Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 13, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-25397 Long-Term Outcomes after Kidney Transplant Failure and Variables Related to Risk of Death and Probability of Re-Transplant: Results from a Single-Center Cohort Study in Brazil PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Requião-Moura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: This manuscript is of interest to the renal transplant community, but is not acceptable for publication in its current form. The manuscript requires more detailed methodology and results description. Please provide data on:
There are also other issues, which are described in detail by the Reviewers. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 19 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I agree with the authors about need for more regional and local data in failing/failed kidney allograft population. As authors pointed out, only limited conclusions can be drawn from this single-center data set in terms of factors affecting re-transplant and dialysis. Regardless, some of the results of this analysis are thought provoking and merit further investigation. The data set is also limited in terms of the risk factors that were assessed. Can the authors comment on possibility of including patients comorbidities, especially cardiac and malignancy related, in risk factors. Also will the authors be able to describe the immunosuppression that patients were on after failed allograft, and if that affected outcomes? I also have some minor suggestions: 1) Line 42: Does AV graft include AV graft and AV fistula? If so, please change the term 2) Line 44-45 :“In a sensitivity analysis, other two variables were related to morality: cellular acute rejection (B=- 0.859; P=0.02) and phosphatemia when resuming dialysis” -Spelling correction: MORTALITY -Suggest changing the language to clarify the effect of phosphorus. perhaps change to hyperphosphatemia 3)Line 241-242; “Generally, the outcomes after kidney transplant are closed when the recipient returns to dialysis”. Change to “monitoring of the outcomes” 4)Line 285: “confection” . change to “construction” 5)line 339: “anti-HLA development” change to anti-HLA antibody development 6)Line 365-366” Moreover, because this was a retrospective study, some variables had many missing values, mainly during the critical patient lifetime period, which is the new incidence in dialysis.”. Need language change. Not sure what "which is the new incidence in dialysis" ,means? Reviewer #2: Requião-Moura et al analyzed the variables related to the re-transplant and death risk with data obtained from a single-center cohort. I have minor concerns about the manuscript in its current form. - English should be fully reviewed - Abstract: Authors reported “B” values but not hazard ratios of mortality for acute rejection and hypophosphatemia: “In a sensitivity analysis, other two variables were related to morality: cellular acute rejection (B=-0.859; P=0.02) and phosphatemia when resuming dialysis (B=-0.350, P=0.007).” Besides, please correct “morality”. - When were defined the variables related to resuming dialysis? A patient can re-start dialysis by haemodialysis the first two months and be transferred to peritoneal dialysis after that. Similarly, when was defined a patient as with a AV graft access? At the graft loss or one month later? Please, clarify. Similarly, when were obtained urea, potassium, calcium, P and PTH? - After graft loss, when and how was measured PRA? Sensitization is a well-defined risk factor for not receiving a re-transplant. Although there were many missing values that limit the analysis of PRA, it could be interesting to dichotomize the variable PRA the rule out its relationship with the retransplant risk. - Authors reported that graft nephrectomy was independently associated to a lower death risk after multivariate regression analysis (table 5). According to the provided results (page 10) graft nephrectomy was performed in 19 patients due to graft vascular thrombosis whereas in the others the transplant nephrectomy was carried out after graft loss. These two groups are quite different with respect to the inflammatory-associated status and I suggest analyzing the death risk excluding the group of graft nephrectomy due to early graft vascular thrombosis. - Higher phosphatemia did relate to a lower death risk (page 9). In page 12, authors suggested that higher phosphorus level can be a marker of better nutrition. In order to analyze this point, it could be interesting to include into the analysis the value of serum albumin at resuming dialysis if it is available. Related to this, some inflammatory markers such as CRP would be also interesting for analyzing. - Besides, it would be expected to detect an improvement in the mortality results over the years that compensates for the potential increase in the age of the recipients. Would it be possible to incorporate the transplant seasons into the analysis (eg: <2009 vs.> 2009). - Table 4. Thymoglobulin induction – % (n) is reported twice in the table and with different values - Please, provide the causes of death if available. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-20-25397R1 Long-Term Outcomes after Kidney Transplant Failure and Variables Related to Risk of Death and Probability of Retransplant: Results from a Single-Center Cohort Study in Brazil PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Requião-Moura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Thank you for the changes introduced. However, the following issues still require clarification:
============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 07 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Justyna Gołębiewska Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors adequately addressed all questions and modified the manuscript accordingly. Although the risk of death and retransplantation after graft loss has been previously analyzed in other studies, there is no enough information on the long-tern outcome after graft loss in patients living in emerging and developing countries. The current manuscript provides this information. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-20-25397R2 Long-Term Outcomes after Kidney Transplant Failure and Variables Related to Risk of Death and Probability of Retransplant: Results from a Single-Center Cohort Study in Brazil PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Requião-Moura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: In the Methods section the Authors state that "To comparison, the era of transplantation was dichotomized in two periods: before 2009 and 2009 or later." However there are no results of such a comparison presented. Please clarify.Please make sure to read the text carefully and to correct all inconsistencies before sending another revised version. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Justyna Gołębiewska Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Long-Term Outcomes after Kidney Transplant Failure and Variables Related to Risk of Death and Probability of Retransplant: Results from a Single-Center Cohort Study in Brazil PONE-D-20-25397R3 Dear Dr. Requião-Moura, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Justyna Gołębiewska Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-25397R3 Long-Term Outcomes after Kidney Transplant Failure and Variables Related to Risk of Death and Probability of Retransplant: Results from a Single-Center Cohort Study in Brazil Dear Dr. Requião-Moura: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Justyna Gołębiewska Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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