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PONE-D-20-08069 A Breeding Pool of Ideas: Analyzing Interdisciplinary Collaborations at the Complex Systems Summer School PLOS ONE Dear Ms. Brown, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your manuscript presents a potentially interesting case study on multidisciplinarity. However, as you can see below, some very relevant aspects of your work need a throughout revision. Such a revision should pay special attention to the following points: - Embeddedness of your work in the previously existing literature. What gaps are you addressing here? To what extend your findings can contribute to the research of other scholars in similar topics? - Presentation of the case study. Somehow related to the previous point (and also to the following one), it is really important to provide enough contextual details about the CS school in general and the process of group formation in particular. - Methodology. All the applied methodology must be properly justified and explain (notice PLOS publication criterion #3, https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/criteria-for-publication#loc-3). Comment number 5 by Reviewer 1 is a specific example, but Reviewer 2 points out other ones. - Interpretation of results. Conclusions reached must be well based on findings (see PLOS publication criterion #4, https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/criteria-for-publication#loc-4). In particular, none of the reviewers was satisfied with your claims about hierarchies. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 26 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper represents a potentially useful addition to knowledge on interdisciplinarity, providing something of a unique angle, namely, observing what type of and to what extent interdisciplinary relations form amongst a diverse group of researchers when institutional constraints are not in play. The authors provide a large amount of data - compared to many interdisciplinary studies - and some means for analyzing the degree of interdisciplinary engagement across projects. The conclusions should help provoke some reflection by those studying interdisciplinarity and the presumption that disciplines do not interact necessarily freely or equally. The study is relatively minimalistic with respect to its goals. This is of course a data-driven approach. However I believe more information should be provided to support the ability of readers to properly situate these results and assess their generalizability. The authors do state they think this data has relevance for understanding how interdisciplinarity might occur in practice once free of institutional constraints. So my points here are with that agenda in mind. 1. In the first place we should know more about the CSSS. One concern is that such a summer school provides certain structures and incentives which heavily favour interdisciplinary engagements, or even require them, within a generally low-stakes environment. Such a study would not necessarily allow us to draw inferences about what might happen in a "real research context" free of institutional constraints. 2. I did not find mentioned anywhere - apologies if I missed it - what the distribution of participants was amongst different levels (grad students, postdoc, professors etc). This is important given the prominent presumption that early career academics or students are much more open to ID and less parochial in their disciplinary affiliations than senior academics. Hence the results again show more flexible interaction than might otherwise be observed. And one might presume that a summer school tends to be dominated by those at an early stage. 3. I would also be worried that studying a summer school on "complexity science" already somewhat distorts the outcomes, on the basis that it is already a field orientated towards interdisciplinarity, and peopled by researchers with more open-mindedness about ID than your average researcher. Some accounting for this possibility would seem important. 4. It wasn't clear to me how project topics ended up with a disciplinary classification or where these topics come from. 5. In the study influence is used as a proxy for ID hierarchies, via an eigencentrality measure. This needs some clarification; firstly how influence is derived from eigencentrality, and secondly to what extent influence captures fully what is meant by hierarchy with respect to interdisciplinarity. Measuring connections between disciplines does not necessarily itself tell us about "influence", unless I misunderstand things. A discipline might be widely applied in many projects, but still occupy a somewhat minimal (not particularly influential) position in how a project is run, whose questions dominate, how the problem is framed and so on. Such a discipline presumably would have low overall influence, and I have seen business scientists and other social scientists take on many roles on many projects across the university landscape, but usually in a kind of service role with little control over those projects. 6. I would note to this last point, as a speculative aside really, that the fact that many collaborations occur on social science topics but not physical topics might be taken as evidence of hierarchies playing a role, to the extent that natural science researchers feel competence and authority to apply their knowledge and methods to social science topics, which is not felt the other way around. This would suggest some deep level presumptions about the relative value of natural (and engineering) science vs social science. Reviewer #2: Review « A Breeding Pool of Ideas: Analyzing Interdisciplinary Collaborations at the Complex System Summer School » The authors present a study of the group formation process in the Complex System Summer Schools from 2002 to 2019. They study if gender, position (in Academia or not), affiliation, country of study, and discipline can be relevant factors to predict the composition of a working group. They found that they are not since the composition is compatible with a random mixing. Such an a priori unexpected results compared to the literature should be properly discussed and investigated further but it is not. The following presented results by the authors remain obscure to me, especially the reason why they are presented. One of my main points is that authors show that, for the possible factor they consider, the group formation composition is compatible with a random mixing. This means not only that there is no more homophily than expected from the participants once year, but also that there is no more heterophily, and thus no multidisciplinarity which would have been created