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PONE-D-20-15228 Impact of postpartum tenofovir-based antiretroviral therapy on bone mineral density in breastfeeding women with HIV enrolled in a randomized clinical trial PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Stranix-Chibanda, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please update the Results and analyses as suggested by the reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 10 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Antiretrovirals were provided free of charge for the PROMISE P1084s study by AbbVie, Gilead Sciences, and GlaxoSmithKline. Funding to purchase bone density scanners was provided for the PROMISE P1084s study by Gilead Sciences. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.]. 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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a well conducted study nested within the PROMISE randomised controlled trial conducted in four African countries. Selection, confounding bias and bias due to drop-out seems to be small. Also, the dilution of the effect due to people initially allocated to control and subsequently initiating TDF appears to be a conservative bias (might be worth mentioning in the Discussion). However, I have a number of points that need to be addressed, especially regarding the statistical analysis. Main Points 1. Line 109. The authors state that the main objective was to evaluate the possible impact of TDF exposure on BMD when used in combination with extended breastfeeding beyond the first year. In practice, 50% of the women in the study interrupted breastfeeding by week 61 and there were on average 17 weeks in which there was no extended breastfeeding before week 74. I believe that objectives need to be reworded accordingly or acknowledged that the data collected were shortfall for addressing the main aim. 2. Unclear why the earlier time-points (week 6 and week 26) have been ignored completely. It could be important to show whether the difference in BMD percentage change could be detected earlier on as it would re-inforce the hypothesis that breastfeeding was an issue. The most likely explanation for the findings seems to be the cumulative exposure/exacerbation of the effect of TDF in co-presence of boosted PIs instead. 3. Lines 156- 158. Were technicians evaluating the scans blind to treatment allocation? How can authors exclude that oucomes were not affected by technicians knowing who had received TDF? 4. Were percentage changes distributed approximately normal? It is unusual to use t-test and linear regression for a percentage ranging between -15% to +15%. Because confounding does not seem to be a major issue, how would the results look when using non-parametric tests? Why not using absolute change after controlling for baseline level? 5. Confounding, mediation, interaction. There is a lot of confusion on these issues. I think that it is agreeable that AP randomization, country, age, baseline weight, parity at PROMISE entry and plasma HIV-1RNA level are potential confounders. There is some evidence that AP randomization and baseline weight are effect modifiers for the primary endpoint while age and baseline weight for the secondary endpoint (Table 2). Therefore, these should be removed as confounders from the two analyses, respectively. Regarding the values measured at week 74, none of these should be included as confounders or as stratification factors in the subgroup analyses: breastfeeding status and current receipt of TDF are time-dependent confounders, so a standard regression analysis is unable to control for the possible introduced bias. Current weight, time and use of contraceptive are even potential mediators in the causa pathway between TDF and BMD change so should not be controlled for and cannot be evaluated as possible effect modifiers. On top of this, there should be consistency between text (Methods lines 176-178 vs. Discussion, lines 286-287) and the footnote of Figure 1 and what shown in Table 2 regarding the various adjustments. 6. If authors are really worried about drop-outs they should perform a per-protocol analysis controlling for cross-over dilution and possible informative censoring. 7. What is a change in BMD that can be considered as clinically relevant? In line 320 this is set to be as 5-7%. The actual estimate from the analysis in in the range of 2-3%, the long-term clinical implication of which are said to be unknown (lines 289-291). If this is the case than the study only shows a statistical difference which has unclear clinical implications and contradicts the conclusions. 8. Because INSTI have replaced PI/r even in resource limited settings, will TDF have a similar impact on BMD in the future? Other points 1. Line 139. A P is missing (P1084 sub-study) 2. Lines 180-181. Most statisticians are moving away for the concept of a threshold for significance such as the arbitrary 0.05 cut-off. Best to speak more generally about compatibility of the data with the null hypothesis. 3. Lines 321-322. Despite the lack of evidence for an interaction (the study was not powered to detect these), percent BMD change in Malawi appeared to be much smaller than that seen in other countries for the primary endpoint (Table 2). 4. Table 2. Typically this is shown as a forest plot, instead of a Table, although this mainly pertains to style 5. Figure 2. Unusual to show box-plots (medians, IQR) when the assumption is that the distribution of a percentage change is approximately normal so that means and SD are shown and means compared (see main point 4 above). Reviewer #2: This paper evaluated the impact of postpartum tenofovir-based antiretroviral therapy on bone mineral density in breastfeeding women with HIV enrolled in the IMPAACT P1084s sub-study of the PROMISE randomized trial. In general, pregnancy itself may lead to bone loss but if followed by lactation, it will have protective effect on bone density while the duration of lactation and parity may modulate its effect. In this study, having being exposed to TDF-ART during 74-week postpartum breastfeeding led to significant declines (-2.5 to 3 percent lower) than having being exposed to nevirapine alone. Specific comments 1. Although randomization and number of participants may have overcome bias, no data on diet or physical activity, calcium and vitamin D status or supplements are given. 2. More importantly than knowing the percent decrease in bone mineral density would have been which the clinical impact was: changes from normal to osteopaenia or from osteopaenia to osteoporosis, and incident bone fractures. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Impact of postpartum tenofovir-based antiretroviral therapy on bone mineral density in breastfeeding women with HIV enrolled in a randomized clinical trial PONE-D-20-15228R1 Dear Dr. Stranix-Chibanda, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Esteban Martinez Guest Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): I declare that I participated as a reviewer for the initial evaluation of this manuscript. Authors have adequately addressed reviewers' comments and have provided satisfactory responses to queries. The manuscript has been definitely improved and is worth to publish now. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-15228R1 Impact of postpartum tenofovir-based antiretroviral therapy on bone mineral density in breastfeeding women with HIV enrolled in a randomized clinical trial Dear Dr. Stranix-Chibanda: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Esteban Martinez Guest Editor PLOS ONE |
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