Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 5, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-27974 Traumatic Dislocation of Middle Ear Ossicles: A New Computed Tomography Classification Predicting Hearing Outcome PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Mantokoudis, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 27 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I congratulate the authors for this interesting paper. How unfortunate that the study managed to analyze only 34 exams in a universe of more than 4000 CT scans. Anyway, the authors managed to adequately point out the limitations of the study and I believe that the idea should follow so that other studies use the same method to validate the tomographic correlation with the potential to predict the audiometric results. Reviewer #2: This is a review of the temporal bone CT scans of patients with a radiologically suspectedossicular chain dislocation and their association with conductive hearing outcome. It states that Figure S1 in the Appendix shows how patients were included in the analysis, although I failed to find this figure in my copy of the manuscript. The severity of incudomalleal joint disruption was assessed with 1 mm slices of standard trauma CT scan of the head. Aside from the inter rater agreement, logistic regression was used to assess the association between 4 CT scan parameters with poor hearing outcome defined as conductive hearing loss of ≥20dB air-bone gap. The authors then found that the malleus-incus axis distance and malleus-incus angle measured at midpoints were statistically correlated with conductive hearing loss. Here are some of my questions: 1. Was the patient selection process blinded to outcomes? Who did the selection, how was this done and how were disagreements to include patients addressed? 2. Were the 2 neuroradialogists blinded to outcomes? 3. I am concerned that the distance of 0.25 mm was found significant when the cuts were 1 mm in thickness. The “ice cream cone” constituting the incus and the malleal head appears discernible enough from the sample CT scan picture but how were differences in measurements settled? And how high were the inter rater agreements in each of the 4 radiologic parameters? (I did not find Appendix Table S1 in my copy). 4. I am not clear as to how the authors determined the ranges of the malleus-incus axis distances of 0-0.07, 0.08-0.25 and >0.25 for each category. I may have missed how they have correlated these ranges with normal or abnormal hearing. I appreciate how the discussion attempts to explain the results in terms of the ligamentous attachments of the malleus and incus may explain the vulnerability of the incudomalleal joint to trauma. An illustration may more clearly drive home the point. I also appreciate the limitations part and agree with all the points raised by the authors, particularly with their statement that “some calculated mean distances in our classification table were smaller than the spatial CT resolution which is the result from statistical analysis”. Given this potential technical difficulty in measurement, I think they should point out that their new classification system should be applied into another set of trauma patients to understand how well it performs. Reviewer #3: The authors perform a study to determine the association between CT findings of post-traumatic ossicular injuries and conductive hearing outcome. They also propose a classification system to predict audiometric outcomes based on radiological measurements. Although this is an interesting area of research to explore, there are some major concerns that need to be addressed, as listed below: 1. The abstract should be revised to include more detail about methodology, such as summary of inclusion/exclusion criteria, measurements taken (e.g. incus-malleus axis distance, etc) and how good/poor hearing was defined by the authors. “CT” abbreviation should be provided in the Objectives. 2. Also, in the abstract — The authors write in the conclusion: “Adequate assessment of high resolution CT scans of temporal bone in which ossicular chain dislocation had occurred after traumatic fractures of temporal bone was feasible.” — did you mean your new radiological parameters (measurements) for assessment were feasible and reproducible? If the authors also wanted to assess their feasibility, it should be included in the aims (objectives). 3. Lines 80-83: Patients should also acknowledge the fact that hearing dysfunction is often overlooked in polytrauma patients because other trauma-related physical/brain injuries that take medical priority. 4. Lines 84: fractures are OFTEN associated with a hemotympanum. 5. Material and Methods: Inclusion criteria is confusing — were considered cases with ossicular chain injury following head trauma regardless of presence of TBF? Or was presence of TBF determinant for study inclusion? I also suggest providing # of excluded cases within each criterion in Figure 1S (no dislocation of the ossicular chain, no temporal fracture after second review, or who had a bilateral temporal bone fracture). 6. Line 152: What does “more than one direction” mean? More than one joint? Please clarify. 7. Did any patient have a history of asymmetric hearing loss or ear disease prior to the trauma? 8. Line 208, 217 — Keep consistency in terminology while reporting hearing loss (average air-bone gap vs. conductive hearing loss) throughout the Results. 9. Audiometric data timeline considered for inclusion in the study needs clarification. Did all patients have audiometric evaluation? Did the authors include audiometric data before 1 mo in addition to those performed 1-3 months after trauma? In the Results, Line 207-208: “Nine of the 22 patients who underwent follow-up hearing tests still had a hearing loss ≥20dB 1-3 months after the initial trauma” gives the impression that audiometric data before 1mo were also reviewed. Please clarify. 10. Line 109: Figure 1 does not relate to the sentence/paragraph. 11. Line 164-173: It is not clear if cases with mixed hearing loss were also included. Please specify. 12. Line 197: “4 with a joint distension” — Please clarify. 13. Line 210-211: The total accounts for 33 cases. However, authors report a total of 34 cases in this study. Similar to my question #5 — were cases without TBF included? Please clarify. 14. Keep consistency when reporting measurements in the main manuscript, table and figures (e.g. Incus-malleus or malleus-incus). Also, consider including symbols (D, d, α and β) in the tables. 15. Line 225: Table 2 indicates that D and α had the highest sensitivity and specificity for predicting a poor hearing outcome instead. Please review/clarify. 16. In Methods, authors mention to have performed 3D-CT reconstructions to provide different views of the ossicular chain anomalies — Were both 2D-CT axial and sagittal views and 3D-CT reconstructions used for measurements? It should be clarified in the Methods. Also, were there any ossicle fractures identified in your cohort? 17. I suggest including the recent publication from Maillot et al. (2020) — PMID: 28551022 — related to this topic to enrich the discussion. ********** 6. 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Traumatic Dislocation of Middle Ear Ossicles: A New Computed Tomography Classification Predicting Hearing Outcome PONE-D-20-27974R1 Dear Dr. Mantokoudis, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rafael da Costa Monsanto, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Congratulations on the excellent piece of work. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I congratulate the authors to address a point-by-point revised document of their study. And I congratulate the authors for their very interesting work. Reviewer #3: I would like to thank the authors for the revised manuscript. The paper is improved with the revisions made. I have no further comments or concerns. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No |
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