Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 1, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-16505 Hypersensitivity Reactions to Multiple Anti-tuberculosis Drugs PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yong-Soo Kwon, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. We have received two detailed reviews of your paper and after careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by the 3rd of September 2020. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Thank you for stating in the text of your manuscript " Informed consent was waived owing to the retrospective nature of the study, and patient information was anonymized and de-identified prior to analysis". Please also add this information to your ethics statement in the online submission form. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript addresses the issue of multiple drug hypersensitivity in the treatment of TBC. While there are published case reports, this seems to be the first retrospective chart analysis of a larger collective of patients. major comment: Methods line 75 ff: Am I correct in understanding that you performed oral provocation tests in all patients with clinical suspicion of drug allergy without prior skin testing or performing other diagnostic tests? This would be not in line with current recommendations and guidelines on the management of drug allergy and could be highly dangerous in DRESS. Please specify. It seems, as if some patients at least did receive skin tests (discussion second but last paragraph). If so, please present the results. Results: line 19/20 and table 1: it would be more interesting to discuss the time between start of treatment, first signs of hypersensitivity reaction, time between stop of treatment and oral challenge. Also: at the time of the challenges: where the patients treated with alternative/second line treatment for the TB? Any information on the inflammatory state (e.g.CRP, BSR, neutrophils, IL-6....) at the time table 1: - calculating percentages in single cases of two collectives that overlap is misleading, e.g. in line "Previous treatment history": 1/28 patients in the whole collective and 1/17 patients in the subgroup result in different percentages, but in the end, this is only one patient. I suggest to omit the percentages from the small subgroups. - skin rash: could you be more precise on the type and severity of clinical manifestation? macula-papular exanthema, AGEP, SDRIFE, FDE.......SJS/TEN - table 2/3/4: please separate immediate type/anaphylaxis and delayed type reactions or alternatively, omit the few immediate cases from the table 4. One would not expect any elevation in liver parameters etc. in anaphylaxis. Discussion line 15: what do you mean with “safely underwent the oral provocation tests”? Since you were able to confirm the clinical diagnosis of DHR by means of OPT those patients obviously reacted to the challenge, an at least unpleasant, if not to say potentially dangerous reaction that at least some of them could have been spared had you done a complete allergy workup beforehand. - A separate table of the outcome of the diagnostic drug challenge as compared to the initial reaction would be useful with regard to the type and severity of the initial reaction, the type and severity of the reaction to the oral provocation and the further course of the treatment and potential further reactions etc. Did any of the patients with initial DRESS syndrome develop signs of systemic reaction upon oral provocation or did they “only” develop cutaneous signs? Discussion line 40 “There were discrepancies….” Could you further speculate on the reason for this discrepancy based on a comparison between your patient collective and the other ones published? Also, based on the mode of action of rifampicin and the other drugs in question? Discussion line 53: crossreactivity between rifampicin and ethambutol? Is there evidence for that? If yes, based on what? The chemical structure and mode of action are quite different. Discussion line 58: please speculate on the reason for the reduced treatment success rate minor comments: Introduction line 40 ff: please be more precise along the lines of the ICON-paper you have cited.. A DHR is not "similar" to drug allergy and DHR do usually not occur at any time or after "many" days Introduction line 57: omit with Methods: lines 79 ff: please specify the setting for immediate and delayed drug allergy: drug challenges in the hospital, at home, how long and how are the patients monitored table 1: allergic disease: do you mean atopic disease? if yes, please change, if no, please specify Results (Comparisons of causative drugs and laboratory findings between single and multiple drug hypersensitivity groups, line 11 ff and table 4: this analysis is completely missing in the method section. Discussion in general, esp. last two paragraphs and figure 1: proofreading by a native speaker is needed, there are a number of grammatical errors. Reviewer #2: This is a useful manuscript that documents outcomes of an oral challenge of patients who developed hypersensitivity reactions to first-line TB drugs. There are some improvements that can be made to this manuscript that would add significantly to its value in a field where there is limited data. Major Queries 1. Line 92-95 – was DRESS the only reaction studied. If so then this should be clarified in the introduction. If not the criteria for diagnosing the others should be included 2. How as anaphylaxis diagnosed? 