intentionally. In other word, we can also say that the discipline was not considered as a criterion for the creation of the group. Thus, the authors can’t say they study the factors influencing group formation as it is written in the abstract since finally they just say they don’t know what influence group formation. Thus, this is necessary that the authors explain their global methodology since this is not clear to me why they do so many investigations to show what they have already shown by comparing their group composition to neutral models. This leads me to my second point. Since the authors de facto observe multidisplinarity due to the simple initial co-presence of several disciplinarity in annual groups of participants, one would expect that they qualify this observed multidisciplinarity, especially indicating which couple of disciplines are preferentially linked to each other. This is particularly what we expect when they arrive to study the composition of groups in terms of disciplines. This would be particular relevant for their results regarding social and behavioral sciences one the one hand, and mathematics, statistics, physics, and engineering on the other hand. Can it be explained by the fact the latter are more coupled to social and behavioral scientists than the other disciplines. This would be relevant at this moment to discuss the results in comparison of (Barthel & Seidl, 2017). A third point is about their study of hierarchy between disciplines. This is really not convincing. Indeed, their criteria for hierarchy are not convincing. Indeed, such they conclude the group have not been formed depending on disciplines, the simple fact that some participants is highly connected to other participants can have so many interpretations: they are more agreeable, they have a discipline which is more related with other disciplines for applied work, for example statistics, they are taller than others, they took the same bus to come to the summer school, … Thus finally I don’t know what the hierarchy they’re looking at refers to, especially I’m not sure that it refers to social values given to their different disciplines by researchers. My last point is about the conclusion and the discussion. The authors begin the discussion telling that they study the factors influencing the emergence of such collaboration in an arguably ideal setting. “Ideal” seems to be very arbitrary and I would be pleased if they have explained at the beginning of the paper why their conditions for studying emergence of collaboration is ideal compared to other studies. Overall the discussion is poor; especially on their main result which is they found no relationship between the factors they consider and the group compositions. Some references lacks, for example the one of (Hinds, Carley, Krackhardt, & Wholey, 2000) related to the homophily in the choice of work group member. Moreover, discussing your study in light of the works made by (Darbellay, 2015; Sedooka, Steffen, Paulsen, & Darbellay, 2015) on interdisciplinarity and the identity of researchers doing interdisciplinarity, especially the fact that most of them have already many disciplines, should be interesting. Complementary comments: What is a group is not clearly defined. Indeed it appeared that a participant can be a member of different groups one year, while authors talk about groups composed of one participant. Especially the HHI measure is not properly explained in the context of the particular network the authors used. Especially, does it mean they use two networks: one for group project and the other for discipline homophily? The economical explanation of the indicator does not speak to me much. Also, regarding “testing homophily”, what the authors have done is not clear. Indeed, sometimes they talk about every disciplines (for example in the presented network in supplementary information and much of the presented graphs), and other times as in 2.3 I understand that they gather disciplines in two categories “social science” and “physical or natural science”. Thus what their results about the absence of homophily in the group composition mean is finally not clear to me. Is it only homophily in these two large categories? References Barthel, Roland, & Seidl, Roman. (2017). Interdisciplinary Collaboration between Natural and Social Sciences – Status and Trends Exemplified in Groundwater Research. PLOS ONE, 12(1), e0170754. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0170754 Darbellay, Frédéric. (2015). Rethinking inter- and transdisciplinarity: Undisciplined knowledge and the emergence of a new thought style. Futures, 65, 163-174. doi: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.futures.2014.10.009 Hinds, Pamela J., Carley, Kathleen M., Krackhardt, David, & Wholey, Doug. (2000). Choosing Work Group Members: Balancing Similarity, Competence, and Familiarity. Organizational Behavior and Human Decision Processes, 81(2), 226-251. doi: https://doi.org/10.1006/obhd.1999.2875 Sedooka, Ayuko, Steffen, Gabriela, Paulsen, Theres, & Darbellay, Frédéric. (2015). Paradoxe identitaire et interdisciplinarité : un regard sur les identités disciplinaires des chercheurs. 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PONE-D-20-08069R1 A Breeding Pool of Ideas: Analyzing Interdisciplinary Collaborations at the Complex Systems Summer School PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Brown, First of all, I would like to apologise for the delayed decision. Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. You have correctly responded to all the comments and concerns by the two reviewers and, consequently, Reviewer 1 has recommended publication of your manuscript. Nevertheless, before proceeding, I would like you to address the following issues: 1.-You are using the Herfindahl Hirschman Index (HHI) as a measure of homophily. Could you, please, elaborate on the convenience of using this index instead of, for instance, assortativity? 2.- The boxplot in Fig3 shows that some disciplines (e.g. Social and behavioural sciences) present a significant amount of values equal to one (so, all groups composed by a single discipline). Have you checked whether this is related to smaller group sizes? As you normalized 'discipline diversity' by group size (to be able to compare across cases) this cannot be checked directly. 3.- In page 7, first paragraph, the text reads "Specifically, disciplinary HHI was above one standard deviation above the expected for 2012, 2013, 2016, and 2018." Maybe this sentence could be re-written to avoid using 'above' twice. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 07 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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