Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-20708 Malaria and intestinal parasite co-infection and its association with anaemia among people living with HIV in Buea, Southwest Cameroon: A community-based cross-sectional study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sandie, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLoS ONE. After careful consideration, we felt that your manuscript requires substantial revision, following which it can possibly be reconsidered, thus governing the decision of a “major revision”. As requested by the reviewers, the authors need to address several concerns, particularly related to the data analysis, methods and results. Finally, it is essential to incorporate the limitations of the study otherwise it might compromise data interpretation. For your guidance, a copy of the reviewers' comments was included below. Please submit your revised manuscript by August 30. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Luzia Helena Carvalho, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Thank you for indicating in the text of your manuscript that you obtained written informed consent from participants. Please also add this information to your ethics statement in the online submission form. 3. Please include additional information regarding the survey or questionnaire used in the study and ensure that you have provided sufficient details that others could replicate the analyses. For instance, if you developed a questionnaire as part of this study and it is not under a copyright more restrictive than CC-BY, please include a copy, in both the original language and English, as Supporting Information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript is well written but the authors need to provide clear description on laboratory methods. The results are well presented but table three need rearrangement to be clear to the reader. The conclusions are based on the study findings Reviewer #2: Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review this manuscript, which is rather well written and clear. The manuscript adds on the evidence of various conditions common is sub-Saharan Africa and links them to the HIV pandemic. However, in spite of its merits, the manuscript should undergo some review prior potential publication. Both major and minor comments are explained below in order of the page of the manuscript: Page 3 – Lines 52-55: the authors start the manuscript by trying to give evidence of what is known on the issue, which is good. However, this part could be expanded; there is literature that the authors can consider to make their statements stronger (as an example: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.gore.2019.07.002 ). Therefore, I suggest an additional search in the literature. Page 6 – Lines 126-127: It is not clear how the participants were selected, specifically in terms of their HIV status. Were 2 different selections done on the basis of HIV status, meaning, were the authors specifically going to look for HIV+ and HIV- participants? If so, this study should be redesigned as a (retrospective) cohort since participants are selected on the base of an exposure (i.e. HIV) and see the differences in outcomes (i.e. anaemia, IP, etc.). In cross-sectional studies, a sample of the population is selected, not necessarily on the base of some individual variables. Please, clarify this point and rectify it all along the manuscript. Page 9 – Lines 194-196: the authors stated that they conducted a binary logistic regression, which appear somehow in contradiction with what written on line 281 (“A multinomial regression analysis was used…”). In logistic regression, usually we talk about “crude” (or univariate) analysis if there is only one exposure and the outcome in the model, or “adjusted” (or multivariable) analysis if there are more than one exposure in the same model. Please, specify which one you used, and if it is crude, please explain (with good reason) why an adjusted analysis was not conducted (which should be). In addition, please, describe which statistical test was used in the logistic regression (which can either be the Wald test or the Likelihood Ratio test). Page 10-11 (table 1) and page 12-13 (table 2): you provide descriptive statistics for various variables of participants. Please, provide the p-value from the Chi2 test to see if there are statistically significant differences in the various variables between HIV+ and HIV- participants. Page 16 – table 4: Please, again explain whether the OR are crude or adjusted (see point above); please, include (for clarity) what is the reference for each variable (e.g. if males have a OR of 0.37 for anaemia, it is in comparison to women, which will be the reference) in the table, rather than in the table legenda; please, also include which statistical test was used (see above). Page 17 onwards (all Discussion section): please reorganize the whole Discussion/Conclusion section. This should be according to a logical sequence. Start by summarizing the findings of your study (no need to repeat values such as percentages and means in the discussion section), how they compare with other similar studies, what are the reasons for differences with other studies. Provide a plausibility for your findings. Provide Strengths and Limitations of your study (this is essential to see to what extent you can give recommendations following your results). Once you have gone through the strengths and limitations of your study, you should provide which are the implications of your results, these may be clinical, public health/programmatic, advocacy etc. as recommendations plus all what you consider to be done as additional research on the topic. I hope these comments are useful for you. With my warmest regards. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Rodolfo Rossi [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
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PONE-D-20-20708R1 Malaria and intestinal parasite co-infection and its association with anaemia among people living with HIV in Buea, Southwest Cameroon: A community-based cross-sectional study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sandie, Thank you for submitting your manuscript for review to PLoS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that your manuscript will likely be suitable for publication if it is revised to address specific points raised by the reviewers. A significant number of topics still need to be clarified and manuscript should be adjusted as suggested. A major concern was related to study design (for example, criteria of recruitment) that should be revised as requested. For your guidance, a copy of the reviewer' comments was included below. Please submit your revised manuscript by October 20. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Luzia Helena Carvalho, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Major issues with this manuscript is in the study design (cross sectional study) but sampling of participants in the clinics (PLWH) and community (HIV -ve participants) is not well described. In the analysis the authors are not only comparing the two groups PLWH and HIV -ve they also add other sub groups which makes to interpret the findings. Throughout the text they use either PLHW or HIV +ve to refer to the same group of participants Reviewer #2: Dear authors, Thank you for addressing the vast majority of the comments I had made during the first revision. There are still 2 pending issues that could be better addressed 1) lines 130 131 "The two categories of participants, PLWH and HIV-negative individuals were enrolled in the study at the HIV Treatment and Care Centre and from the different neighbourhoods" By reading this, I still understand that participants were recruited according to their HIV status. Therefore I kindly ask you to reformulate since you state that your study is a cross-sectional study 2) In the discussion section, when summarizing the results, I suggest removing all/most numerical values since these are already reported in the results section. Thank you again for your efforts. I wish you a good continuation on your work ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Rodolfo Rossi [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
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PONE-D-20-20708R2 Malaria and intestinal parasite co-infection and its association with anaemia among people living with HIV in Buea, Southwest Cameroon: A community-based cross-sectional study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sandie, According to the reviewer, the concerns raised during the peer review process were not properly addressed. For example, reviewer #2 complains that the study design is still confuse. According to the reviewer, people HIV+/HIV- were categorized by exposure at the beginning of the study, therefore the study, as presented, is not a cross-sectional study. At this time we strongly suggest the authors to proper address the concerns related to study design. Please submit your revised manuscript by November 20 If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Luzia Helena Carvalho, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The conclusion in tne abstract should be similar to conclusion at the end of discussion section. ie focusing on burden of infections MP, IPs and Co infection MP/IPs . Currently Conclusion: it is stated Multiple infections exacerbate the health condition of PLWH. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, thank you for your efforts, but the issue of study design highlighted by me, the other reviewer and the editor in the previous round of review has not been properly addressed, leaving confusion on the understanding of study design. Even if recruited simultaneously, people HIV+ and HIV- are categorized by exposure at the beginning of the study, therefore the study, as presented is not a cross-sectional study. I am afraid I will not be able to further review future version of you manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Rodolfo Rossi [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-20708R3 Malaria and intestinal parasite co-infection and its association with anaemia among people living with HIV in Buea, Southwest Cameroon: A community-based retrospective cohort study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sandie, Thank you for submitting your manuscript for review to PLoS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that your manuscript will likely be suitable for publication if the authors revise it to address critical points raised by the reviewers. According to reviewers, there are some specific areas where further improvements would be of substantial benefit to the readers, including methods and results. For your guidance, a copy of the reviewers' comments is included below. Please submit your revised manuscript by November 30. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Luzia Helena Carvalho, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: In the study titled “Malaria and intestinal parasite co-infection and its association with anaemia among people living with HIV in Buea, Southwest Cameroon: A community-based retrospective cohort study”, Sorelle et al. determined the prevalence of malaria parasite and intestinal parasites in PLWH compared to HIV negative counterparts and also assessed the effects of these infections on anaemia to provide relevant information to policymakers in the country. Concerns raised by previous reviewers (about study design and conclusion) have been addressed by the authors. However, to further improve the quality of the manuscript for publication, I suggest that authors revise the manuscript to include the minor but relevant observations below: Pg 3, lines 54-55: “In 2018, there were... “. What is the current status for new cases (in 2020)? Is there any improvement? Please include this with citations. Also include the current status in Cameroun (line 56). Pg 3, line 65: “variety of microbial and parasitic infections such as Plasmodium, Mycobacterium tuberculosis... “. I suggest that authors write the infections (malaria, tuberculosis) instead of the microbes, to eliminate any possible ambiguity. Pg 4, 72-73: “African countries still bear the largest burden... “. 2018 is long time to make this conclusive statement. The situation may have changed within 2 years. I suggest authors provide a recent data/citation to back up this statement. Pg 6, lines 123-125: “ In the national HIV prevalence ranking... “. The reference (25) show that this impact assessment was done in 2017, hence the South West Region may no longer be the 6th on the ranking in 2020. I suggest that authors obtain more recent data OR rephrase the statement to indicate that information presented is not recent, to avoid misleading prospective readers. Pg 6, 129-130: There is also inadequate access to safe water... “. Please provide a reference for this. Study area and participants: age range range of participants was not specified. Pg 6, 133: “after confirmation of their HIV status ...”. Please specify the steps/assays used for the confirmation of HIV Status. Pg 7, 143-148: “HIV-negative participants included persons who ... “. This section is describing the study participants. Please move to appropriate section. Pg 11, 238 “were students (56.5%)...”. I presume authors are referring to the employment status of this category? If so, I suggest the use of ”unemployed” instead if this is the case, as some students engage in work study. Tables 1 and 2 have grid lines while tables 3 and 4 do not. I suggest a uniformity in table presentation according to journal’s guidelines. Pg 15: 273-276: “Out of the 406 participants, 1.7% (7) had triple infection...”. Are the authors describing those with triple infection etc from the population or individuals with triple infection etc who were anaemic? If it is haemoglobin level that is being described, anaemia was not indicated anywhere in this section aside from the subtitle. Authors should endeavour to clarify this section. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: Yes: Nneoma Confidence JeanStephanie ANYANWU [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-20708R4 Malaria and intestinal parasite co-infection and its association with anaemia among people living with HIV in Buea, Southwest Cameroon: A community-based retrospective cohort study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sandie, Thank you for resubmitting your manuscript to PLoS ONE. Although the data from this study has potential to be informative, relevant topics raised by the reviewer #3 during the peer review process remain to be addressed by the authors. At this time, we strongly suggest the authors to proper address all topics raised by the reviewer. For your guidance, a copy of the reviewer’s comments was included below. Please submit your revised manuscript by December 20. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Luzia Helena Carvalho, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: Authors did not satisfactorily attend to comments and concerns raised in the course of my previous review of the manuscript. It is imperative that the manuscript be revised to address these comments before it can be accepted for publication. Below are the comments: Pg 3, 65-67: This statement is incorrect. I pointed this out in my previous review. Authors stated “microbial and parasitic infections such as…”. It is expected that the examples to be given would be microbial and parasitic infections, and not their aetiological agents. Plasmodium is not an infection but an agent, likewise Mycobacterium. If the authors insist on mentioning the aetiology of the infections, then I suggest “microbial and parasitic infections… “ be corrected to “microbes such as Plasmodium…”. Authors need not repeat parasites in this revision as microbes adequately captures this in the context. Pg 4, line 74-75: “African countries still bear the largest… “. Contrary to the authors’ reply to my previous comment, the most recent WHO world malaria report was published in April 2020. Please update information provided in this section. Pg 6, line 127: Contrary to the authors’ reply to my comment, this assessment was concluded and announced in 2018. Also, summary sheet for this report is dated February 2020 and South West Region is not the 6th but the 7th according to the summary sheet. Please visit https://phia.icap.columbia.edu/cameroon-summary-sheet/ to obtain this resource and revise this section of the manuscript accordingly, as well as the affected reference. Pg 6, line 136: Authors were required to specify the steps and assays used for the confirmation of HIV Status. This has not been done. Determine is not a confirmation assay, although it is employed as a national algorithm in certain countries alongside others serial assays for diagnostic purposes. Western blot and PCR are confirmatory assays used for confirmation of HIV infection. Did authors employ any of these in confirming the HIV Status of study participants? If yes, please give a detailed description of the assay methods employed under a subtitle. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-20-20708R5 Malaria and intestinal parasite co-infection and its association with anaemia among people living with HIV in Buea, Southwest Cameroon: A community-based retrospective cohort study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sandie, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLoS ONE. After careful consideration, we felt that your manuscript still requires substantial revision, following which, it can possibly be reconsidered, thus governing the decision of a “major revision”. According to the reviewer, the methodology is heavily flawed due to the lack of confirmation of the HIV Status of the study participants. Where confirmation assays are not obtainable for one reason or the other, national algorithm is often employed and acceptable for research purposes. The reviewer strongly suggests the authors to adjust MS’s results otherwise the quality of the MS may be compromised. Please submit your revised manuscript by January 30. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: Authors have done a commendable job in addressing my review comments. However, the methodology is heavily flawed due to the lack of confirmation of the HIV Status of the study participants. Where confirmation assays are not obtainable for one reason or the other, national algorithm is often employed and acceptable for research purposes. National algorithm usually involves serial testing (more than 1 test). Cameroon employs 2 RDTs in 2 or 3 serial tests, depending on whether Indeterminate results were obtained. With only one test (Determine) carried out, it is impossible to tell if there were any false positives/negatives obtained. I suggest that authors visit https://bmjopen.bmj.com/content/8/3/e020611 to study the algorithm used and carry out the same methods in the present study to improve the quality of this study. Also, I suggest that the inability to carry out further confirmation assays be included in a section with the subtitle "Study limitations". Other challenges/limitations encountered in the course of the study can also be included in this section. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-20-20708R6 Malaria and intestinal parasite co-infection and its association with anaemia among people living with HIV in Buea, Southwest Cameroon: A community-based retrospective cohort study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sandie, After careful consideration, we feel that your manuscript will likely be suitable for publication if the authors revise it to address additional points raised by the reviewer. According to reviewer, there are some specific areas where further improvements would be of substantial benefit to the readers. For your guidance, a copy of the reviewers' comments was included below. Please submit your revised manuscript by January 20. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Luzia Helena Carvalho, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: Pg 6, 134 - Pg 7, 144: From the authors' response to my review comments, I understood that the PLWH enrolled in this study were already confirmed cases undergoing treatment. Such patients undergo testing at intervals (determined by the physicians) to ascertain if their proviral load is still detectable. According to the authors, the confirmation tests were carried out by the HAART centres before the authors enrolled the participants. If that was the case, I suggest that authors include a statement clarifying that all confirmation tests were already performed by the treatment centres on the study participants before they were enrolled in the study, and that the Determine test was carried out by the authors perhaps for quality control purposes. I recommend that the statement be included in Pg 7, line 141, immediately after "PLWH identified through the outreach programmes not registered in the HIV treatment centre were referred to the treatment centre for confirmation and follow-up." ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Malaria and intestinal parasite co-infection and its association with anaemia among people living with HIV in Buea, Southwest Cameroon: A community-based retrospective cohort study PONE-D-20-20708R7 Dear Dr. Sandie, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Luzia Helena Carvalho, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: Yes: Nneoma Confidence JeanStephanie ANYANWU |
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PONE-D-20-20708R7 Malaria and intestinal parasite co-infection and its association with anaemia among people living with HIV in Buea, Southwest Cameroon: A community-based retrospective cohort study Dear Dr. Mekachie Sandie: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Luzia Helena Carvalho Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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