Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-27667 Learning strategy as predictor of academic success in medical school PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Müller-Hilke, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers had concerns about the title, the grading methods, the review of the literature and the context as well as the limitations of the work. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 13 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2.Thank you for including your ethics statement: "The study was approved by the local ethics committee and is registered under A 2018-0005." Please amend your current ethics statement to include the full name of the ethics committee/institutional review board(s) that approved your specific study. Once you have amended this/these statement(s) in the Methods section of the manuscript, please add the same text to the “Ethics Statement” field of the submission form (via “Edit Submission”). For additional information about PLOS ONE ethical requirements for human subjects research, please refer to http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-human-subjects-research. 3. Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please delete it from any other section. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript is well written and presents a very interesting topic. The authors present the subject matter in a clear and concise way that captures the reader's interest. I am missing a review of related work on medical education or similar studies in other fields. In addition, I think the study is lacking in theoretical foundation. For instance, the authors use the LIST questionnaire, which is based on Piltrich's MSLQ instrument for self-regulation, but they do not mention the concept of self-regulation at all in their manuscript as the basis of the learning process (cognitive and meta cognitive actions). I think including such theoretical foundation for students' actions would greatly help position the article within existing literature. Some statements in the result analyisis are a bit "bold". For instance, in line 146, "For the comparison of both cohorts resulted in a p-value of 0.065, confirming comparable ratios". A p-value of 0.065 fails to reject the null hypotheses, but does not mean that the opposite is confirmed. It should say something like "The difference between male/female proportions in both cohorts was not statistically significant (p-value = .065)". Also, in Table 1, for instance, for such low p-values, it is usually specified as p < .001 instead of including so many decimal figures. Lastly, I think it would be useful to include some sort of timeline of the study, including the interventions used at each point in time. Reviewer #2: This study looks at different study strategies adopted by preclinical medical students at a German university and investigates whether these choices impact the academic performance for two basic science topics, biology and physiology. The authors also analyze whether students change their strategy from the first to the second year of medical school. The authors mention that they see learning success (examination scores) differences between groups of students with different learning strategies, but none of these differences is statistically significant. That may be due to the small sample size. The second question about students changing their learning strategy would also be of interest, but again it is hampered by the small sample size. These drawbacks of the study make it very preliminary and we can’t draw any useful conclusions at this time. I would advise the authors to collect more data and if no significant learning success differences between learning strategies become apparent, to concentrate on the second question. It would be of interest to evaluate why students change their learning strategy and whether that makes a positive, negative or no difference for their academic success of these students. Nice short title that describes that topic and the goal of the study. I would advise to reword the title and to avoid the word “predictor”. What is the authors look at is a correlation (and they do not find any). The introduction is well organized, concise and develops the problems addressed in this project. The English of the manuscript, specifically the abstract, could be improved. Some of the word choices, although not wrong, are suboptimal. See a few examples below. For example: “We here explored the learning strategies applied during the preclinical years, whether they are constant traits or subject to change and how they impact on the academic success.” Better: “In the project described in this manuscript we explored the learning strategies used by medical students at our university during their preclinical years. We investigated whether these learning strategies were constant or changed over time and whether they correlated with academic success.” The abstract misrepresents the finding of the study. As academic differences between different study strategies are not statistically significant, we can’t draw any conclusion as to which strategy/ies is/are best. The conclusion section is not based on the data, but are simple truisms that are independent of the results presented in the described work. The Methods section is missing a lot of important information. I would appreciate more background about the structure of the German preclinical curriculum as it is used at the University of Rostock. Clearly describe the situation, like the size of the entire class (224) and its composition? Were the study participants a representative sample of the class? Which students were eliminated from the study and for what reasons. How and when were the surveys offered? There is only a very superficial description of how the learning outcome was measured. What is the role of the self-assessment? It appears that only results of a small biology/physiology examinations were used, leaving open that other learning strategies might be a better fit for other topics (anatomy, biochemistry, pharmacology etc.). It would improve the analysis if additional or more general examination scores would be used for the correlation with the different learning strategies used by different students. The statistical analysis appears to be appropriate. Another significant problem of the study is that the academic success was measured using different examination topics (as this is a longitudinal study, there is no way to change this aspect), biology for year 1 and physiology for year 2. At least this needs to be critically discussed. Also, it is never clearly stated that both topics show no statistically significant differences for the different learning strategies. That may be a direct result of the small sample size. You can’t discuss the differences in the result section if they are not statistically significant. The most interesting result is that many students keep their initial study strategy, although some change. Again, the small sample size does not allow a more detailed analysis why these changes occur and how they impacted individual student’s performance. Good that the authors included a paragraph about the limitations of their study. I would add a title “Limitation of the study” and organize this paragraph as a subsection of the discussion. Limitations are that this analysis looks at preclinical learning, not on the students clinical abilities. There is nothing wrong with that, however, this limitation needs to be stated. As the examinations only cover biology/physiology, do NOT use the general term “academic success”, but make clear that it is only academic success in these subjects. Without further information and analysis, academic success can’t be assumed for other preclinical and clinical subjects. Smaller issues: Define acronyms at their first appearance and independently in the abstract. E.g., LIST is never defined. “Medical school” should be “medical school”. “Examinations”, not “exams”. “Likert”, not “LIKERT”. Likert is a name (of the social psychologist Rensis Likert), not an acronym. Not “MC-questions”, but the correct acronym is MCQ for Multiple Choice Question. “…and sat the biology exam.” That is not a complete sentence. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-20-27667R1 Learning strategies and their correlation with academic success in biology and physiology examinations during the preclinical years of medical school PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Müller-Hilke, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you can see in the reviewers comments, there are few minor comments that need to be addressed. You may also need to consult PlOS one for styles guidelines before submitted this version. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 12 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Mohammed Saqr, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed all my previous concerns. The only remaining issue is the order of the sections. The Methods section should go before results, and not at the end of the manuscript. Reviewer #2: I am very pleased with the corrections, clarifications and additions the authors have included in their revised manuscript. Their conclusions and the presentation are much clearer now. I think they understand that the small sample size and the limited number of topics reduce the impact of their study. I have one remaining request, the real p-values need to be presented in Tables 1 and 2 and also for Figure 2. Just giving p-value ranges by number of stars is not sufficient. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Learning strategies and their correlation with academic success in biology and physiology examinations during the preclinical years of medical school PONE-D-20-27667R2 Dear Dr. Müller-Hilke, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mohammed Saqr, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-27667R2 Learning strategies and their correlation with academic success in biology and physiology examinations during the preclinical years of medical school Dear Dr. Müller-Hilke: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Mohammed Saqr Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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