Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 16, 2020 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-20-32538 Community health worker knowledge, attitudes and practices towards COVID-19: learnings from an online cross-sectional survey using a digital health platform, UpSCALE, in Mozambique PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kevin Nicholas Baker , Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 10 December. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Francesco Di Gennaro Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2.We note that you have indicated that data from this study are available upon request. PLOS only allows data to be available upon request if there are legal or ethical restrictions on sharing data publicly. For information on unacceptable data access restrictions, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-unacceptable-data-access-restrictions. In your revised cover letter, please address the following prompts: a) If there are ethical or legal restrictions on sharing a de-identified data set, please explain them in detail (e.g., data contain potentially identifying or sensitive patient information) and who has imposed them (e.g., an ethics committee). Please also provide contact information for a data access committee, ethics committee, or other institutional body to which data requests may be sent. b) If there are no restrictions, please upload the minimal anonymized data set necessary to replicate your study findings as either Supporting Information files or to a stable, public repository and provide us with the relevant URLs, DOIs, or accession numbers. Please see http://www.bmj.com/content/340/bmj.c181.long for guidelines on how to de-identify and prepare clinical data for publication. For a list of acceptable repositories, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-recommended-repositories. We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. 3.Thank you for stating the following in the Funding Section of your manuscript: [upSCALE is funded by UK Aid (through UNICEF) and this work was funded through internal Malaria Consortium funding.] We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: [The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.] We note that one or more of the authors are employed by a commercial company: Dimagi, Cape Town, South Africa
Please also include the following statement within your amended Funding Statement. “The funder provided support in the form of salaries for authors [insert relevant initials], but did not have any additional role in the study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript. The specific roles of these authors are articulated in the ‘author contributions’ section.” If your commercial affiliation did play a role in your study, please state and explain this role within your updated Funding Statement. 2. Please also provide an updated Competing Interests Statement declaring this commercial affiliation along with any other relevant declarations relating to employment, consultancy, patents, products in development, or marketed products, etc. Within your Competing Interests Statement, please confirm that this commercial affiliation does not alter your adherence to all PLOS ONE policies on sharing data and materials by including the following statement: "This does not alter our adherence to PLOS ONE policies on sharing data and materials.” (as detailed online in our guide for authors http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/competing-interests) . If this adherence statement is not accurate and there are restrictions on sharing of data and/or materials, please state these. Please note that we cannot proceed with consideration of your article until this information has been declared. Please include both an updated Funding Statement and Competing Interests Statement in your cover letter. We will change the online submission form on your behalf. Please know it is PLOS ONE policy for corresponding authors to declare, on behalf of all authors, all potential competing interests for the purposes of transparency. PLOS defines a competing interest as anything that interferes with, or could reasonably be perceived as interfering with, the full and objective presentation, peer review, editorial decision-making, or publication of research or non-research articles submitted to one of the journals. Competing interests can be financial or non-financial, professional, or personal. Competing interests can arise in relationship to an organization or another person. Please follow this link to our website for more details on competing interests: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/competing-interests 4. Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please move it to the Methods section and delete it from any other section. Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript. 5. We note you have included a table to which you do not refer in the text of your manuscript. Please ensure that you refer to Table 1, 2 and 3 in your text; if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the Table. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Dear authors follow reviewers suggestion to improve your article [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript describe KAP of community health workers (Known as APEs in Mozambique) regarding Covid19 pandemic using the UpScale app. This is relevant and very timely as may improve the APEs conduct with regards to covid19. A just have a few minor comments: Methods section Paragh 1: Please explain who Dimagi is (a private enterprise?) Paragh 2: The authors state that "The SMS messages were accompanied by simple videos demonstrating how to install and complete the KAP survey on the application"... Could this be also a reason for the low response rate among the APEs? Is yes, please include in your discussion points. Results Paragh 1: There was a particular reason for the particular very low response rate in Inhambane province? Discussion Paragraphs 1 and 3: the authors indicate that this KAP survey took place during the same time that Mozambique was effectively in lock down. This is not factually correct as Mozambique never entered in a complete and effective lock down (level 4 restrictions). I would recommend to rephrase the statements. Thanks Reviewer #2: Short Title: I recommend the short title also include "..in Mozambique" at the end Abstract: 1. Recommend to include the number of respondents and then indicate (28%) in parentheses. 