Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 11, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-03947 HIV false positive screening serology due to sample contamination reduced by a dedicated sample and platform in a high prevalence environment PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Linström, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In accordance with reviewer's comments, this manuscript is really in need of clarification (the aim and the style). To that end an extensive english editing is required to render the manuscript readable by non-experts. In addition sample contaminations are a real diagnostic issue and should be solved using simple means, but which ones? This is not clear as 'proposed' in the conclusion section < Automated high throughput shared diagnostic platforms risk generating false-positive HIV test results, due to sample contamination. "Measures" are required to address this. Combining separate samples for HIV serology with sample labels restricting testing to dedicated modules successfully reduced false positive HIV rates>. The authors should list what should be the measures, please specify in detail the measures to avoid contamination. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 06 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper provides good evidence for how false positive HIV serology results can be generated on automated analysers that perform a combination of chemistry, immunology and serology tests frequently used in clinical pathology laboratories. The key finding was the 4-fold increase in likelihood that a sample would test HIV positive if it had first passed through the chemistry module of the analyser (HIV serology tested after creatinine was tested). The authors also demonstrate the effectiveness of measures to reduce sample contamination, in particular use of a dedicated sample tube for HIV serology testing. Recognition of this problem is very important, especially where these instruments are used in areas of high HIV sero-prevalence. I recommend publication, but there are a number of aspects of the manuscript that require fixing. I found the write up of the results particularly difficult to follow Abstract: Line 24: Alternative lead in sentence: Automated testing of HIV serology on clinical chemistry analysers has become common. Line 24: “high throughput, high HIV….” Line 38: “repeat independent testing on follow up samples of 485…” Lines 40-42: “The odds ratio for generating a false positive HIV serology result was 4.1 (95%CI:1.69-9.97) when creatinine was tested before HIV serology on the same sample…” Introduction: P3, line 51; full stop after “serological testing” P3, line 80: delete “in order…recently”. Replace with “We issued a notice…” P3 line 86: Dedicated sample labelling: “ to enforce dedicated sample testing for HIV serology a suffix (referred to hereafter as “Q”suffix) is added to the barcode sample label on all…” I would prefer the authors to refer to the use of a dedicated sample tube, rather than “Q suffix” (which was the technical means by which this end was achieved) throughout the manuscript, but I don’t feel too strongly about it. Remove references 11 and 12 – these are not documents available to journal readers. Line 92: “After requests for HIV serology are not permitted on the…” P4: Study aims: (switch around) 1) To assess factors associated with LP&E serology 2) To investigate the impact of measures to ensure the use of a dedicated sample on the overall…” Methods: Under data retrieval and analysis: After the first lead-in sentence, switch the order of paragraphs as follows section from line 136 to 152 should come before lines 121-135. Line 128: “…would not have been at risk of contamination from this source” Line 140 : replace “these samples” with “initial results” and “negative” with “false positive” Line 142: “the sample was classified as true positive” Line 145: “It is expected that not all LP&E results have…” Results: 158: “…before and after the dedicated sample tube intervention…” 162-175: this section is very hard to follow. Please rewrite focussing on the main findings you want to highlight. I am confused by some of these results. In table 1 and in the text it is stated that a total of 3591 samples were concurrently tested for creatinine “after “Q suffix” implementation (in 2563 creatinine was tested first and in 1028 it was tested second). How can this be? The Q suffix was supposed to ensure that the sample was only tested for HIV. These numbers should all be “0”. It seems to me that the important figures to compare are the rates of LP&E between the samples where creatinine was tested first, vs where it was tested 2nd . i.e. 3.32% vs 0.52% Lines 182-191: again very difficult to follow. Table 1 Title should read: “Summary of low positive and equivocal HIV antibody rates in samples tested before and after introduction of a dedicated sample tube for HIV serology testing. The figures (numbers) for LP&E results: please amend or make it clear what the numbers in columns 3 and 4 (rows 7-12) refer to. Middle section of the table: Column 1 row one: LP&E samples with a repeat test (or positive samples with a repeat test) Bottom section: (extrapolation data) adds no value. I would remove Figure 1: No legend is given. I would suggest “ A downward trend in percentage of LP&E samples was observed with serial introduction of measures to reduce sample contamination on the analyser.” Figure 2: Legend: Bar chart shows percentage of LP&E results over 4 month intervals from September 2017 to May 2019. Discussion: Rewrite the first paragraph with a lead in sentence contextualising the problem. Highlight the main findings. Don’t restate all the results in the first paragraph. References: The following references are not available to journal readers. Either provide a URL or remove from the list: 7, 8, 10, 11, 12, Provide URL for 4 and 20 ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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HIV false positive screening serology due to sample contamination reduced by a dedicated sample and platform in a high prevalence environment PONE-D-20-03947R1 Dear Dr. Linström, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jean-Luc EPH Darlix, MG, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-03947R1 HIV false positive screening serology due to sample contamination reduced by a dedicated sample and platform in a high prevalence environment Dear Dr. Linström: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Jean-Luc EPH Darlix Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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