Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-04995 Multivariate method for prediction of fumonisins B1 and B2 in maize using Near Infrared Spectroscopy (NIR) PLOS ONE Dear authors Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. A major concern from one of the reviewers is the novelty of the work and I have to agree with the reviewer. Nevertheless, we want to give you the opportunity to clarify more specifically what is new in your data compared to data published by other research groups in the past. In addition, also take into account the comments raised by reviewer 1 on the clarity of the discussion We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by 21/05/2020. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper describes the application of the Near Infrared Spectroscopy (NIR) to quantify the level of contamination of total fumonisins in ground maize, and its comparison with well assessed methods such as Liquid Chromatography Coupled Tandem Mass Spectrometry (LC-MS/MS), to verify the suitability of NIR to rapidly analyze a large numbers of maize samples for FBs contamination. The paper describes experiments well carried out and the conclusions are correct, showing the reliability of this new methods. However, the paper needs to be deeply revised for the English, that often is very difficult to understand. Also, the way to present data needs to be revised: . I would separate completely Results and Discussion sections in order to have more clear both parts, that in this version are extremely hard to follow. Finally, minor revisions are reported below. ABSTRACT Line 27: the mycotoxins are not phytopathogens. The fungi that produce them are phytopathogens, not the metabolites produced. Eventually, they can be defined phytotoxic compunds. Line28: Fusarium moniliforme is not acceptable at all as definition. It is an old nomenclature. Along the whole paper F. moniliforme must be replaced with F. verticillioides INTRODUCTION Line 47: Alternaria don’t produce fumonisins B Line48: Fusarium moniliforme is not acceptable at all as definition. It is an old nomenclature. Along the whole paper F. moniliforme must be replaced with F. verticillioides Line 50: the mycotoxins are not phytopathogens. The fungi that produce them are phytopathogens, not the metabolites produced. Eventually, they can be defined phytotoxic compunds. Line 84: replace the word corn with the word maize and replace it along the paper REFERENCE Are the references below reported correctly? Line 283: 1. RHEEDER J. Fusarium moniliforme and Fumonisins in Corn in Relation to Human Esophageal Cancer in Transkei. 1992; Line 285 2. BACON CW, NELSON PE. Fumonisin Production in Corn by Toxigenic Strains of 286 Fusarium moniliforme and Fusarium proliferatum. J Food Prot [Internet]. 1994;57(6):514–21. Available from: https://doi.org/10.4315/0362-028X-57.6.514 Line 288 3. JACKSON, L.; JABLONSKI J. Fumonisins. In: MAGAN, N.; OLSEN M (Org. ., editor. Mycotoxins in food. Cambridge: Woodhead Publishing; 2004. p. 367–91. Reviewer #2: The manuscript is written very clearly and appropriate methods are used to come to the results. However, it has one major drawback: The manuscript does not present any new information. If I compare the manuscript to that of e.g. Gaspardo et al. (2012, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.foodchem.2012.06.078). A similar method is used and I see exactly the same graphs and the descriptions are even very similar E.g. In Gaspardo et al. (2012) it was written: The data set was organised in a matrix with 143 rows and 926 + 1 columns, combining spectral and chemical data for each sample. In the current manuscript, it is written: The calibration set was arranged in a matrix with 236 rows and 4200 + 1 columns, combining spectral and chemical data for each sample. I can understand that this is indeed the way to deal with this information. But, the main issue is that I cannot really find new findings in this manuscript. You use the same methods for the same toxins in the same matrix. In addition, in 2018, Levasseur-Garcia, presented a clear review on this topic summarizing the toxins and matrices that could be measured with this method (doi: 10.3390/toxins10010038). In addition, the model presented in PONE-D-20-04995 seems to fit the data quiet well, but it is never mentioned which wavelengths or regions in the spectrum are important for toxin quantification. I suggested a major revision, since I would like to give the authors the chance to significantly improve their work. Now it is merely a copy of what has been done already a lot of times. If they can include e.g. new toxins in a new matrix, or detect mixtures of toxins… or if they can compare several other machine learning technique or new deep learning methods, so that the manuscript had some added value compared to what has been published in the past, I am willing to review this manuscript. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-20-04995R1 Multivariate method for prediction of fumonisins B1 and B2 and zearalenone in Brazilian maize using Near Infrared Spectroscopy (NIR) PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Mallmann, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 21 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Vijai Gupta, PhD in Microbiology Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): MS needs additional corrections before it may be considered for publication in PLOS One. Kindly do the needful changes and submit your revised MS. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I revised the first version of the paper and I think the authors much improved the original paper. Therefore I dont have any further criticism that would not allow the publication of the paper Reviewer #2: ADVISE: MAJOR REVISION. Although the manuscript improved a lot compared to the previous version, there are still some important changes necessary before it can be published. In your answer to my first question you mention that the novelty in the article lies in the fact that Many studies are aimed at countries with different climates and frequencies of positivity. Do you mean that samples with ZEN/FB from Brazil will be characterized by another spectrum of samples from another region (if the concentrations are similar)? In my opinion the shift in reflection caused by the presence of a certain toxin at a certain concentration is not highly depended on the region were you took the sample? Please explain in your discussion why it is important that you also do this analysis with samples from Brazil. Another answer was: Regarding the investigation of spectral bands, as mentioned in the manuscript, this information remains to be clarified, so we used the entire spectrum. However, work approaching this matter is under development by our research group and it will be promptly published. Ok you used the entire spectrum to fit the models, but based on the loadings of the PCA analysis and/or coefficients from the PLSR you can easily define characteristic bands for a certain toxin, I want to see this in the article before it can be published, otherwise it does not has an added value for other researchers, the only thing they now know is that you can predict these toxins. But it is important to compare these results with other findings…. In Figure 1 you show the spectrum of the fumonisin samples and of the zearalenone samples. It does not have an added value to divide it into “fumonisin” and “ZEN” samples as the samples you analysed for FB can also contain ZEN and vice versa (and also other toxins)? Did you analyse certain samples for both ZEN and FB, since both toxins often co-occur? In Figure 2 you show the results of the PCA analysis, however this figure is not very clear. Is it possible to make a 2D biplot and color the dots according to the concentration of ZEN/FB and then also draw the most important loadings so that the reader gains insight into which wavelengths are important for high ZEN or FUM concentrations Can you include the models (coefficients of the PLS model) in supplementary data so that they can be tested by the readers? I think you can reduce the number of figures, Figures 2-4 can be deleted, Fig. 5 replace it according to the previous comment. Fig 8-10 can be in the supplementary data. In the discussion you do not have to refer to figures L365 ZEA => ZEN ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Multivariate method for prediction of fumonisins B1 and B2 and zearalenone in Brazilian maize using Near Infrared Spectroscopy (NIR) PONE-D-20-04995R2 Dear Dr. Mallmann, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Vijai Gupta, PhD in Microbiology Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): All the editorial, as well as reviewers comments, have been addressed. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-04995R2 Multivariate method for prediction of fumonisins B1 and B2 and zearalenone in Brazilian maize using Near Infrared Spectroscopy (NIR) Dear Dr. Mallmann: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Vijai Gupta Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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