2. Abbreviate percent as % Manuscript Technical approach: The study aims to evaluate the knowledge, attitudes and practices on COVID19 of community Health workers in 3 provinces of Mozambique using an adapted phone App. 1. Introduction- organize the literature review section by theme(Knowledge, attitudes and practices) so the text flow more clearly. Study justification should be improved (?e.g.- to understand knowledge gaps among APEs and tailor interventions to identified gaps) Describe what is the basic level of education of an APE Did APE's receive any COVID training before or during the time data was being collected? This should be explained 2.Methods: Specify location of provinces mention- (North, South, central region of the country) Clarify what is meant by " ...rapidly expanded the upSCALE platform". What does expansion mean?- the sentence needs to be rephrased and better explained what was done. when was this done? What was the main reason for expansion? Enrollment or participants responded over a 2 month period (from June to August); During this time- did participants receive any training that could influence the APEs existing knowledge? what was the response rate per month (i.e how many respondents in June, July and in August?) How did you gauge that the survey was "respondent friendly"? the last paragraph of the methods section (page7) should be moved up earlier in the description of the program that was set up for the APEs. 3. Results: Low number of respondents in Inhambane province- are APE's evenly distributed across all three provinces? What was the response rate in Inhambane compared to the 2 other provinces? Were there provincial differences in how respondents answered the questions? 15% of respondents got covid information through the upscale APP: Were the SMS messages about COVID19 sent to ALL APEs? If so, why did only 15% report this as their source of information? - Statistical analysis: has been performed appropriately and rigorously. Recommendations for improvement by reformatting tables 2, 3 and 4 (include the number and % for each option). Were all questions answered? (i.e were there any gaps in responses to questions?) Table 3: for question- on risk groups for COVID:-> recommend that authors include a row to indicate the number and % who gave all correct answers. In terms of formatting for all sections of the tables- Recommend that the authors highlight the rows that show number and % of all correct answers given PPE was reported in decreasing frequency from June to August: Please include the numbers and % for each month to enable readers understand the statement better. The question is whether there were fewer respondents in August compared to June. This is why it is important to describe how many respondents took part in each month. The paragraph right below table 4 does not seem appropriate or relevant for the results section nor does it respond to the objectives of the study and recommend either removing it or including a clear description of the objectives of the study which would include assessing how the KAP findings were used. Discussion: Were all APEs sent SMS messages? Why did only 15% say they learnt about covid through this method? Clarify if there were any education or training sessions that took place for APEs on COVID before or during data collection. The proportion of respondent who answered each specific question is reported to be lower than elsewhere: Please include the range seen in other places and compare with what was found in this study. Recheck the grammar and spelling- in some places COVID is misspelled as COIVD; shorted instead of shortened etc. Conclusion: "The upscale App , can feasibly adapted to support CHWs in the COVID-19 pandemic" - this statement does not seem to be supported by the objectives /rationale of the study. Feasibility as stated is also questionable since only 28% of expected participants responded. The limitation of it being a self-administered questionnaire was not mentioned and could go against feasibility of using such approaches. This has not been adequately discussed on how or whether this can be dealt with. 4. Authors have stated that they made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available 5. In general the manuscript is presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English- save for abbreviations, grammatical and spelling errors that should be corrected in several sections of the document; recommend an independent reader to make the corrections. Ethical considerations: Reported to have been covered under an umbrella protocol. Participants gave consent. It was not clear whether the respondents are identifiable and how respondents were anonymized. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Pedro Aide Reviewer #2: Yes: Charity Ndalama Alfredo, MBChB, MPH [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
|
| Revision 1 |
|
Community health worker knowledge, attitudes and practices towards COVID-19: learnings from an online cross-sectional survey using a digital health platform, UpSCALE, in Mozambique PONE-D-20-32538R1 Dear Dr. Baker, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Francesco Di Gennaro Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): dear authors congratulations Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have provided clear responses and the manuscript has improved with the suggested reviews. I have no further comments. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Pedro Aide Reviewer #2: Yes: Charity Ndalama Alfredo MBChC, MPH |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-20-32538R1 Community health worker knowledge, attitudes and practices towards COVID-19: learnings from an online cross-sectional survey using a digital health platform, UpSCALE, in Mozambique Dear Dr. Baker: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Francesco Di Gennaro Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .