Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 15, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-18348 MACAÍBA ALMOND (Acrocomia intumescens Drude) CONSUMPTION REDUCES ANXIETY AND COMPROMISE MEMORY IN RAT PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Soares, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Several major methodological issues are stated in the Reviewers' reports and they should be carefully addressed, while the text would benefit if edited by a native English speaker in order to avoid vernacular expressions and poor syntax. More specific comments are further stated below in the reports of two reviewers. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 27 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter. 4. We note you have included a table to which you do not refer in the text of your manuscript. Please ensure that you refer to Table 2 in your text; if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the Table. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1) Title The title did not reflect the nature of the study and as seen from the manuscript the effectiveness of macaíba almonds was evaluated on anxiolytic activity, memory preservation and oxidative stress in the brain of dyslipidemic rats. Hence, the title should read: - Evaluation of the effectiveness of macaíba almonds on anxiolytic activity, memory preservation and oxidative stress in the brain of dyslipidemic rats. 2) Abstract The Abstract did not provide an informative and quantitative summary of the research undertaken while the Conclusion was not stated in the Abstract. 3) Introduction The problem statement was not clearly spelt out. A clear justification on the importance of this study should be deliberated. 4) Materials and Methods ➢ All the chemicals used in the study should be named in this section. 5) Results Results are not well deliberated. ➢ Where is the description for below section in the manuscript: 3.4 Determination of phenolic compounds and total antioxidant activity 6) Discussion Author need to discuss about the Results obtained rather that used the general sentences. There is no possible explanation for findings and no conclusion with implication for each section of the work. Please revise the relevance of the findings in the light of other comparable studies. 7) Conclusion The Conclusion drawn in this study is not clear nor convincing. Authors should also include in this section: constrains/limitations of the present study and future studies to be undertaken. The conclusion should provide a place to persuasively and succinctly restate the research problem. 8) Figures ➢ Figures What is X and Y axis? Each axis should be labeled with name and unit. 9) English language usage The poorly worded/construction of the sentences should be improved through the text by a native English speaker to ensure the use of standard and correct English. 10) Please rectify the below throughout the manuscript: - (e.g. Author stated: .....reflux for 4 min --------a further 3 minutes...Which one is correct?? min or minutes) ➢ Authors did not adhere to the format of the Journal ➢ Please check for: [41] (BUDZYNSKA et al., 2015). [45] (BASIRICO et al, 2017). Reviewer #2: 1. The article is not written in a proper English language The article should be re-written with the help of English language expert. 2. How did the rat administer with almond. what is almond flour solution. How it was prepared. Add the details. 3. Describe the composition of HFE and its method of preparation 4. It is not clear whether the administration of HFE was continued through out the experimental duration or it was only given before the supplementation of almond for 14 days. 5. Mention the recorded parameter of test at the end of each test. 6. In Object recognition test, the nature of object A1, A2, and A3 is not clear, whether all three were different ot there was any similarity existed between the objects. 7. The experimental protocol involve two factors; therefore the data should re-analyzed by two-way ANOVA. 8. Since authors are explaining compromised memory in term of lipid content of almond, so the lipid content of almond should be analyzed. 9. Merge the small paragraphs to make comprehensive para. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-18348R1 EVALUATION OF THE EFFECTIVENESS OF MACAÍBA ALMONDS (Acrocomia intumescens Drude) ON ANXIOLYTIC ACTIVITY, MEMORY PRESERVATION AND OXIDATIVE STRESS IN THE BRAIN OF DYSLIPIDEMIC RATS PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Soares, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== The modern science does not mention such an expression like "Macaíba almonds". As I am informed, Acrocomia intumescens is locally known as Macaíba palm, and seed kernel of a palm cannot be termed "almond". I suggest using "Macaíba palm seed kernel" (in the main title and thoughout the text; figures and tables too). I also strongly advice the authors to engage a professional language editing agency, since the text still remains hardly readable due to weak syntax and poor grammar. I also suggest consulting a senior reseacher to meticolously check and rectify non-scientific expressions and vague sentences towards clarifying their meaning. The manuscript will not be publishable in this form. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 10 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Branislav T. Šiler, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Comments 1. In introduction authors are stating “There are few studies assessing the potential and quality of macaíba almonds, and include possible effects of their ingestion” it is better to mention those studies and then mention the purpose of the current study. This would clearly highlight the novelty of the study. 2. Mention the source of chemicals 3. What are ABTS and TPC? Abbreviations are still not properly defined. Define the abbreviations at the first place and use them consistently. 4. The universal unit for the speed of centrifugation is g (gravitational force). Mention all the “rpm” value in “g” values. 5. Authors have analyzed the results by two-way ANOVA but they are not mentioning the statistical effect of two factors (dyslipidemia and almond treatment). I would suggest to follow the pattern of writing all results as follow: Elevated plus maze test (EPM) The statistical analysis of EPM data by two-way ANOVA showed significant/non-significant effects of dyslipidemia [F(df) = ….., p = …], macaíba consumption [F(df) = ….., p = …], and interaction between dyslipidemia and macaíba consumption [F(df) = ….., p = …]. AG and DAG groups presented decreased entries in the open arms in as compared to the CONT and DG groups (Figure 2A) (p <0.05). DG group also showed reduced number of entries than CONT (p <0.05). Both groups treated with macaiba almond (AG and DAG) spent more time in open arms (p <0.05) as compared to ……???? group (Figure 2B). Consistent with these results, DAG group stayed longer in the central area when compared to all groups (p <0.05) (Figure 2C). 6. What is “Test-t” mentioned in the legends. Authors seem to mention Tukey’s test here. If it is so, eliminate “Test-t” from legends and write Tukey’s test completely. 7. The article still need English language correction. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-18348R2 EVALUATION OF THE EFFECTIVENESS OF MACAÍBA ALMONDS (Acrocomia intumescens Drude) ON ANXIOLYTIC ACTIVITY, MEMORY PRESERVATION AND OXIDATIVE STRESS IN THE BRAIN OF DYSLIPIDEMIC RATS PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Soares, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== The authors have failed to address the Academic Editor conerns raised in the previous review round. Moreover, in their Response to reviewers, they did not provide answers for Editor's concerns, so I may assume they have somehow overlooked them. The authors are advised to read the previous report carefully and rectify the manuscript accordingly. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 01 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Branislav T. Šiler, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-18348R3 EVALUATION OF THE EFFECTIVENESS OF MACAÍBA PALM SEED KERNEL (Acrocomia intumescens Drude) ON ANXIOLYTIC ACTIVITY, MEMORY PRESERVATION AND OXIDATIVE STRESS IN THE BRAIN OF DYSLIPIDEMIC RATS PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Soares, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== The authors did not adhere to the correct terminology in the text. The authors state in the second paragraph of the page 3 (I would be more precise, but the line number are not provided): "Macaíba is the fruit of the macaibeira (Acrocomia intumescens Drude); a palm tree that naturally occurs in northeastern Brazil." - please do not use semicolons instead of comma. Further, seed kernel extraction from the fruits is described under the subtitle "Macaiba palm seed kernel". All the experiments are performed on the seed kernel, not fruits. However, in page 4, authors describe the extraction of the constituents of "Macaíba pulp" (please do not capitalize common plant names). In this way, the reader is inductively instructed to realize that the authors have extracted compounds from fruits (above: Macaíba = fruit; then Macaíba pulp must be fruit pulp). This creates confusion of a reader. Therefore, I must insist to double-check the manuscript and to replace all the vague expressions ("Macaíba pulp", "Macaiba group") with "kernel pulp", "kernel fed group". Please do not use capitalization of random words - applicable throughout the text, subtitles and tables too; do not capitalize compound names, except for trademarks, the ones in the beginning of a sentence or in the table lines. Please uniform: is it "macaiba" or "macaíba"? ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 29 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Branislav T. Šiler, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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EVALUATION OF THE EFFECTIVENESS OF MACAÍBA PALM SEED KERNEL (Acrocomia intumescens Drude) ON ANXIOLYTIC ACTIVITY, MEMORY PRESERVATION AND OXIDATIVE STRESS IN THE BRAIN OF DYSLIPIDEMIC RATS PONE-D-20-18348R4 Dear Dr. Soares, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Branislav T. Šiler, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-18348R4 EVALUATION OF THE EFFECTIVENESS OF MACAÍBA PALM SEED KERNEL (Acrocomia intumescens Drude) ON ANXIOLYTIC ACTIVITY, MEMORY PRESERVATION AND OXIDATIVE STRESS IN THE BRAIN OF DYSLIPIDEMIC RATS Dear Dr. Soares: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Branislav T. Šiler Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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