Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 14, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-25473 A retrospective analysis of pathogen profile, antimicrobial resistance and mortality in neonatal hospital-acquired bloodstream infections from 2009-2018 at Tygerberg Hospital, South Africa PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Reddy Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. A retrospective review of hospital- acquired bloodstream in infections at a large tertiary care neonatal unit in a Western Cape Province, South Africa was conducted. Over an overall 10-year period (two five-year periods), the authors note a reduction in HA-BSI. The authors note high rates of resistance during the study period, and a decline in the in vitro susceptibility of piperacillin tazobactam and amikacin. These findings are important and the manuscript is a valuable contrubution to the understanding of South African and global burden of neonatal sepsis. Major comments: The basis of the recommendation to use piperacillin tazobactam + amikacin in the latter half of the study requires further explanation. Data from the first half of the study period was published in 2015 and already demonstrated a 73% ESBL rate. Was this antibiogram-directed? If not, what was the basis of selecting these two agents for the unit? The author does not differentiate between derepressed AmpC and ESBLs among S.marcescens isolates. Considering the large proportion of these isolates further detai, if available retrospectively, would be beneficial. The resistance phenotypes are brushed over fairly superficially. More detail can be provided in the results – specifically, what proportion of isolates were XDR and PDR. Which carbapenemases enzymes were detected in the isolates? Was there an outbreak of K.pneumoniae CRE in 2019 to account for the 25% CRE among K.pneumoniae in that year? A significant decrease in HA-BSI rates is noted in the latter half of the study period. However, these results are not discussed in the manuscript – no possible reasons for the decrease are suggested. Elaborate on why a retrospective folder review was performed on patients who died. Was it to confirm that there was no other attributable cause of death? More specific comments to address: Line 83: Study design. A definition for an episode of HA-BSI should be included in the methods. Although alluded to in data collection line 124, this should be specifically stated and included in the study definitions section. Investigation of suspected neonatal HA-BSI: Specify if resistance mechanisms were confirmed using other methods e.g. to differentiate between ESBL and AmpC production among Serratia marcescens. Line 116: Management of suspected neonatal HA- BSI. Explain the basis of this recommendation – the paper referenced in this section of the manuscript by Dramowski in 2015 describes a 73% ESBL rateLine 126: Data collection. Please clarify if 100 days was chosen at random or if this was the maximum number of days at which HA-BSI was observed. Lne 209: in the Methods section, study definitions are provided including XDR and pandrug resistance. However, there is no comment on the proportion of isolates which were XDR or PDR in the results. Fiure 2: Considering the larger proportion of AmpC producing S.marcescens isolates presented, was it possible to determine which isolates were true ESBL’s and which were derepressed AmpC’s? If this distinction cannot be made due to the nature of data collection, then this should be stated in the methods section, and a limitation added to the discussion. Carbapenem resistant Enterobacterales and Acinetobacter baumannii species are on the WHO Priority Pathogen’s Critical List. Additional details regarding these in the results and discussion would increase the impact of the manuscript.Figure 2: There appears to have been a change in epidemiology of CRE’s during period 1 and Period 2. It would be useful to elaborate, if possible, on the change. Were E.coli CRE’s due to the same carbapenemases enzyme as K.pneumoniae CRE’s in the latter part of the study?In the discussion, the authors mention a personal communication that 25% of K.pneumoniae isolates in 2019 were carbapenem resistant. However, this data is not reflected in this section of the results. Did this finding correspond to a documented outbreak in the unit? In the discussion:A significant decrease in HA- BSI rate is reported, however the author does not offer possible reasons for this reductionLine 279: The comment about reduced virulence of circulating strains should be referencedLine 287: As per comment in results section. Over the 10- year study period, could changes in CLSI interpretive criteria have affected resistance reporting rates for ESBL’s and CRE’s? If so, these need to be discussed. Conclusion: In addition to surveillance, the value of unit antibiogram provision to review empiric recommendations should be included. Minor Comments:
Line 37: Abstract Sentence amendment: " The crude mortality rate of neonatal HA-BSI increased from Period 1 to eriod 2 from 139/717 (19.4%) to 179/718 (24.9%) Line 60: remove comma before "and inadequate reporting”, line 124, use " in a neonatal ward" in place of "on", line 286, use " but have emerged in the neonatal unit" in place of "on" Line 129: suggest reword for clarity: Retrospective folder review was conducted for patients who died to determine if the case would be categorized as attributable or crude mortality Line 242: Where the term “cover” is used to imply in vitro activity of an antibacterial, this should be changed to “antibacterial activity for empiric use” Line 246: Discussion. Consider rewording “shift in draining patterns” to allow for improved understanding by an international readership – consider “changes to defined regional populations serviced by hospitals” Line 246: Add “increased” urbanization Line 248: There were “fewer” blood cultures submitted References: o Please check references – The reference list appears twice o Journal title incorrectly captured by reference manager- reference 13 Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 24 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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A retrospective analysis of pathogen profile, antimicrobial resistance and mortality in neonatal hospital-acquired bloodstream infections from 2009-2018 at Tygerberg Hospital, South Africa PONE-D-20-25473R1 Dear Dr. Reddy We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Adriano Gianmaria Duse, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-25473R1 A retrospective analysis of pathogen profile, antimicrobial resistance and mortality in neonatal hospital-acquired bloodstream infections from 2009-2018 at Tygerberg Hospital, South Africa Dear Dr. Reddy: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Adriano Gianmaria Duse Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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