Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-16233 Contextualizing the Think Crisis-Think Female Stereotype in Explaining the Glass Cliff Gendered Traits, Gender, and Type of Crisis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kulich, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 13 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf 2. Please include the full name of the Institutional Review Board that approved your study in the ethics statement. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): I have the reviews back from experts in the field and they generally see the merits of the manuscript. However, both reviewers also raise major concerns over the current manuscript, which I completely agree. I'll raise these major concerns in the following but please also pay attention to minor concerns each individual reviewer raised. 1. Problems with the data and analyses Data: In Study 1, you excluded participants who chose the extreme agentic filler candidate. I disagree with this choice (also see comment from Reviewer 1). You cannot exclude participants just because they do not respond the way you expect them to unless there are sufficient reasons for doing so (e.g., those who do not pass the manipulation check). Thus, I would like you to put these participants back to your data set. Data analysis: In Study 1, you include two contrasts in the regression models. However, it is not clear to me how the Contrast 2 could be interpreted (also see comment from Reviewer 1). I assume that the inclusion of the Contrast 2 is to ascertain whether the two experimental conditions differ from the control condition but not in the way you expected (which was tested in Contrast 1). In this case, the contrast should be 1 = relational crisis, 0 = no crisis, 1 = financial crisis so that the intercept is more interpretable. In addition, the interaction term (gender traits x candidate sex) was not tested consistently across studies (see comment from Reviewer 2). Please test it across all studies. In addition, if the contrast 1 is significant, please indicate whether the two comparisons were both significant (relational crisis vs. no crisis; financial crisis vs. no crisis) or not. Lastly, I agree with the Reviewer 1 that you should be cautious about using difference scores. It would be better to test them separately because communal and agency traits are of two dimensions rather than two poles of one dimension. 2. Problems with presentation c. literature gaps: There are some choices made in the method section in which readers have not been informed (e.g., the organizational roles; the distinction of traits and behaviors). b. Please reorder the information, move the sensitivity test to the method section under participants (because the information pertains to the sample size) and address the concern raised by Reviewer 1. c. I would rather see tables with all the results than the bar figures that contain very little information. Right now, we only get a glimpse of the logistic models, without seeing the whole picture. d. please list the case number for the ethical approval in the text. e. Whenever a main effect appears, please conduct post hoc comparisons to ascertain whether the two experimental conditions differ from the control condition (e.g., on page 30, only mean scores were reported without the p-values for the comparisons). f. I am very confused in terms of how the analysis was done done in Study 3. You stated that “We conducted multinominal logistic regressions…” on line 870 but listed “crisis type as outcome variable (1 = relational crisis, 2 = financial crisis, 3 = no crisis…” on lines 872-875. You further reported findings in the first regression model and stated that “the probability to choose the relational crisis (versus no crisis) on lines 876 – 877 and further “the probability to choose the no crisis (versus final crisis)… on line 879. I am not sure how categorical variables can be numbered and entered in a regression model and why the reference group kept changing in the findings of the same regression model. Findings in Study 3 should be reported so readers understand what was done and can interpret the findings themselves. g. There are places that it’s quite difficult to follow/read. Please carefully read your manuscript and revise accordingly or seek editing services. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? --First, I would be cautious about drawing any conclusions--even negative conclusions-- from moderation analysis, as was done in Study 1, given the sample size. Roger Giner-Sorolla has a blog where he discusses in detail the specific problems of power analyses in moderation, and how GPower is not adequate. Second, I would also be cautious about using difference scores, as was done for leadership behaviors. In some literatures this is an accepted practice, however there are issues with this--for one example, see Cafri, van den Berg, & Brannick, 2010. Would it be a better practice to include communal and agentic traits/behaviors as separate mediators? PROCESS accepts this. If not, why not? Third, I did not understand the rationale for including Contrast 1 and Contrast 2 in the same analyses, nor how they were specifically related to Hypothesis 1. Fourth, I did not understand the argument made on lines 972-986, specifically to how these results challenge explanations of the glass cliff. I didn't see anything in the Intro or the hypotheses that specifically opposed these explanations, if that is what was meant by "challenging." Or does this have do with using women to signal change? I would be wary about concluding that the "signalling change hypothesis" (to say) doesn't work. These results do not completely support it, but there is some support and that could be meaningful. On this point, however, I was not clear. I understood that Studies 2 and 3 assessed this "hypothesis" in different ways, but the implications of the conflicting results was not immediately clear. I think it could be worthwhile to set aside a small space in the discussion section to explicitly discuss this aspect. Fifth, it seemed like the power analysis in Study 1 was introduced in between the treatment of Hypotheses 2 and 3. Did this also apply to Hypotheses 1 and 2? If they did, it was not immediately clear what the power analysis said about the results from H1 and H2, particularly because the power analysis was presented in terms of Odds Ratios but the results were presented in terms of betas. Sixth, there are many references to the glass cliff but I do not recall seeing an explicit explanation of what the glass cliff actually is. Seventh, I did not see a satisfactory explanation, or a potential explanation, for why there was a role for leadership behaviors but not leadership traits in Study 1. The explanation on lines 528-530 was not clear. Eighth, I did not understand the point or implications of the analysis described on lines 502-504. Ninth, I did not understand the reference to "competence ratings" or the consequent implications on lines 538-540. Tenth and finally, I was not convinced by the rationale to exclude participants who chose the extreme agentic candidate in Study 1. Authoritarian, tough, and competitive would not describe my preferred candidate but others may prefer this style--in any case, I didn't think that it is an obviously wrong choice that should be excluded. 