Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 11, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-28663 #Caremongering: A community-led social movement to address health and social needs during COVID-19 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Seow, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 14 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper. It was clear and well written and does a good job of documenting how people interacted with a social movement at a certain point in time of the COVID-19 pandemic. The only part of the paper that I was not convinced by was the methods. The search strategy and data collection section was clear but the method of the analysis was not. The author writes that they based their method on previous work but don’t explain what the methodology is and why it is appropriate for this work. I expected to see a citation of the methodology they followed here but was referred to (I assume) the author’s previous studies. I don’t think the reader expects to have to read other work from the author to understand how this study was done - it would be great to have the methods adequately explained in this section so that the paper can be assessed on its own merits. Also on methods, the author reports that they analysed content in order to “determine 1) the description and purpose of the group, 2) group rules, regulations and organization, and, 3) the nature of the content posted, as well as responses to posts.” They only report on the third aspect of this. It could be that the first point was to determine eligibility (useful to know if there were things other than language that would rule a group in/out). The second is interesting – did they all have the same rules? Were there different rules for paid and unpaid assistance etc? What sorts of things would make a person ineligible for the group? Did they have to live locally etc? This may be beyond scope! But I wondered all of these things as I was reading, because I had anticipated they would be reported as signposted in the second to last paragraph of the methods section. Finally, on methods, it was not clear to me what the following sentence meant, particularly the first part: “The topic of each post reviewed was coded, proceeding through subsequent posts (100 minimum per group) until no new codes emerged.” Can you rewrite this so that is it clearer? Other things I wondered and expected to find as I read the paper – did activity levels stay the same over time? Membership was reported at different points between March and Sept. What time period did the ‘posts per day’ reflect? Membership and activity aren’t the same – I would imagine activity would have waned over time as people became more accustomed to living in a pandemic situation, and this seems relevant to your study given that you gathered data at different points. Membership might have remained stable because people often don't bother to leave groups they are not actively engaged with. Can you report on this? While I completely understand not having the capacity to analyse groups conducted in languages other than English, it is probably a limitation also in that it may have missed groups of newer migrants, who might have had different needs from other communities. This could be reported as a limitation. Finally, I wasn’t convinced by the argument in the conclusion that the caremongering groups are health promotion tools. They might be but the claim seemed to come from nowhere and did not add to the paper. The paper seems a useful description of community rallying around a certain cause at a certain point in time. To make it more needs further analysis and argument I think. Note that while I said all the data aren’t available (per the compulsory question) I do not consider that to be an issue. It can be a problem, reviewing qualitative work in systems set up for quantitative assessment. The data are not required I don’t believe, and it is difficult to imagine how they could ethically be retained given that they are identifiers. So this is more a note for the editor. Reviewer #2: This study provides a descriptive account of Facebook-hosted online community support hubs that emerged across Canada in response to COVID-19 lockdowns. The authors describe the phenomenon and discuss whether the activities these hubs foster meet the definition of ‘health promotion’, concluding that they do. Study methods are well described, and I found questions that had about these (impacts of English only; underrepresentation of remote populations; and the ‘snapshot’ approach) were appropriately addressed in the limitations section. I note that there are no page or line numbers on the manuscript, which does make it harder to identify where revisions are recommended. I have a number of recommendations to make, which I will list below. 1. Please include a reference for ‘content analysis’ so that readers can see how your approach to data analysis is informed. Providing a brief description of why you chose this approach would also be welcome. 2. Avoid using the word ‘emerged’ regarding themes, as this term underestimates the role of the researcher in the identification of themes. ‘We identified’ is a good substitute. 3. Typo: ‘codese’ 4. In the results, the phrases ‘members who posted 310 times per day’ and ‘170 time per day’ should be rewritten to make ti clear that these were the total number of posts on a day, not the average contribution of each member of the hub. 5. Figure 1 should be ‘table 1’ 6. Discussion: the sentence beginning ‘whereas’ needs revision (it currently reads as part of the previous sentence, into which a full stop has been interpolated to make the sentences shorter). 7. Currently, the authors reference social media interventions on smoking cessation, breast cancer and HIV, and make the comment that #Caremongering is not focused on a siloed health issue, but on the ‘existing health and social needs in the community during an unprecedented global pandemic’. The reader is left to assume that these other social media interventions are based narrowly on health issues, but the reference for these are systematic reviews of – narrowly defined health issues! I think there is a real opportunity missed here to make some comparisons between #Caremongering and the community responses to HIV, which is far richer than a systematic review on specific topics on social media can capture. Consider some of these sources: Brown, G., et al., Mobilisation, politics, investment and constant adaptation: lessons from the Australian health-promotion response to HIV. Health Promotion Journal of Australia, 2014. 25(1): p. 35-41. https://theinstituteofmany.org/ Plummer D, Irwin L (2006) Grassroots activities, national initiatives, and HIV prevention: clues to explain Australia’s dramatic early success in controlling the HIV epidemic. Int J STD AIDS 17, 787–93. Grant, M.P., et al., Communal responsibility: a history of health collectives in Australia. Internal Medicine Journal, 2019. 49(9): p. 1177-1180. If this is too complex a task , the authors should revise their comments specifically about the narrow focus of HIV social media to reflect how the way that research counts social media (ie by focusing narrowly) may obfuscate anything that occurs outside a narrow lens. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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#Caremongering: A community-led social movement to address health and social needs during COVID-19 PONE-D-20-28663R1 Dear Dr. Seow, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Holly Seale Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thanks for addressing my comments 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Jane Williams Reviewer #2: Yes: Bridget Haire |
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PONE-D-20-28663R1 #Caremongering: A community-led social movement to address health and social needs during COVID-19 Dear Dr. Seow: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Holly Seale Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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