exposure to ZIKV in different trimesters may also have contributed to this difference,” Do you mean some studies might have captured more women infected in the first trimester and others more women infected in the third? Please explain further in the text 396-398: Please revise grammar and structure 400: It would only increase prevalence if these were in utero antenatal surgical procedures which I don’t think they are? 401-403: Please revise 404: Ref 48 is from a textbook so likely out of date. Also – need to compare prevalence in the same population otherwise can’t draw comparisons. 412-413: Please revise 414-415: Especially in newborns/infants? Surely this is the only category you think about congenital infections in? 417: “intracranial calcification occurs in 30 to 90% of cases of congenital cytomegalovirus (CMV) infection and 50 to 80% of cases of congenital toxoplasmosis” This seems very high – are you sure this is correct? Which country is this data from? 423-425: Please revise – unable to follow 426: Adolescence?? With congenital ZIKV? 463-465: It seem strange to quote one paper and then say it is in agreement with your SR? Surely this paper should be included in the SR? 467: Disorders in concepts – please revise, concepts not correct term here 466: typo – analyses. Also – if meta-analyses already exist, these should have been incorporated into this meta-analysis using appropriate techniques to make it a more all-encompassing review 471-481: please review grammar and structure 481: Different outcomes or different definitions or defining criteria? 485: repetition, study, studies – please revise 487-490: Please revise grammar 495: “disorders in fetuses/newborns” – again, be more specific 496-498 and conclusion as a whole: Please revise grammar. You have not summarised here what your findings were. These are quite generic comments. It would be good to have closing comments based on your findings Reviewer #2: The authors performed in December 2019 a well planned and executed meta-analysis of pregnancy and neonatal outcomes associated with maternal Zika virus infection during pregnancy. Among 15 cohorts included in the systematic review, they were able to analyze miscarriage , stillbirths, microcephaly, CNS abnormalities, intracranial calcifications and ventriculomegaly. Due to the heterogeneity of the data, not all cohorts contributed to all endpoint meta-analysis. The manuscript is technically sound, well written and adequately approach the findings in a comprehensive manner in the discussion. The overall findings had already been known in the literature. A missing point that might bring more light into the issue would to characterize what is now generally accepted as typical congenital ZIKV syndrome findings . Among those carrying CNS abnormalities/microcephaly what would be the prevalence rate of severe typical CNS involvement? these data might be available in some of the selected publications. If so, it could be analyzed in the manuscript. Also, it would be helpful to know if other secondary outcomes such as eye, ear abnormalities have been searched for. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Marisa Marcia Mussi-Pinhata [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-20-27361R1 Fetal, neonatal, and infant outcomes associated with maternal Zika virus infection during pregnancy: a systematic review and meta-analysis. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Martins, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. There are remaining comments that need to be addressed. A copyeditor must be contacted by the authors to improve the English grammar and syntax. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 12 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors addressed the referees' questions. By increasing one year of searching for available articles and including other outcomes of interest, they strengthened their work's usefulness to the audience. However, considering that this analysis should have englobed all articles by November 2020, I missed one that complies with the selection criteria published in September, 2020 which could add information to this metanalysis. "Coutinho CM, et al; NATZIG Cohort Study Team. Early maternal Zika infection predicts severe neonatal neurological damage: results from the prospective Natural History of Zika Virus Infection in Gestation cohort study. BJOG. 2020 Sep 13. doi: 10.1111/1471-0528.16490. Epub ahead of print. PMID: 32920998." A revision of the English language would additionally improve the manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Marisa Marcia Mussi-Pinhata [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-27361R2 Fetal, neonatal, and infant outcomes associated with maternal Zika virus infection during pregnancy: a systematic review and meta-analysis. Dear Dr. Martins: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Frank T. Spradley Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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