Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-06984 Prescriptions Errors Prevalence and Associated Factors in an Emergency Setting: A Prospective Cross-Sectional Study PLOS ONE Dear Dr Alhawassi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. This paper describes a very interesting study. However, as the reviewers specify, it presents several major problems. Please, revise your manuscript and address all their valuable comments. In addition to the remarks of the reviewers, I observe other points that need to be clarified: - I am not familiar with the health care organization in Saudi Arabia. A description of the different clinics or units that compose the Emergency Department will be helpful. - The enrolment criteria for patients and the dates of the observation period should be reported - I have found some inconsistencies in the results. According to the authors, they identified 68 prescription errors. In table 1, the total number of “type of prescribing errors” is 83 (we can assume that a prescription could contain more than one error). However, in table 2 the total amount of “Involved Prescriptions” by “Therapeutic classification” are only 62. The same number (62) is the sum of “Dosage forms” in table 2 and the “Contributing factors” in table 3. On the other hand, the authors should observe the Criteria for Publication in PLOS ONE. Remember that PLOS journals require authors to make all data necessary to replicate their study’s findings publicly available without restriction (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability). Besides, the manuscripts should conform the corresponding reporting guidelines. Revise the information on the web site (https://journals.plos.org/plosmedicine/article?id=10.1371) and complete the STROBE checklist for observational studies. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 30 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study highlights an important topic not previously addressed in Saudi Arabia. However the paper needs extensive revision/ proof reading for grammatical errors, punctuation and sentence structuring. An example is the first paragraph in the introduction. Introduction: Line 100- do you mean This study….. Methods: Would be useful to provide the readers more background information about the settings in relation to the prescription pathway ( electronic prescribing, goes through pharmacy for checks, patient collects medication from pharmacy etc). Line 121: please cite and reference ‘the previously published studies’ Ethical approval- line 123- more information needs to be provided regarding obtaining patient consent, patient anonymity and confidentiality? Line 134: was the pharmacist collecting the data involving in the pilot stage as well in any way? Lines 139-140: sentence is very long and unclear- needs to be clarified. Line 140: you mention including patient’s file number and initials. How was anonymity of the patients protected? This needs to be addressed in the ethical approval section- Line 145: Why was the data only collected in the evening? Does this mean any patients discharged during the day were excluded from the study? This is unclear. Line 150- what is the study questioner? Line 156-157: The study is a prospective study- So my understanding is that any prescribing error was identified and resolved before the medication was dispensed to the patient? how were the recommendation rejected by assuring that the PEs was corrected, and no harm has reached the patient? Unclear- I assume this is for previous known patients or repeat prescriptions rather than new patients? Or do you mean that the patient was receiving the medication and was OK while in the ED and thus discharged with the same medication/ dose? Needs clarification. Line 164: continuous? Unclear how the causes of PE were identified? How did the pharmacist/researcher identify what were the factors contributing to the errors? Did the pharmacist ask the prescriber for the reason for making an error? How was any disagreement dealt with if the PE was rejected by the prescriber? How was the validity and reliability of the data collected assured? Results: So how many patients were recruited for the study (were 371 patients recruited?) You only mention the number of prescriptions and not patients. Analysis of the data could further be presented for the total number of patients besides the number of prescriptions. Line 196: You mention that 12% of the interventions were rejected. Where they justifiable? Good discussion. Would be interesting to report if these potential or near miss errors were/are reported? You talk about educating the prescribers but no mention whether incident reporting is encouraged or not and the role it can play to reduce errors and promote safety culture. Reviewer #2: The article has scientific rigor and importance to the world literature and Saudi Arabia. However, for the manuscript to be accepted in this Journal, I strongly advise that changes must be made throughout the text and, if possible, new data and discussions must be added. Thus, these some changes will make the article more robust and understandable to readers. Below, I list the points that need to be improved. Title - Change the term "Emergency Setting" to "Emergency Department". Introduction - The Introduction is short and