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PONE-D-20-39555 Interpreting coronary artery disease GWAS results: A functional genomics approach assessing biological significance PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hartmann, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 21 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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This study was supported by National Institutes of Health National Institute of General Medical Science Pharmacogenetics Research Network [Grant U01 GM092655] and the National Center for Advancing Translational Sciences [TL1 TR001069]. The GTEx Project was supported by the Common Fund of the Office of the Director of the National Institutes of Health, and by NCI, NHGRI, NHLBI, NIDA, NIMH, and NINDS. The data used for the analyses described in this manuscript were obtained from: the GTEx Portal and dbGaP accession number phs000424. For CATHGEN, clinical data originated from the 604 Duke Databank for Cardiovascular Disease (DDCD) and biological samples originated from the Duke Cardiac CATHeterization (CATHGEN) study. Funding support for the Genetic Mediators of Metabolic CVD Risk was provided by NHLBI grant RC2 HL101621 (William E. Kraus). The data used for the analyses described in this manuscript were obtained from the dbGaP accession number phs0000703.v1.p1. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript “Interpreting coronary artery disease GWAS results: A functional genomics approach assessing biological significance” has an overall goal of addressing an important question, namely, when GWAS identifies multiple variants in a given locus is it due to the underlying LD or because of multiple variants with independent/only partially related functional effects? It also seeks to determine if incorporating tissue-wide eQTLs and splicing QTLs (sQTLs) is a “better” way to determine the underlying gene for a given non-coding locus. All of these efforts as a concept are important as we think about the non-coding genome and primarily non-coding variants identified from GWAS. The strengths of the study are the overall conceptual framework posed (with caveat above that the analyses presented only take us so far); the careful incorporation of GTEx data coupled with individual level data obtained from the CATHGEN study through dbGaP; and the careful thought put into the genomic interpretations. But while the overall conceptual framework and potential hypotheses are important, the manuscript’s impact is weakened due to the overall descriptive data presented; the expansive results section for primarily relatively straightforward bioinformatics work that would be done when evaluating any genetic variant; and the lack of functional validation of the proposed model outside of eQTLs to show that this approach is “better” than the comparator approach (which in this paper is just comparison to annotation in the Nikolay et al paper). In fact, for many of their SNPs, a simple search in dbSNP/UCSC confirms the gene that the SNP is in (not sure why the Nikolay paper annotated it differently). As such, the comparator being the Nikolay paper doesn’t help us determine if this method is “better”. More minor issues include: 1) To address the above issue of the comparator being “GWAS annotated” but from a single paper, the authors should consider other phenotypes to perform these analyses; 2) The results section is very long and could be summarized more succinctly; 3) Throughout, there needs to be more formal statistics done (and more statistics methods)…for example, in Table 2, ANOVA does not make sense for the model for association between SNPs and MI; what are p-values/effect sizes/directionality for eQTLs, for “heat map” for clustering and showing that some variants have eQTLs in multiple tissues, etc. 4) For the LIPA analyses, why use MI when the original variants are CAD variants? 5) The LIPA expression models are interesting and statistically a good way to further validate that multiple SNPs in a locus have independent effects and should be done across all the loci. 6) For the LIPA expression models, need more formal statistics to show that adding SNPs improves models for expression (i.e. AIC, BIC, etc.) 7) Overall, the manuscript could use an eye towards editorial improvement (uses colloquial language in several places like calling them “GWAS hits”, there are grammatical errors, results section is densely presented; catheterization in methods is spelled incorrectly; Wilcoxon is spelled “wilcoxin”; the test in R is wilcox.test not “wilcoxin.test”, etc.) 8) How do the authors interpret the paradoxical results for rs1412444 on LIPA expression and MI? 9) How were eQTLs in GTEx defined? (again gets back to inclusion of more formal statistics). It’s hard to determine if some of the differences between variants/across tissues could just be variations around statistical significance without these more granular results. Reviewer #2: In the manuscript entitled “Interpreting coronary artery disease GWAS results: A functional genomics approach assessing biological significance”, the authors explored the complexity of each of CAD loci by use of tissue specific RNA sequencing data from GTEx to identify genes that exhibit altered expression patterns in the context of GWAS significant loci,and expanded the list of candidate genes from the 75 currently annotated by GWAS to 245. The following papers can be cited and followed for the meta-analytic procedures(if the data is not enough available, at least DISCUSSION should be added as the LIMITATION of this study with enough citation to support the viewpoints): Ref 1: Wu Y, et al. Multi-trait analysis for genome-wide association study of five psychiatric disorders. Transl Psychiatry. 2020 Jun 30;10(1):209. Ref 2:Jiang L, et al. Sex-Specific Association of Circulating Ferritin Level and Risk of Type 2 Diabetes: A Dose-Response Meta-Analysis of Prospective Studies..J Clin Endocrinol Metab. 2019 Oct 1;104(10):4539-4551. Ref 3: Xu M, et al. Quantitative assessment of the effect of angiotensinogen gene polymorphisms on the risk of coronary heart disease. Circulation. 2007 Sep 18;116(12):1356-66 Trans-ethnitic and trans-trait meta-analysis of cardiometabolic traitscan be referred to Ref 1. Subgroup analyses based on sex, age, race, gene dosage can be referred to Ref 2. and3 Integrating GWAS signals with eQTL from GTEX or pQTLs is a good strategy to exploring the causality of the genetic varients in the development of cardiometabolic traits. But I strong suggest to do causal inference analysis to see if the GWAS signals are causally triggering the develop,ent of CAD through mediating the expression of given genes in specific tissues. In addition, the significantly associated SNPs may be used to predict disease susceptibility in the context of its influence of gene expression,therefore, the authors may explore the possibility to conduct a machine-learning model to predict CAD risk or cardiometalobic traits based these significant SNPs. For this reason, the authors may cite the following papers to follow these references’ procedure to construct a standard prediction model based on the significant SNPs (probably include the gene expression information). Deep learning is a hot topic in dissecting the genome variants’ roles in the phenome. Especially deep learning method is a very promising way to predict disease risk based on clinical information and genetic biomarkers(If deep learning can not be used, please discuss as the LIMITATION of this study with enough citation to support the viewpoints). Ref 4:Yu H, et al. LEPR hypomethylation is significantly associated with gastric cancer in males.Exp Mol Pathol. 2020 Oct;116:104493. Ref 5:Liu M, et al. A multi-model deep convolutional neural network for automatic hippocampus segmentation and classification in Alzheimer's disease.Neuroimage. 2020 Mar;208:116459. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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