Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-22617 DEFINING AN INDETERMINATE TUBERCULIN SKIN TEST: A MIXTURE MODEL ANALYSIS OF TWO HIGH-RISK POPULATIONS FROM KAMPALA, UGANDA PLOS ONE Dear Dr.ssa Castellanos, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 20 September. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this study entiled: Defining an indeterminate tuberculin skin test: a mixture model analysis of two high-risk populations from Kampala, Uganda This is a well-intended initiative to address a major problem affecting the African population. 1The study, context is in keeping with other literature on the topic. Latent TB remains a pool for active TB disease and treatment of latent TB would be a better elimination strategy. 2 Indeed the readily available TST is not well interpreted because of cross reaction of the BCG vaccine and non tuberculosis bacteria. Consequently the identification of the true latent infected individuals may sometimes be missed out. The other tests like IGRA for latent TB diagnosis is not validated endemic areas. Therefore the most popular test may remain TST. 3 The authors therefore set out to map out the epidemiological distribution of TST in two study populations of urban Kampala using mixture model method and to define criteria for diagnosis of the TST test. 4 The selected study populations were appropriate, Kawempe division one of the crowding areas of Kampala yet crowding is among the well known risk factors for mtb transmission. 5 Sample size and study duration for both studies were adequate to generate sufficient data for the analysis. 6 The mixture model method used was appropriate since they were dealing with interactable variables and data was from two different populations. The Lubaga division included controls in their study. The Kawempe study however did not include controls. 7Hartigans’ dip test of unimodality to asses distribution was unimodal or multimodal was appropriate . 8 The Finite mixture normal model was for heterogeneity was appropriate. 9 presentations of data available is appropriate with tables and figures supporting it 10The authors were able to determine an intermediate reading they referred to as indeterminate. Reviewer’s comments In view of the above observations, the this study, Defining an indeterminate tuberculin skin test: a mixture model analysis of two high-risk populations from Kampala, Uganda I am only concerned about the Kawempe study that did not have a control group. Are these findings generalized to other populations at risk of disease? On the whole I find this study appropriate for publication Reviewer #2: This manuscript clearly defines a new category of clinical relevance in the application of the highly pervasive tuberculin skin test for tuberculosis in resource poor settings. This new category introduces greater rigor and robustness in the algorithm for decision making in regard to committing a borderline subject to tuberculosis treatment or not by proposing a follow up step for those in this category. General Comments 1. Your work is technically sound and received the rigour it deserves, by clearly describing the subject recruitment procedure. You, however, mention completely nothing about the appropriateness of your sample size with reference to the characteristics of the study population. A simple map to illustrate the relative locations of Lubaga and Kawempe within Kampala City would provide some spatial clarity to your audience. I suggest that you consider providing these pieces of information for benefit of the audience. 2. The data underlying the findings have not been made available. Was it not possible to deprecate the identities of the study subjects and achieve anonymity? Specific Comments Title After reading your manuscript a couple of times, I suggest it should read as: "Defining an Intermediate Category of Tuberculin Skin Test: A Mixture Model Analysis of Two High-Risk Populations From Kampala, Uganda" Abstract line #27 please note that Kampala does not have districts within, the administrative units of Lubaga and Kawempe are officially referred to as "divisions". Introduction line #78 Please consider a brief explanation of what the Mixture Model Analysis involves. line #79 consider explaining the concept of criterion based methods. Alternatively, consider clearly acknowledging the authorities of these two concepts in lines #78 and #79. Materials and Methods line #123 please find and appropriately acknowledge the Ministry of Health Guidelines on HIV. line #150 EM appears for the first time as an abbreviation. Consider writing this in full at first mention with the abbreviation in brackets. line #152 consider revising to read as "......"mixdist"(33) in the R programming language (R Core Team)". Discussion line #290 consider deleting ".......the other....". these appear redundant and do not add clarity to your point here. line #346 what is the rationale for this period? This is certainly not deduced from your data and analysis. line #364 please provide the authorities referred to here as "......others" ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Defining an intermediate category of tuberculin skin test: A mixture model analysis of two high-risk populations from Kampala, Uganda PONE-D-20-22617R1 Dear Dr. Castellanos, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: My concerns have been addressed accordingly We agreed and have included as limitation of the study that we do not have control group for the Kawempe study (lines 329-331). (lines 387-392): “We do not presume to suggest that there are fixed or standard criteria that define latent tuberculosis infection across populations. As has been pointed out by others, population characteristics and the goals of testing affect the choice of cutoff values. We do propose, however, that the process of TST surveys within populations at risk, followed by a mixture model analysis, is an evidence-based approach that can define meaningful criteria for latent infection in a given population. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: ESTER LILIAN ACEN |
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PONE-D-20-22617R1 Defining an intermediate category of tuberculin skin test: A mixture model analysis of two high-risk populations from Kampala, Uganda Dear Dr. Castellanos: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Francesco Di Gennaro Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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