Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 8, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-28283 Excessive sleepiness in patients with psychosis: an initial investigation PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Reeve, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process (please see below). Please submit your revised manuscript by December 30th. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewers' comments: Reviewer #1: In this work, Reeve and colleagues successfully tried to pave the basis for studying the mechanisms of a common phenomenon seen in the clinical practice, namely, the significantly high amount of sleepiness in patient with psychosis. They compared two previously reported groups of psychotic patients with similar diagnosis: one group suffering from excessive sleepiness, the other not. They focused on differences among therapies, quality of sleep, fatigue, average activity, prevalence of sleep disorders, psychiatric symptoms, and quality of life. The work does not show significant differences in any comparisons, but in the sleep-related ones. Specifically, significant differences are shown for 24h average activity, sleepiness amount and fatigue (table 2), confirming the correct separation of the two groups. The conclusions reported by the authors are in line with their findings and reproducible. Moreover, the sample size and statistical power reach the threshold accepted by the community. The language of the manuscript is clear, effective, and intelligible. Nevertheless, showing visual graphic for the results may help its fruition. Minor revisions: The authors propose to mirror the paradoxical insomnia to sleepiness for avoiding objective verification of hypersomnia. Therefore, they should call their sleepiness paradoxical hypersomnia. Moreover, despite hypersomnia, as described in introduction, can be considered different (correctly) than sleepiness, the two terms are used as equivalent in the discussion. Introduction: Reeve and colleagues do not refer to any work for the definition of sleepiness. Is this their own definition? If so, it should be stated. The paragraph regarding contributors to excessive sleepiness can have a clearer logical flow. One space is needed before the sentence next to ref 31 (moreover, ref 31 should have been numbered within the previous paragraph). The comparison group is referred as ‘no excessive sleepiness’ group (probably worth to be used here as well) in the results rather than ‘comparison’ group as stated in this section. Methods: Recruitment: References or reasons for the criteria chosen should be added (or re-referenced). Subjective sleep recording: The authors should report the distinct number of days filled by each participant. Psychotic experience: The term ‘past month’ can be misleading. Quotation marks should be moved after brackets within the sentence about cognitive disorganization. Negative affect: The term ‘past month’ can be misleading. Quotation marks should be consistent with the previous paragraph. Quality of life: Verb tense inconsistency is present within this paragraph. Analysis: Verb tense inconsistency is present within this paragraph. Furthermore, a comma should be added after the last bracket. Demographic: 70,4% can be considered more than slightly higher proportion of males. Here ‘comparison’ (from introduction) and ‘no excessive sleepiness’ (quotation mark should be added) terms are considered equivalent without previous clarifications. Table 1: Occupational status information does not seem relevant for the rest of this manuscript. However, if cited, it may be interesting for the second paragraph of the ‘Limitations’ section. Table 2: SD of comparison group average sleep duration should fit on the upper line. Fatigue’ p-value results difficult to interpret. The caption should explain the acronyms used (not only in this table, otherwise please remove them). Discussion: Reeve and colleagues have shown no statistically significant differences between ‘symptoms’ among the two groups. However, some interpretations about comorbidities strongly highlight differences and this might be seen as ambiguous. For example, would be worth to remove from brackets ‘’although these differences were not significant’’ from the following sentence: ‘’Regarding clinical symptoms, cognitive disorganization was more severe in the excessive sleepiness group, but the data also indicated lower severity of paranoia and hallucinations (although these differences were not significant).’’ Maslowsky & Ozer 2014 and Parkes et al., 1998 references should be formatted according to the rest of the document. Reviewer #2: The proposed manuscript investigates an important and treatable clinical issue in non-affective psychosis. Hypersomnolence is seldom investigated and formally assessed in clinical practice, and remains an under-researched topic in this category of patients. Furthermore, hypersomnolence is not homogeneously defined in available studies, leading to highly heterogeneous findings. The authors present a secondary analysis of a previous descriptive study (“Sleep Disorders in Early Psychosis: Incidence, Severity, and Association With Clinical Symptoms”), focusing on subgroups differentiated by using the Diagnostic Interview for Sleep Patterns and Disorders. In a cross-sectional study, psychotic outpatients reporting excessive sleepiness were compared with psychotic patients who did not report excessive sleepiness,. The authors found significantly lower average activity and significantly higher levels of sleepiness on the ESS in the excessive sleepiness group. No significant differences were found in medication or dosage, psychiatric symptoms and sleep duration between the two study groups. The study design has several limitations, which have been clearly discussed in the dedicated section: small sample size, absence of correction for multiple testing, wide confidence intervals, etc. Overall, the paper is well-written, methods are detailed and clear, the authors provided hypotheses to explain the results and they suggested future perspectives of improvements. I think that a more elaborated discussion is needed regarding the following issues: -The authors mentioned organic and neurological disease among the exclusion criteria. Did any of the patients take non-psychiatric medications? Could they interfere with sleep or cause sleepiness? -Was the severity of psychotic symptoms assessed with objective measurements in addition to self-reported questionnaires? -The authors found no differences between the groups in antipsychotic medication type and dosage using Defined Daily Dose and Chlorpromazine Equivalents for comparisons. These systems have some intrinsic limitations when investigating sedation instead of antipsychotic effects. Antipsychotic medications have variable sedative effects. Chlorpromazine Equivalents are based primarily on dopaminergic blockade and not upon a drug receptor profile for histaminergic systems, among others. I think this could be mentioned in the “limitations” section. -Some of the limitations described in the previous study could be mentioned in the new paper in the dedicated section, for example the lack of polysomnography (which could provide useful data to make a differential diagnosis of multiple causes of excessive sleepiness) and the issue of representativeness of the participant group. -Was excessive sleepiness discussed, formally assessed and treated in clinical practice in these patients? This aspect was explored in the previous study; I think it would be useful to also mention this in the new manuscript. -The authors found hallucinations to be less severe in the excessive sleepiness group, although results were not statistically significant. Were sleep-related hallucinations investigated or discriminated from day-time hallucinations? -The core take-home message of the manuscript is that more attention should be given to factors influencing excessive sleepiness other than medication in psychotic patients. The manuscript is based on data from a previous study with different objectives, but despite its limitations it offers stimulating new data that suggest new perspectives for further investigations. ********** |
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