focused. - Currently, there is a confusion in the understanding of the terms "Medication errors" and "adverse drug events". In this article, the authors do not study "adverse drug events", so I suggest deleting this information. - The first paragraph (lines 69-73) provides a situational panorama with very old and obsolete studies. In general, articles older than 5 years should not be used. Please include new and updated references, so that the reader can understand the real context of medication errors. - Clarify the phrase "high morbidity and increase the length of patients' admission and hospital stay" (line 71-72). Specify how much "increase" and “high” there was. - The phrase "Limited studies have focused on the prevalence and nature of PEs in the ED" (lines 93-94) is inaccurate information. I suggest the authors do an extensive search in the literature. There are many articles published about the subject of the article. - To improve the justification of the article, I suggest that you address the importance and consequences (negative impacts) that prescription errors can cause in an emergency department. Methods - The methods section is missing key information about the study. - Did the authors collect sociodemographic information, illnesses or complaints from the patient or why he / she sought the emergency department? - a fundamental question: Have data been collected on the positive impact of preventing errors? Did the prevented errors save costs for the Emergency Department or for the patient? Did the prevented errors improve the patients' quality of life? Did mistakes prevent new health problems in patients' lives? - Clarify who the research team is. Results - It would be very important for the authors to present the clinical, eco-economic and humanistic impacts of preventing errors. - Table 3: change “contributing factors” to “contributing factors (systems related)” and “causes for identified prescription errors” to “causes for identified prescription errors (human-related)”. Discussion - Overall, the discussion section requires clear connection with the study findings. Further tightening the connection between results with discussion will provide clear understanding of the study contribution and future direction of prevention of medication errors in Emergency Department. - It would be very important to relate the complaint or reason for going to the emergency department with the use of medicines. - If clinical, economic and humanistic impacts have not been collected, I suggest adding it as a study limitation. - The phrase “Although this study is one of few studies that evaluated the PEs in the ED” (line 265) is inaccurate information. There are several studies in the literature. Conclusion - The conclusion is very short. Explore further the conclusions that you observed with the results and describe the implications that this can have. References - Only 5 (22,7%) studies were published in the last 5 articles. This is a problem. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-20-06984R1 Prescriptions Errors Prevalence and Associated Factors in an Emergency Department: A Prospective Cross-Sectional Study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Alhawassi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please, address all the comments raised by the reviewers. Besides, I have also several remarks with respect to the manuscript:
Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 23 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the authors' for addressing my comments. Figure 1 has helped clarify the data collection process much clearly. I just have one very minor comment: -page 8- line 182-192: it is a very long sentence that could be divided for clarity- -Page 8-line 190- why only the Just culture? what about the learning culture etc? is the reporting of the error or near miss anonymised as well (for the person reporting it as well as the prescriber who nearly committed a PE)? Few verb tense errors: line 161: were line 179:were line 184: which then was recorded line 187: submitted Reviewer #3: Although authors have addressed most of the comments raised by the reviewers, there are still a few comments that need to be addressed: Page 9, Line 208: "The total number of errors per patients was 82 (ratio 1:1.3) where . . .". Total no. of errors per patient should be 82 errors/ 68 patients = 1.205. Page 10, Lines 234-236: "88.0% of the identified PEs in this study were resolved by the pharmacist and were recorded as accepted interventions, while physicians have rejected 12.0 % of the raised recommendations." In these 12% rejected interventions, Pharmacist had re-evaluated the prescription to categorize these into [1. Revised with no PE] [2. identified PE, not resolved]. Authors should clearly portray these figures in the Results section. In table 1: One more row can be added in the end for total no. of prescribing errors. Statistical significance was not shown for any data in the entire manuscript. There are a few grammatical errors such as: Abstract, Line 50: "About 36.8% of identified PEs was (were) related to. . ." Page 5, Line 121: ". . . opened around (round) the corner. . ." Page 6, Line 146: ". . .and who was (were) . . ." Page 8, Line 179: "Identified potential PEs was (were) then discussed. . ." Page 9, Line 208: ". . . errors per patients (patient) was . . ." Page 14, Line 336: "PEs in the emergency setting is (are) common. . ." ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-06984R2 Prescriptions Errors Prevalence and Associated Factors in an Emergency Department: A Prospective Cross-Sectional Study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Alhawassi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. First of all, I must explain that there has been a change of reviewers. The new referees have submitted their evaluations and valuable comments. Although most of their observations agree with the previous ones, you will perceive some differences. PLOS ONE evaluates submitted works based on methodological rigor, regardless of perceived novelty. However, the manuscripts must include references to other similar previous studies. Please, take into account the recommendations of the reviewers and quote those papers. The authors have been responsive to most of the previous comments and improved the manuscript. Though, there are still some points that should be amended to clarify the description of methods and presentation of results. Besides the comments of the reviewers, I would suggest (as a minor point) to show the same number of decimal places in the percentages in the tables (for example, only one). Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 28 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #4: Partly Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #4: I Don't Know Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #4: The study highlights key health issue in the region. For a start, I suggest the authors to quote and describe previous similar studies (done in the region) in the introduction section. There are two or three studies in Iran, one in Oman etc. There is a more recent systematic review about MEs in Middle East (2019), the one referenced in text is published in 2013. Link: https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s00228-019-02689-y The current status of results do not provide enough insight into the problem of PEs in Saudi Arabia. One way is to revisit data analysis, which can be improved by investigating the predictors for PEs. For example, class of prescribers, length of stay in ED, number of medications in prescription order.. etc. Line 103: Ref. 13: There is more recent review about MEs (as mentioned above). Line 196: SPSS should be referenced in text as (IBM Corp., Armonk, N.Y., USA). Table 1: number and % does not correlate with each other. For PE type (wrong dose): 19/82 = 23% but in table is 20.7%!! Table 2: It might be good to group all oral formulation as one (capsule, tablet etc..) Table 4: Title should be changed to (Healthcare professionals involved in PEs) Appendix: It would be useful to look at the data collection tool used for this study, to be included as appendix. Reviewer #5: The authors have mostly addressed the reviewers' comments satisfactorily. However, there a couple of issues remain: - One of the reviewers raised the issues of the denominator. This is still confusing in the manuscript. From what I can see, there were 504 prescriptions assessed, there were 82 errors in 68 prescriptions. But the number of patients for whom the 504 prescriptions were written is not presented. I suggest this be inserted in the first sentence of the Results e.g. A total of 504 prescriptions for xx patients were assessed. - Results, second sentence: "The total number of errors per patient was 82 (ratio 1:205)" . Firstly, it's impossible there were 82 errors per patient. There was a total of 82 errors. How many patients were there? Furthermore, "1:205" cannot be correct. I think the reviewer's suggestion was 1.205 - i.e. 1.205 errors per patient (not 82 errors per patient) - is this correct? - Table 1 states the total number of PEs is 82, but the addition of the types of errors is 77. If this table is counting PEs, the total should be 82. Please check. - Table 2 - one reviewer raised the issue of the numbers not adding up to the total number of errors. The explanation given by the authors for this discrepancy is satisfactory, but needs clarification within the table by a footnote as readers will ask the same question. Same for Table 3 where the system related factors don't add up to 82. - When presenting the results as a prevalence it is ambiguous what the denominator is. I suggest revising this to be e.g. 13.5% of prescription had at least one error, rather than saying a prevalence of 13.5% (as in Discussion first paragraph). This also applies when discussing other studies e.g. Discussion, paragraph 1 - prevalence of 13.4%... is this 13.4 errors per 100 orders or 100 patients, or 13.4% of prescriptions with at least one error? -Discussion, line 326-329: The main limitation that should be listed here is the lack of a denominator for the data provided. So for example, the most frequent medications with errors were analgesics and antibiotics, probably because these were the most commonly prescribed drugs. A comparison of error rates would provide a more complete picture of what types of prescriptions were more likely to have errors. However, as the authors have acknowledged that denominators were not available, this should be mentioned as a limitation more generally with the data and not only with the