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --I don't have any specific issues besides things I've mentioned above, particularly with use of difference scores. Is this a common feature of this specific literature? I would feel more comfortable, given the problems in difference scores, if they were not used or, at least, a convincing argument was made for their necessity. 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? First, it was a bit difficult to read in places. I think it would benefit from having the hypotheses put into their own specific section. The hypotheses were not complex but at times I had trouble keeping track of them and how they related to the results. Second, I think the manuscript could benefit from another pass of the language; there were numerous little passages throughout that, after awhile, made it difficult to read. For example, I had trouble with lines 132-133. Third, in some places (e.g., 855-856), the means and standard deviations were separated rather than being paired. This was confusing and honestly just kind of weird. Is there a reason why they cannot be paired? Despite my perhaps negative tone in places I thought that this was a fascinating paper that has a lot to add to the literature. Reviewer #2: PONE-D-20-16233: Contextualizing the Think Crisis-Think Female Stereotype in Explaining the Glass Cliff Gendered Traits, Gender, and Type of Crisis I appreciated the different designs across studies (e.g., within and between subjects) to test the hypotheses multiple ways. These designs also helped to compensate for particular flaws in any one study (e.g., lack of manipulation checks and counterbalancing candidate profiles in Study 1) and replicate the effects, even testing them across different cultures. I provide a few comments/suggestions below. When on pg. 8 the authors note that they are expanding on past research by investigating “gendered traits simultaneously with information on candidates’ gender” rather than in isolation, I assumed they would be looking at the interaction of these two factors. Yet, aside from Study 3’s nonsignificant interaction, no mention was made of this in terms of predictions or results. Is there a reason to predict that gender and gendered behavior would interact with each other? These data seem to have the capacity to test for this effect (that is the benefit of including both variables in the same study design) rather than looking at each individually. It is obvious from the graphs that both agency and communion are relevant to these leadership contents, although differences between conditions are tested using a difference score. In most cases, these average difference scores were negative, which means that even in the relational crisis in Study 2 agency was rated higher than communion (although this difference is less than in the other conditions). Thus, I would caution the authors not to make claims that imply that only communal traits are important in certain contexts – it appears that both types of traits are important. The difference between the ratings varies, but that difference could have stemmed from changes in agentic traits as well as communal traits so a difference in the means isn’t that informative unless you can also see the graph to visually (but not statistically) see what ratings are changing across conditions. If the authors want to make claims about the absolute value of the agentic or communal demands of the position, they may want to rather test for difference within each trait separately. Otherwise, any summary of the results and conclusions should make it clear that it was the difference between the traits or leadership behaviors that varied across conditions (and that agency was almost always rated higher than communion). I would have like more discussion of cultural differences and similarities across the studies, and what that means for choosing leaders in crisis situations, in the discussion section. How were the communal and agentic leadership behaviors chosen? Is there evidence (e.g., outside ratings or manipulation checks) that these are agentic behaviors? They are noted as task-oriented behaviors, but don’t strike me as particularly agentic - delivering on a goal or meeting an objective would look different based on what the goal or objective is. On pg. 38, now that the dependent variable has switched to one of three contexts, be careful how you talk about the results – saying that “female candidates were preferred by 53.7% of participants in the relational, 48.2% in the financial crisis, and 36.4% in the no crisis condition” doesn’t seem to make sense in this case, when there were no relational, financial, and crisis conditions but instead participants selected between these positions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-16233R1 Contextualizing the think crisis-think female stereotype in explaining the glass cliff: Gendered traits, gender, and type of crisis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kulich, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I have received comments from two previous reviewers and I share their view that the revised manuscript is very much improved. We, however, have some suggestions for the authors and would hope that the authors could incorporate these suggestions in the manuscript. In addition to the reviewers’ suggestions (also see the attached file), here are my suggestions.
Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 24 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed the comments from the first version of the manuscript. I have only a couple of minor points: If the odds ratio is noted at "eb", I would suggest the authors indicate this somehow as it is otherwise difficult to compare the power analysis to the results. Confidence intervals were not consistently given for all results. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Conrad Baldner Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Contextualizing the think crisis-think female stereotype in explaining the glass cliff: Gendered traits, gender, and type of crisis PONE-D-20-16233R2 Dear Dr. Kulich, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, I-Ching Lee Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-16233R2 Contextualizing the think crisis-think female stereotype in explaining the glass cliff: Gendered traits, gender, and type of crisis Dear Dr. Kulich: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. I-Ching Lee Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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