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Original SubmissionJuly 30, 2020
Decision Letter - Antonio Palazón-Bru, Editor

PONE-D-20-22351

A multidimensional functional fitness score has a stronger association with type 2 diabetes than obesity parameters in cross sectional data

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Abstract

- No comments

Introduction

- The first sentence is unclear. What is the main point?

- The argument is not clearly set up. It seems that the authors argue in the first paragraph that a causal relationship between obesity and T2DM does not exist. The shift in the second paragraph to measuring fitness is abrupt.

- The authors contend that anthropometric measures of obesity are not as relevant as fitness, but no papers discussing how obesity relates to anthropometric measures are discussed in the introduction. It would be helpful for the authors to cite the research measuring anthropometrics in adults with obesity to explain why they feel that fitness is a more relevant measure (see below).

o The association of waist circumference with walking difficulty among adults with or at risk of knee osteoarthritis: the Osteoarthritis Initiative

SV Gill et al., Osteoarthritis and cartilage 25 (1), 60-66

- Overall, the introduction needs to be reworked to clearly state what the argument is.

Method

- What do the authors mean by abdominal plasticity?

- Although the authors state what areas of fitness the HRPF measures, they do not provide any details about what the 15 tasks actually are.

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Results

- No comments

Discussion

- A significant limitation of this study is that there is no measure of percent body fat. WHR provides a rough estimate of the distribution of body fat, but a formal measure of body fat, skeletal muscle mass, etc. would provide a clearer picture about why the authors argue the limited role of anthropometric measures in understanding limitations related to obesity.

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Reviewer #1: No

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Revision 1

Dear Editor,

Thanks for giving us the opportunity to revise.

Please find below our specific responses (in blue) to individual issues.

2. Thank you for including your ethics statement:

'The study proposal was reviewed by the Institutional Ethics Committee, In-house

Research, of the Deenanath Mangeshkar Hospital and Research Centre on 27th Aug

2018. Owing to the retrospective nature, the requirement for informed consent was

waived by the committee and the data were anonymized before availing for analysis

which was done between October to December 2018.'

a. Please amend your current ethics statement to confirm that your named institutional review board or ethics committee specifically approved this study.

b. Once you have amended this/these statement(s) in the Methods section of the manuscript, please add the same text to the “Ethics Statement” field of the submission form (via “Edit Submission”).For additional information about PLOS ONE ethical requirements for human subjects research, please refer to http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-human-subjects-research'

The ethics statement is modified accordingly and corresponding change in the form made.

3. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript:

"We thank the management of Deenanath Man geshkar Hospital and Research Center that supports the BILD clinic, Mr. Deepak Desai and Mrs. Sarita Desai for financing the study..."

We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form.

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"The authors received no specific funding for this work."

Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf.

The funding mentioned earlier was not for this study, but for raising the clinic infrastructure. That mention in the acknowledgement is removed now. So the funding statement remains unchanged.

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Data availability statement remains unchanged and will make the repository address available on acceptance.

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Rechecked and found appropriate.

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5. Review Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: Abstract

- No comments

Introduction

- The first sentence is unclear. What is the main point?

- The argument is not clearly set up. It seems that the authors argue in the first paragraph that a causal relationship between obesity and T2DM does not exist. The shift in the second paragraph to measuring fitness is abrupt.

The opening paragraph is reorganized in the revised MS for greater clarity.

- The authors contend that anthropometric measures of obesity are not as relevant as fitness, but no papers discussing how obesity relates to anthropometric measures are discussed in the introduction. It would be helpful for the authors to cite the research measuring anthropometrics in adults with obesity to explain why they feel that fitness is a more relevant measure (see below).

We have added a new paragraph in the introduction section with references to discuss the association and possible causation links between fat distribution, anthropometry and metabolic effects.

o The association of waist circumference with walking difficulty among adults with or at risk of knee osteoarthritis: the Osteoarthritis Initiative

SV Gill et al., Osteoarthritis and cartilage 25 (1), 60-66

Thanks for bringing this paper to our notice. Citing a few other papers along with this we have added a para in the discussion section that discusses the association between anthropometric parameters and functional fitness.

- Overall, the introduction needs to be reworked to clearly state what the argument is.

We hope in the revised and rewritten form the introduction has enhanced clarity and makes the purpose of the study clear.

Method

- What do the authors mean by abdominal plasticity?

- Although the authors state what areas of fitness the HRPF measures, they do not provide any details about what the 15 tasks actually are.

All details of the 15 tasks including abdominal plasticity are described in details in the supplementary information, which is cited in the main text in the methods section. The reviewer may have missed it.

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Results

- No comments

Discussion

- A significant limitation of this study is that there is no measure of percent body fat. WHR provides a rough estimate of the distribution of body fat, but a formal measure of body fat, skeletal muscle mass, etc. would provide a clearer picture about why the authors argue the limited role of anthropometric measures in understanding limitations related to obesity.

In the paper describing the retrospective part of the study, data on body composition was not available. This can be included in a prospective study. Nevertheless we have added in the revised paper along with selected references a brief discussion on whether body fat is a better predictor of insulin resistance or T2DM.

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Decision Letter - Antonio Palazón-Bru, Editor

A multidimensional functional fitness score has a stronger association with type 2 diabetes than obesity parameters in cross sectional data

PONE-D-20-22351R1

Dear Dr. Watve,

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Antonio Palazón-Bru, PhD

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

**********

4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: The authors have satisfactorily responded to the reviewers' comments. I think that the manuscript is ready to be accepted.

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Reviewer #1: No

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Acceptance Letter - Antonio Palazón-Bru, Editor

PONE-D-20-22351R1

A multidimensional functional fitness score has a stronger association with type 2 diabetes than obesity parameters in cross sectional data

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