lack of denominators for the age and gender distribution (as it is currently worded). -From the Methods, I understand that discharge prescriptions were assessed for errors and not inpatient medication charts. This is based on the Study sample section of the Methods. If so, I think this should be made explicit in the Abstract and even the title. Some more minor issues: - Table 1 has an asterisk not addressed with a footnote. Please provide full form of abbreviation PE in the table footnote. - Table 3 has an asterisk not addressed with a footnote. -Table 4 needs the number of errors presented in addition to percentages (as in the other tables) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-06984R3 Prescribing Errors and Associated Factors in Discharge Prescriptions in the Emergency Department: A Prospective Cross-Sectional Study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Alhawassi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. The authors have been responsive to most previous comments, but there are still minor but relevant remarks.Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewer points out that the manuscript requires careful proofreading. Besides her comments, revise the whole text. In several sentences, the wording blurs the meaning. For example: - Page 9, lines 203-9. It seems clear that 68 prescriptions contained one or more errors. As 11 (16%) of them contained more than one error, the total number of identified PEs was 82. However, the wording is not clear, and specifically the expression “total number of errors per patient” is confusing. - According to the study, 36.8% of the identified PEs occurred in pediatric patients. However, it does not mean that “36.8% of prescriptions in the pediatric setting had at least one PEs”, as the authors assert. (Page 11, line 250) Also, other parts require changes: - In the discussion, there are two paragraphs (page 12, lines 276-81; page 13 line, 304 and following) that could be merged and shortened to avoid redundancy. Both of them describe studies reporting that the presence of pharmacists in ED results in a reduction of PEs. Also, a citation is required to support the first sentence of the paragraph on page 12. - The limitations of the study are explained in the corresponding section. However, this paragraph should be reorganized. A call for further research is frequently included at the end of the discussion section, but not in the middle of the limitations (page 14, line 329-30). So, it is clear that in previous drafts this point was the end of the section and, later, other sentences were added. Also, it is not a felicitous remark to conclude that “Consequently, these data provide very little information” (line 335). Please, rewrite the whole paragraph. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 31 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #5: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #5: The authors have addressed most of the reviewer comments. One remains to be addressed: -Table 2 - one reviewer raised the issue of the numbers not adding up to the total number of errors. The explanation given by the authors for this discrepancy is satisfactory, but needs clarification within the table by a footnote as readers will ask the same question. -One other minor comment is to explain what is meant by Drops in Table 2. e.g. is this eye drops, nasal drops?? Some grammar changes needed (but please check rest of manuscript carefully): -Abstract, Methods, first sentence: "in an ambulatory ED", not "at ambulatory ED". -Abstract, Methods, second sentence: "Data were collected for six month using a customized reporting tool."; not "Data collected for six months period...". -Abstract, Methods, Third sentence: "All patients discharged from the ED with a discharge prescription..."; not "All patients who were discharged from ED with a discharged prescription..." -Abstract, Results, first sentence: "504 prescriptions for 504 patients were reviewed and 13.5% (n=68) had at least one error" or "13.5% (n=68) of the 504 prescriptions reviewed (for 504 patients) had at least one error". -Abstract, Results, second sentence: move the % to after the error type e.g. "Main PE encountered were wrong dose (23.2%), wrong frequency (20.7%)....". -Abstract, Conclusion: "PEs in the ED are common...", not "PEs in ED setting is common..." -Introduction, page 4, lines 99-101 (new text): "... revealed that 50.5% of the total MEs occurred in the ED, with 22.6% of these being PEs." -Introduction, page 4, lines 107-109 (new text): the sentence beginning "A recent review..." is not a full sentence, pls revise. -Discussion, first sentence: "This study found that 13.5% of patients' electronic prescriptions in the ED had at least one PE." End the sentence here then compare to the literature in a new sentence, as this is currently a very long sentence. -Discussion, first sentence: "... where PEs were found to occur in 13.4% to 50.5% of prescriptions." -Discussion, first paragraph, last sentence: "...by several studies, but PEs are nonetheless alarmingly common in the ED". -Discussion, last paragraph, line 333-335: "For example, a comparison of error rates for each medication class would...". ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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