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PONE-D-20-28159 Assessment of breast cancer surgical margins with multimodal optical microscopy: a preliminary clinical study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Iftimia, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you will see the two reviewers have some significant issues with the manuscript that need to be addressed. Specifically, the first reviewer brings up a number of points about lack of data on the target specificity, kinetics of probe activation, depth penetrance and analytical characterization. These are concerns that need to be addressed in your revision. The second reviewer mainly had minor comments and questions that are marked up in the pdf file attached. Please address all of these comments as well. I am happy to consider a revision of the work as long as you are able to address all of the reviewer comments with the addition of new data or with a reasonable explanation as to why additional data is not necessary. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 29 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: There are several aspects of this manuscript that are very exciting and have the potential to impact medical management of BCS. This manuscript presents data to demonstrate the utility of the method. However, the manuscript does not present enough information about aspects of the technology to fully interpret its impact. I will review the data presented and then the overall impact of the data. Data presented: Overall the authors are assessing a multi-modality optical imaging modality to assess tumor margins in lumpectomy tissues ex vivo. The approach has been developed to identify regions likely to have cancer using FL guided imaging (and a probe to assess tumor presence) and then utilizes other optical approaches to verify tumor presence and depth of tumor lesions (OCT and RCM). Probe: The description of the probe defines it as a Cy5.5 labeled probe that is self-quenched. The quench is released by uPA protease. The probe is also targeted to Her2 receptors, the sequence of the targeting peptide is withheld from the readers. There is in vitro data to describe the dequenching of probe and the level of activation. Methodology of use is quite straight forward. The probe is simply applied to ex vivo tumor resection samples for 1-2 minutes, rinsed and then FL measured. If FL regions are detected other means of imaging are used to confirm presence of cancer and report on its penetration. The level of un-quenched probe washout after a 2-minute incubation and washing should be assessed. Perhaps specific signal is lost. There is no data to demonstrate specificity of the probe for Her2 binding, nor protease activation. It would be good for there to be data explaining the tissue characteristics of probe activation. Using protease inhibitors specificity of probe activation could be established. Similarly using peptide competitors for Her2, receptor binding could be assessed. What is the kinetics for Her2 binding to the peptide in tissues samples, and for that matter do in vitro protease activation kinetics represent probe activation kinetics in tissue samples. Using mouse models with topical application of the probe, these could easily be answered. It is not clear why the probe should penetrate tissue at all given the short duration of incubation. Solubility measures of the probe should be presented and penetration studies into human tumors grown in mice would help inform the statement of 1 mm probe penetration. In general, topical applications of the probe is aqueous carriers do not promote tissue penetration. Finally, a reasonable discussion of the expression level of uPA in breast cancer tumors should be placed within the paper and include the presence of Her2 receptor as well. Justification for the synthetic design of this probe is sorely needed. Patient samples: Given the Her2 binding ability of the probe the patient samples used in the study should be identified as being Her2 positive or not. This information is not provided. Her2 only is overexpressed in around 20% of breast cancer patients, so it is not clear if utilizing the Her2 peptide ligand is helpful or not. Her2-positive and Her2-negative samples could be compared to describe the impact of the peptide ligand on tumor tissue recognition. The paper starts off claiming 100% correlation of the data with ground truth histology but later reveals that the correlation is only in histology verified positive lumpectomy specimens, and that false positives were detected. It is not clear if the multimodality approach was able to resolve these before or after histological verification. Cancer visualization: It is not clear the sensitivity of the methodology. Many pathological assessments call positive margins with very few cancer cells present. What is the lowest number of cancer cells that can be FL detected? The time for such analysis also needs to be demonstrated. The author states it speeds up analysis, but this is due to reducing the amount of tissue that OCT or Raman are used to study. What is the total average time to sample and analyze the lumpectomy samples for the presences of cancer? Is it faster than frozen sectioning? The author also states that correlations of FL and OCT images back to fixed tissue is difficult or impossible to perform. This has been solved for skin cancer and the author is referred to Walker et al., Cancer Research 2020. It is not clear is the cancer specimens were assessed from all sides. To gain true assessment of the utility of this approach all edges and sides of the tumor specimens must be assessed. With that in mind it would be good for the author to present sensitivity and specificity table for the samples analyzed. Was the study blinded to histology outcomes? Overall Impact of the Study: The impact of the approaches demonstrated here could be significant for management of breast conserving surgery. However, many of the parameters that are required for this assessment are missing, e.g. specificity of the probe, Her2 positivity of tested samples, time to perform the procedure, the ability to “see” the entire surface of the lump and stitch together a useful map of cancer at the margin to go back to the surgical cavity and in real time re-excise regions with positive margins. This would have been interesting to discuss in the future perspectives of the discussion section. Reviewer #2: It would be helpful to implement the attached edits within the pdf and have the manuscript read by a native English speaker. Overall this a well-conducted study that suffers a bit from a small sample size but highlights how the sum of multiple imaging modalities can make up for deficiencies inherent in any single method. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Assessment of breast cancer surgical margins with multimodal optical microscopy: a feasibility clinical study PONE-D-20-28159R1 Dear Dr. Iftimia, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Matthew Bogyo, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-28159R1 Assessment of breast cancer surgical margins with multimodal optical microscopy: A feasibility clinical study Dear Dr. Iftimia: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Matthew Bogyo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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