Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-11122 The critical role of infection prevention overlooked in Ethiopia, only one-half of health-care workers had safe practice: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sahiledengle, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 14 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We note that your literature search was performed on May 2019;to allow an up-to-date view of the topic, we would request that the search is updated. Moreover, please report in more detail the results of the quality assessment, showing how each included study scored in every item of the scale. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The topic chosen for the research paper is appropriate and interesting, however the background of the study lacks cohesion. Although, the beginning of the background section is informative however the problem defined has not been comprehensively supported by relevant research articles. The focus of the background section is on infection prevention of patients rather than on healthcare workers about whom the research paper is about. The methodology section needs more work for e.g. the author should explain what does ‘medical’ signify in the exclusion criteria and who are healthcare workers. The outcome of the study in the methodology section should be more comprehensive to begin with. In the discussion section the author should elaborate more at places where claims are made about poor infection control among healthcare workers. The claims should be supported by examples and the author should check for grammatical mistakes and typo errors for example. Line 12: ‘such as such’ Typo. Line 14 ‘maximize patient outcomes’: What the authors mean by maximize here is not clear. Line 23 ‘Cochrane Q test’ : It should be Cochran Q test . Line 51: what is HAIs? Line 72 : ‘Ethiopia, similar to other African countries, does not have a well-described report on the burden of ‘: The reader would like to know which are the other African countries. Line 79 : ‘Sufficient evidence that demonstrated the role of infection prevention on the reduction of HAIs’ : The reader would like to know about whom the authors are addressing, patients/healthcare workers? Line 84: ‘policies, and technical guidelines made the problem even worse’ : The reader would like to know about how did healthcare workers attitude made the situation worse. Line 87 : ‘the publication of the second 87 national infection prevention and patient safety guidelines was released.’ This statement does not convey the message and may confuse the reader. Line 88: ‘ From that day on, 88 considerable progress has been made in understanding the basic principles, acceptance, and use of 89 evidence-based infection prevention practices in Ethiopia’ : The reader would like to know more about the progress Line 90: ‘reported inconsistent findings’ : The reader would like to know more about inconsistencies. Line 139: ‘ Studies conducted on medical’ : What does medical signify here. Needs a definition. Line 301: ‘recommended infection prevention principles among HCWs in developing countries is poor’ : This can mislead the reader needs more detailed explanation. Line 335: ‘systematic intervention measures’ : The reader would like to know more about these interventions. Line 347: ‘prevention knowledge, might increase compliance’: This statement is not clear. Line 349: ‘holistic approach’: The authors have not discussed what do they understand by holistic approaches anywhere in the document. Reviewer #2: Ref: PONE-D-20-11122 The critical role of infection prevention overlooked in Ethiopia, only one-half of health-care workers had safe practice: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis Dear Editor Thank for you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. The study reviews the prevalence of safe prevention practices and the associated factors among healthcare workers in Ethiopia. General comments: This study is of interest to the readers, particularly those seeking to understand the situation of safe infection prevention in Ethiopia and its drivers. The authors calculated the pooled prevalence from the prevalence of safe infection prevention practices reported by healthcare workers. In my opinion, the method would more perfect in estimating the awareness/knowledge of health care workers rather their practices. What is the difference between “safe infection prevention” and “infection prevention” throughout the document? In some context, the words bring confusion than clarity. Some repetitive phrases, grammatical error and typos to correct throughout the document need to be addressed eg page 8Ln12, pg10Ln51, pg10Ln66, 75, 79, 232 Specific areas: Abstract In which direction these factors were associated with safe prevention practices? Were they risk or protective factors? Background The authors highlighted the release of the second edition of National infection prevention publication in 2012. What are the proposed components of infection prevention practices as per this document in the country and how do they relate to the components assessed by the authors? Methodology The authors reported 10 studies qualified for systematic review and meta-analysis based on inclusion and exclusion criteria. Since being both a quantitative and qualitative was not an inclusion criteria; I failed to figure out the number of studies reviewed per study design: quantitative and qualitative. Were all qualified studies both quantitative and qualitative? Outcome of the study The definition of the primary outcome and how it was computed don't match, the computation gives an impression of the awareness/knowledge of the practices and not how they practice. Results Table 1: what were the components assessed by for the Bekele I et al, Hussen SH., et al studies? Table 3: What is the reasoning behind the cut-off points in sample size and publication year variables? (Was there a new practise introduced before or after 2015?) Discussion How does this pooled prevalence compare to other findings elsewhere in Africa, for example. Limitation Most of the studies reviewed by the authors did not cover a good range of components of infection prevention practices. Could this be a limitation to keep in mind when presenting the obtained pooled prevalence? 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The critical role of infection prevention overlooked in Ethiopia, only one-half of health-care workers had safe practice: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis PONE-D-20-11122R1 Dear Dr. Sahiledengle, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The author's have revised and corrected the manuscript. The manuscript has improved and looks good to get published. Reviewer #2: Ref: PONE-D-20-11122R1 The critical role of infection prevention overlooked in Ethiopia, only one-half of health-care workers had safe practice: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis Dear Editor Thank for you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. The study reviews the prevalence of safe prevention practices and the associated factors among healthcare workers in Ethiopia. My recommendation My comments have adequately addressed by the authors and hence I recommend this work for next steps! Thank you ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Mohammed Owais Qureshi Reviewer #2: Yes: Erick Kinyenje |
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PONE-D-20-11122R1 The critical role of infection prevention overlooked in Ethiopia, only one-half of health-care workers had safe practice: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis Dear Dr. Sahiledengle: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Holly Seale Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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