3. Table 1 Are pruritus and fever always markers of hypersensitivity? Or are these part of a specific phenotype of ADR? It would be better if the authors classified/stratified the cases based on phenotype (i.e DRESS;anaphylaxis; sjs/ten; maculopapular etc. 4. The authors need to elaborate more on these. 5. How were positive reaction to oral challenge determined? Were there ant clinical features or only laboratory features? I suggest a table that includes every patient and the clinical features of a reaction, its timing etc. This will help others to identify the clinical features of this rechallenge reactions. 6. It would be useful to detail the interval between initial ADR and challenge reaction for each patient and compare this to those who did not develop a challenge reaction. It is well established that the closer the challenge is performed to the index ADR the higher is the likelihood of a challenge reaction. (40 vs 28) 7. Table 4. Does the initial event refer to the index drug reaction and which lab findings are reflected here. An average or the highest value during the event? 8. Line 110 and table 4 – what were the unfavorable outcomes. Initially defined as including all but in the table they are separated. 9. Lines 17 to 26 – the details of these reactions are useful addition to existing literature and even if added as supplementary material. Minor Comments 1. Line 49 – loss not lost 2. Line 52 – “Previously, we reported that peripheral eosinophilia during anti-TB therapy was common (17.8%) and that cutaneous ADRs were common in these patients” ADR is common in all patients or those with eosinophilia? 3. Line 74 - anti-tuberculous change to antiTB for consistency 4. Line 76 – “starting with the drug with the lowest probability of hypersensitivity,” how was this established? Please provide reference 5. Line 77 – was there any rationale/references for the protocol used? Pls elaborate 6. Line 88 – “A simultaneous multiple DHR was the simultaneous occurrence of drug hypersensitivity to different administered drugs” is this the same definition as used by Gex-Collet et al? 7. Line 95 – meant to read “exclusion of other potential causes” 8. Line 97-100 is a repetition 9. Line 5 – should read flowchart ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Rannakoe Lehloenya [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. 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PONE-D-20-16505R1 Hypersensitivity Reactions to Multiple Anti-tuberculosis Drugs PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yong-Soo Kwon, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 28 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Walter R. Taylor Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Dear Dr. Yong-Soo Kwon, thankyou for resubmitting the revised paper. You cover an important area and the paper is much improved. However, there are some small changes I am requesting. Please give the reader an idea of the risk of developing an adverse drug reaction when on standard anti TB treatment reported by others. Do you know how many patients were treated for TB during the time of your retrospective study ? That would also give us an idea of risk. In your previous study, you reported eosinophilia in patients with TB drug reactions. More detail is needed like the rash morphologies and the eosinophil counts. Please add a few simple lines to explain to general physicians what a sequential and simultaneous drug reaction are. There is a small error regarding the Wilcoxon Signed Rank test - it is used to assess paired (within group) differences. Please tell the reader how you made a successful diagnosis of a positive rechallenged test. Table 6 would be improved by detailing the key symptoms and signs of the initial drug reaction and what happened when that individual was rechallenged. Therefore, you need to list every patient. Rank them by initial reaction starting with mpe. Please delete treatment outcomes as this has already been covered in Table 5. Table 4. We need to see the significant p values within groups as well. As you seem to have the white cell data, a graph would be very nice showing the changes in total and white cell count differentials over time to cover also the oral provocation test (this is optional). It is worth reminding clinicians in the Discussion that drug reactions can occurs months after starting treatment and referral to a specialist unit for drug rechallenged should be made quickly. yours sincerely, Walter Taylor. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Hypersensitivity Reactions to Multiple Anti-tuberculosis Drugs PONE-D-20-16505R2 Dear Dr. Yong-Soo Kwon, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Walter R. Taylor Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-16505R2 Hypersensitivity Reactions to Multiple Anti-tuberculosis Drugs Dear Dr. Kwon: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Walter R. Taylor Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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