Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 18, 2020 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-20-29049 Running prevalence in Portugal: Demographic, behavioral and psychosocial characteristics PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Pereira, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please, revise your methodology to truly meet the standards of epidemiological studies. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 13 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Daniel Boullosa Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2.We note that you have indicated that data from this study are available upon request. PLOS only allows data to be available upon request if there are legal or ethical restrictions on sharing data publicly. For more information on unacceptable data access restrictions, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-unacceptable-data-access-restrictions. In your revised cover letter, please address the following prompts: a) If there are ethical or legal restrictions on sharing a de-identified data set, please explain them in detail (e.g., data contain potentially sensitive information, data are owned by a third-party organization, etc.) and who has imposed them (e.g., an ethics committee). Please also provide contact information for a data access committee, ethics committee, or other institutional body to which data requests may be sent. b) If there are no restrictions, please upload the minimal anonymized data set necessary to replicate your study findings as either Supporting Information files or to a stable, public repository and provide us with the relevant URLs, DOIs, or accession numbers. For a list of acceptable repositories, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-recommended-repositories. We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. 3.Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript: [This study was partly supported by the Fundação para a Ciência e Tecnologia, under Grant UIDB/00447/2020 to CIPER - Centro Interdisciplinar para o Estudo da Performance Humana (unit 447) and Universidade de Lisboa under PhD. grant conceded to Hugo V. Pereira. Marta M. Marques is funded by a Marie-Sklodowska-Curie Fellowship (Co-fund EDGE programme, grant agreement no. 713567).] We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: [The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.] Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: First of all, I would like to congratulate the authors for the manuscript submitted. All the comments and suggestions I provide below have the only purpose of increasing the quality of this work and the future research lines from a constructive rationale. Physical inactivity is considered the fourth leading cause of death worldwide, causing 5-10% of total mortality in Europe, depending on countries. Despite the ACSM, the AHA and the WHO strongly tried to reduce physical inactivity levels and sedentary behaviour, the majority of the people who live in industrialized societies do not meet the established recommendations for an active and healthy lifestyle. To better manage this situation, it is important to know not only individual factors, but also the social and economic background which leads to reduced levels of physical inactivity. In this sense, I suggest authors to include along the introduction section the concept of “active communities”, since a favourable environment (e.g. parks, running/walking paths, bike lanes or other sport facilities) seems to play an important role in the promotion of higher physical activity levels. Regarding material and methods section, the final sample was composed by 1084 eligible individuals (after exclusions). However, Table 4 shows data of 1024 participants (910 non-runners vs 114 runners). Further, Table 1 presents data of runners sort by gender and age group. However, the runners’ group is constituted by 115 participants in this case (79 male and 36 female; 73 between 18-40 y and 42 between 41-65 y) instead of 114, like it does in Table 4. Tables 2, 3 and 5 do not display the sample size for any group. Moreover, the main result of the present investigation (i.e. the prevalence of recreational running in Portugal) is calculated over the 1084 eligible individuals, since 10.6% of this sample size results in 114 runners. The authors should clarify these issues and better explain the procedure, including specific exclusion and inclusion criteria for a better reader’s comprehension. In the results section, I suggest authors to include the units of measurement (e.g. km, min, etc.) in the Tables, where applicable, for a better comprehension. With regard to discussion section, at the end of the second paragraph, it is said that previous research estimates running prevalence in Portugal about 5.5% in 2015. Data derived from the present study showed that running prevalence was almost doubled within only 2 years (i.e. up to 10.6% in 2017). What do authors think about this issue, since the increase in the participation in running events already exponentially increased worldwide in the past two decades? Is the magnificent increment in the present study maybe not be comparable to previously reported data in Portugal due to different ways of assessment? Authors should change the name of section 5 to “conclusions” instead of “discussion” (discussion is already presented in section 4). I would also suggest authors to include in the conclusions section the limitations of the present investigation. Authors are also encouraged to revise PLOS ONE submission guidelines. Reviewer #2: General comments: Thank you for the opportunity to review the submitted paper “Running prevalence in Portugal: Demographic, behavioral and psychosocial characteristics”. The purpose of this study was estimate the prevalence of recreational running in Portugal and describe characteristics of recreational runners. The main results indicate that a portion of 10.6% of the population of Portugal practices running regularly, describing their main motivations and also important socio-demographic data for public knowledge. In view of the importance of disseminating descriptive data on the population, some observations should be taken into account for future publication. In the methods section, it is important to describe in more detail how the questions were structured, perhaps inserting supplementary material so that the research can be replicated. The results of the study are interesting. I imagine that they can be used in the construction of investment strategies in public policies and business marketing strategies; however, this discussion could be further explored in the text. The results could include an analysis by region in Portugal; different local characteristics can increase the information of the study. The conclusion of the study must be restructured. This chapter should be more direct. I suggest bringing information about the main motivation and something more related to the main results of the study. Major Issues In Title - The term "Socio-demographic" is always used in the text and that is different from the term used in the title (“Demographic”). I suggest standardize the term used. In P.5 -Where did the participants' phone numbers come from? How was randomization performed? In P.5 Can the data for estimating the prevalence of running from the Portuguese Cardiology Foundation be found on any website, magazine or elsewhere? In P.5 Did all contacted patients accept to participate in the study? From what is described it seems that yes, but that those who did not answer completely did not accept to participate in the study or had any difficulty in answering the questions? It is important to describe this flow of participants in detail; I suggest a figure to help explain it. In P.5- “…First, a panel of running and PA experts from academic and non-academic public and private institutions, agreed on a definition of recreational running – “running at least 2 days per week or at least 60 minutes per week, over the past 3 months, excluding any preparation for competitive sports…”. – This is important data from this study and cannot be defined in a generic way, a reference is needed to better support this classification. In P.9 - “The prevalence was higher in men compared to women” - Could you move forward in this discussion? Is the relative female population of Portugal proportional to the result found or is it really larger? What is the possible explanation for the result? In Table 3. - The methods describe "The significance level was set at p <0.05 for all tests." Why is 0.001 used in the Table 3? Minor issues In P. 7 - Review “10,6%”- 10.6% In P. 9 – “eighty-two”- I suggest changing it to 82%. In P.11 - Check the chapter 5 title. In general – Review the reference format. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Rodrigo Gomes da Rosa [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
|
Running prevalence in Portugal: Socio-demographic, behavioral and psychosocial characteristics PONE-D-20-29049R1 Dear Dr. Pereira, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Daniel Boullosa Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thank you for the authors' response. I believe that all the reviewers' questions have been answered and the text has substantially improved. Regarding the content of the article, I consider it ready for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Rodrigo Gomes da Rosa |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-20-29049R1 Running prevalence in Portugal: Socio-demographic, behavioral and psychosocial characteristics Dear Dr. Pereira: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Daniel Boullosa Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .